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Sharda

@srdb5

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Neha

@Loving2Missing2

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Posted: 7 years ago

beautifully written, Sharda. 👏

The conflict in her mind scripted beautifully. Pls don't ever stop writing. we are waiting for more.

you have a way with words!!!

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Pixiepixel11

@Pixiepixel11

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+ 32

Posted: 7 years ago

Wow awesome loved it so much.

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deepa

@deeps_92

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+ 8

Posted: 7 years ago

Lovely os... I loved part where chandni had asked all right questions...exactly my thoughts

Ps - not able to like the post... IF can be irritating at times...consider my likes too

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sivani

@soumyamurali

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Posted: 7 years ago

Fab OS Sharda. U know In the show the CVs always confused the viewers about Advay's POV reg. this baby. sometimes they made him like he is angry with her for leaving the baby n trying to marry some other person for money. And some times they made it look like he is against her having a baby out of wedlock which was kind of character butchering as it was totally against the Advay they showed in the initial 30 odd episodes.

I expected them to clear this in the end. But they opted for that crap Sasha track. Even there also they didn't try to show him in good light.

Ur OS has all those questions n answers we wanted to c in the show. Well written Shot. 👏

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2filmy

@2filmy

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Posted: 7 years ago

OMG Sharda u have written a marvelous os dear
this had the whole Baby issue wrapped up so well
she asked all the right questions
he gave all the logical answers
I loved how u cleared the issue so well

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2filmy

@2filmy

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Posted: 7 years ago

about the is itself WOW it's just wonderful
I loved how you portrayed the whole scene
I wanted to see these emotions in Advay
I wanted her to voice her thoughts
I wanted similar dialogues too

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2filmy

@2filmy

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Posted: 7 years ago

every thing about this os is so perfect
I have no words for this

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2filmy

@2filmy

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Posted: 7 years ago

I just applaud you for thinking to write the story on this concept

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Sharda

@srdb5

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Originally posted by: LovingAHA2017
beautifully written, Sharda. 👏
The conflict in her mind scripted beautifully. Pls don't ever stop writing. we are waiting for more.
you have a way with words!!!

Thank you Neha Di for your kind words. Your appreciation really made my day. As long as I have you guys as my readers I can never stop writing. You guys are gem of a person. 😊

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