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mahin

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Posted: 7 years ago

#461

Din to hamare bhi Mubarak ho gaye. loved the update. plz update soon

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amortentia15

@amortentia15

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Posted: 7 years ago

#462

hiii Neha! i am back to your FF...looking forward to the journey again😊

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2filmy

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Posted: 7 years ago

#463

I am reading the story from the start again

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Ayesha Khan

@Anraysha

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Posted: 7 years ago

#464

Neha it is a Blissful, Beautiful, Erotic,Bold,Sensuous Diwali gift indeed 😉 your new chapter, Once again Praising your pics adding senses,👏 I have got seriously Addicted of your Writing, I wish you were the real Script, Story Writer of ISS PYAR KO KYA NAAM DOON 3.😳

BARUN-SHIVANI 'S chemistry would have been more glorified, highlighted.❤️ The Pool incident was really Scary,and Heartwreching😕 too,as Advay got tensed but at the same time He has been encouraging her,Pampering her,Advising her to be Brave,not to be Scared,Panic.keep writing Dear,waiting for your next chapter 😛

LOVED YOUR update sooo very much ,Awesome,Amazing,Exclusive. ⭐️👏

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2filmy

@2filmy

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Posted: 7 years ago

#465

will start my comments from today
will take some time to comment on the full update

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Neha

@Loving2Missing2

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Posted: 7 years ago

#466

Originally posted by: 2filmy
will start my comments from today
will take some time to comment on the full update

Yes Priyu. No issues.

I was wondering why no commnets from you yet. But absolutely no issues from my side.

I like your commenting a lot because then I write the character analysis which I otherwise do with my sweet daughter if and when she gets time.

For me with my age now, you're like a daughter itself. write at your own best time but do write. I'll be waiting.

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Neha

@Loving2Missing2

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Posted: 7 years ago

#467

Originally posted by: Anraysha
Neha it is a Blissful, Beautiful, Erotic,Bold,Sensuous Diwali gift indeed 😉 your new chapter, Once again Praising your pics adding senses,👏 I have got seriously Addicted of your Writing, I wish you were the real Script, Story Writer of ISS PYAR KO KYA NAAM DOON 3.😳
BARUN-SHIVANI 'S chemistry would have been more glorified, highlighted.❤️ The Pool incident was really Scary,and Heartwreching😕 too,as Advay got tensed but at the same time He has been encouraging her,Pampering her,Advising her to be Brave,not to be Scared,Panic.keep writing Dear,waiting for your next chapter 😛
LOVED YOUR update sooo very much ,Awesome,Amazing,Exclusive. ⭐️👏

Thanks so much for having such a lovely heart...every time you make me feel very good at heart with your comments.

Why don't we start discussing character analysis of the FF n they maybe it will be more exciting for you as reader n me as writer.

This is only a request n no mandate or pressure

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2filmy

@2filmy

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Posted: 7 years ago

#468

sorry Di
I was so tired and sleepy yesterday
that I couldn't comment at all
and I want to comment with full energy
as your story deserves that

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Neha

@Loving2Missing2

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Posted: 7 years ago

#469

Originally posted by: pentu82
hi neha!!

just finished reading all the chapters of your ff!!

Once i started, i couldnt stop!

Your writing is going from strength to strength!! I love how your story is progressing!! looking fwd to reading more!

Thanks so much, Sudha. Did you like the repentance part as you were expecting after the first chapter comment? Do you find any lacunas or strong areas in which way the characters are growing/changing?