Originally posted by: mayukatta
Haven't read the seventh chapter yet..
So sorry for the late Se bhi late reply on sixth update. I wasn't feeling my cheery self so postponed giving reply.. I don't want to give a reply half heartedly bcoz your update deserves the most heart felt comment.
It's been almost two days that I read your update and now when Iam commenting I didn't find the need to go back and give a look to remember the scenes bcoz everything is still so fresh in my mind , such was your description. You have done a great job and nailed each and every scene.
The way Advay got disappointed bcoz he can't give his wife the special night he promised. Chandini Ka rootna ... APNI Nahi hua ? Wonderful scene.
The whole karvavchaut setting is good. Just adding the right bit of family moments. Shikha completely being herself. Advay outburst at pooja made me raise my eyebrows but we can ignore it saying he was so concerned about our chandini or may be that scene was indeed necessary for the beautiful explanation of karvavchaut ...
You know ... During rain seeding episode ... Everyone went a head and researched every thing about it... If any asks anything about that in future we can give them all the info they need. Why ? Bcoz this man there makes us do such crazy things. Your update doesn't feel like out of story to me at all.. you had it all.. it just feels like continuation of the show. So this is Advay.. the same advay.. now so we are equally crazy here too. From now on if anyone says a word about karvavchaut.. we can give tanatan answers and your beautiful explanation word to word.
It was a very good scene. And this is very important step in their character growth and their journey towards each other.
Next comes the epic scene. How did you even think of that. I wouldn't ... It was so original. The whole thought if taking sun as the live fire . It was pure , soulful and most meaningful way for them , our adni , to complete their marriage. I don't want talk more about it bcoz the scene itself screams what a wonderful writer you are. This is something I would remember forever. Your words formed such a beautiful picture in my mind I wish I could take a printout and send you. I tell you it was magical .. serene..
Now... You know how I have my reservations reading hot stuff when barun sobti is involved.. somehow you make it easy for me. May be.. your whole point even writing such scenes us more about building trust . . Making the connection. Healing eachother... And not about how hot and steaming the scene is playing . I read your and Priya conversation and your explanations are beautiful.. it made me understand the point more and I agree with you.
Phew... Looks like Iam done here. I can go on talking more and more . But then I would be repeating myself like... How beautiful.. wonderful... Meaningful ... Your update is. So let me just say.. 'Neha ! I loved your update dear🤗'