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2filmy

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Posted: 7 years ago

#291

finally he left for office in a better state of mind
Shikha was scared but Chandni calmed her down
she asked Veer to go with her
Shikha too teased Veer to come with her
Chandni convinced and ordered Veer to go with Shikha
soon she had t go to the function
neither maasi nor Pooja was there to go with her
naani understood Chandni was scared
so she explained and reassured her
I loved how she calmed down Chandni and convinced her to go
she took the stone with her for support
she reached there and Mohan told her to call him if she needed him for anything

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2filmy

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Posted: 7 years ago

#292

as Soon as she reached a crowd gathered around her
she had a massive panic attack then
the signs were so clear in her
poor girl the crowd bothered her so much
but no one understood it
she called out to Dev and Advay was restless
they have such a pure deep connection
Mohan called Advay and told him the details
Advay was anxious and angry and asked for Veer
Mohan told Veer and he too left for the venue
Mohan informed naani too and she too left for there
finally her Dev reached her before she broke down
good that he dispersed the crowd

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2filmy

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Posted: 7 years ago

#293

she was mumbling but he broke he out of her trance
finally he calmed her down and she was normal
he encouraged her to go and give her speech
how well he managed her was excellent to see
this time the full family was here with her
she felt so happy at this thought and all for Dev
as he had given her all these relations
she gave such a beautiful speech and Advay called the press and media to cover it
how thoughtful of him she would earn her fame now
I just loved her excellent speech
Dev was with her all along and supported her so well
she gave the full credit to Advay when naani praised her

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2filmy

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Posted: 7 years ago

#294

maasi asked about her panic attack
but Advay just brushed it away
he didn't want them to know about her panic attacks
he wanted to keep it private between themselves
Chandni told Pooja Advay is her bholenaath
this was a very deep thing to say and Advay heard it and was so touched by it
Advay took her for Diwali shopping and as usual she was worried about them all
but Nani gave permission and they both went
I loved how the shop keeper pacified him
haha she was embarrassed to change before him
but she had no other option
he saw her changing and loved all she wore
and then taught her all the remaining poses
and they had a roaring love making session

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2filmy

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Posted: 7 years ago

#295

phew that was the longest review till date for me I think

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2filmy

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Posted: 7 years ago

#296

u touched so many things in this update di

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Neha

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Posted: 7 years ago

#297

Originally posted by: 2filmy
phew that was the longest review till date for me I think

LOL Priyu I understand... it was pretty long write up for me too. I heaved a sigh when I posted😆

I hope you liked the way different points are touched up... some lost points are brought back and loops getting closed in my FF

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Neha

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Posted: 7 years ago

#298

Hope all you gals reading this FF like the way different points are touched up.

As my disclaimer says... a story should not become a regular M&B romance novel... there have to be different layers to the characters yet the basic characterisation remaining intact.

One of the drawback of the actual show was that character continuation or slow transition was not maintained... which was strong point in first season. Even when Manorama maami was sweet and helpful there was a strong reason and scene supporting her actions. Subhadra devi till end did not have sudden change of her cruel heart😡.

Be it Maasi, be it Miku... characters very rarely change overnight in reality... so why should Maasi be completely goody goody or Miku suddenly very responsible just because he met bro and found his love...

I am maintaining the character continuation. Maasi was fueling advay's anger earlier, she does now even though she has accepted Chandani. Advay never physically harmed chandani earlier in spite of Maasi's fueling, now he wants to protect her completely.

Miku is gem at heart; but irresponsible in actions... His father was scolding him earlier; now Advay is like a father figure to him and will channel him to fulfilling his potential.

he cared hugely for his Ammi and naturally he will care hugely for Bhabhi, too. But due to his irresponsible ways, both fall into trouble. Advay is angry because he has genuinely trusted his most loved one with his other most loved one.

Her OCD vs his being filthy had suddenly disappeared after Allahabad in the show. Like Mumbai Advay was not just different in clothes; was starkly different in his ways... which was shown so nicely in initial loved episodes( his eating bread and sauce, or cup noodles...

Later "throw you out vs I return back" tracks and then horrible Sasha and Jimmy papa tracks ate up the basic characterization shown... His room was filthy earlier and she didn't approve it. ...While love grows deeper and deeper, such 'tu tu main" main due to contrasting habits is bound to happen.

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Neha

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Posted: 7 years ago

#299

I hope all you gals also liked the dramatic yet very much feasible way that her PTSD is triggered. If he was mobbed by press upon his arrival in Mumbai; she's important status figure now, so she gets mobbed in a social gathering.

His reaching the hotel room in actual show in Pub PTSD attack was rather confusingly dramatic. Here, he does hear her call but he will not know where to reach her... so a trusted driver gives him information.

Advay as always is her rock strong support. She can lean on him entirely. The symbolism connects with his giving her the small rock with their names engraved.

Advay is man of actions... so he naturally manages the press properly, handles the show organisers well, then he stops bad publicity and promotes good publicity which naturally any business tycoon easily does.

He doesn't let Naani and Maasi know about her syndrome; since it will disclose her kidnapping and open another pandora's box.

She naturally gives credit to him because she accepts that she can fly high as long as he strongly supports her from beneath.

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2filmy

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Posted: 7 years ago

#300

Originally posted by: LovingAHA2017

LOL Priyu I understand... it was pretty long write up for me too. I heaved a sigh when I posted😆

I hope you liked the way different points are touched up... some lost points are brought back and loops getting closed in my FF

I loved the way u touched so many points
u kept them all so close to their characters
I am happy u r closing all the loops vin your ff