Chap 14 on Pg 136 Entrapment : An Extremely Dark Advni FF

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2filmy

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Posted: 7 years ago

#1131

you know Chitra I would have been so happy if his elsewhere was burned

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2filmy

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Posted: 7 years ago

#1132

yes I thought it was inspired from the kitchen scene. but your version is much better without the hi tech additions. Yash did the best thing ever possible by giving her hand in Advay s. he can take some of his rights.

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2filmy

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Posted: 7 years ago

#1133

I want her to choose Advay without even thinking. it'll be a proper tug of war I can feel it. I really didn't know some people choose brides with the suhagan planetary position. they all should get shock treatment

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Posted: 7 years ago

#1134

Originally posted by: ChitraGS

thanks rasika for the comments and for all ur lovely words,... Oh u cried, 🤗, I am deeply touched to know that so many of my readers are coming back to say that different parts of teh story made them cry, for a writer it is a moment of great accomplishment to know i managed to move u with my words...so thansk for saying all these wonderful words... But yes what happens to Chndini or Advay or both and who from and why all will be out ...as i said my story is diff to the original story

Oh thansk will keep an eye out on twtter for u 😳

Oh Thanks for appreciating my knowledge on this matter, TBH astrology is my passion, i have learnt it from a very young age and it is my love in a way ...so its stems from my own passion and devotion, everything i have said or written so far in this story ... everything is from teh heart and hence why maybe it is striking a chord with everyone...but it really means a lot to know that you liked it and thansk a lot for all ur kinds words of appreciation, truly means a lot 😳

❤️ Chitra

PS I have replied ot ur previous comment for chapter 10 and 11 on page 135, so pelse do read it when u get a minute 😳, and sorry for the delay in reply

U know chitra ur story made me cry n laugh as well, everything is so to the point.

Gr8 to hear that u have learnt astrology that too at young age 👏hence u can to put life in d scene and we as reader finding scenes more connected.

I dont know why i wanted sad ending for IPKKND3 means chandni dies at d end but surely at d end not in between show but i never said as there was so much negativity about d show and i always felt that its different lovestory.

We have read so many happy lovestory but i expected intense lovestory in ipk3 but unfortunately indians aunties can not digest intense story. I think i should thank u for thinking something different than d usual.

Thx Rasika

Edited by rasikasarisha - 7 years ago

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2filmy

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Posted: 7 years ago

#1135

I know vipra means a brahmin but people like PP won't know. he just apes the west mindlessly. sorry he doesn't actually have a mind at all.
I understand they worship the art so they'll never insult it by false facts. guru is always honored.

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ChitraGS

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Posted: 7 years ago

#1136

Originally posted by: 2filmy
have you ever met anyone like Advay in your life ?

WHAT OMG NO REY BABA !!! NEVER HAHA!! AND THANK GOD FOR THAT 😆

But having said that the Advay who is deeply religious, who values his family, a man with a golden heart who will cudldle a Muniya and who takes great pride in Chandini ...the Advay who is always there for Shikha or Murli etc...that Advay is deffo inspired by my grandfather...

I remember my grandpa would sit beside me all night sometimes when i would be down with a fever, and apply vicks etc if i had cold, i cannot remember having done anything without my grandpa, and he awas like that with all his seven children and all of us grand children, always had time for us...during my tenth board exams he used to sit outside my exam hall for all teh hours fo the exam, and just cuddle me and tell me i will do well , jsut that support, taht perennial support and love and warmth that he had I think my Advay too has all of that ...and I am sure my grandpa must have been a passionate as they had seven children 😆😆, but not kinky but when his gaze met my grandmothers gaze, it felt like so divine and beautiful, love like that is missing in today world Priya, that is true love, though i had a love marriage, and its beautiful...yet i think my grandparents had the mose beautiful love story ever... and i wish everyone finds that kind of love in life...So yes all the warm cozy bits of Advay, who doesnt care abt caste and religion and economic status etc that is my grandpa. 😳

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2filmy

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Posted: 7 years ago

#1137

thanks for clearing my doubt so well. it's so ironic that he has tridevi blessing in him yet he's so alone lost and doesn't have peace at all. I can feel how lonely he is. for someone his age to seek death is so painful

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Posted: 7 years ago

#1138

Originally posted by: 2filmy
I want her to choose Advay without even thinking. it'll be a proper tug of war I can feel it. I really didn't know some people choose brides with the suhagan planetary position. they all should get shock treatment

OH god its very common Priya, and it is disgusting trust me, jsut makes me sick that such people exist