Trials Of Fire!! IPKKND3 Untold Saga Of ADNi Chapter 1 to 15 - Page 14

Originally posted by: rajatshweta

Wow, I am so in love with your choice of pics... they are so apt and placed in the right place in all the chapters. Lovely update Neha..

Sorry, I am currently travelling dear. I find it difficult to post my comments through mobile (half the screen the keypad covers, and half the screen the Formatting icon covers... and the Autocorrect mode in mobile is another irritating thing... I find it irritating to scroll and scroll to type and check if the correct word is typed or not.. So pardon me for not saying much.

Originally posted by: LovingAHA2017

Priyu, when I say you are the sweetest one, it's so true. You are really sweet. Thanking me as a writer?

My pleasure, love! And thanks to you for being so sweet and kind!

When I have read good books, I have thanked the writers in my mind. yet to hear it from you, truly touches the heart.

Let's make a pact. Let's always always stay friends!

aww u r making me blush
i am not as sweet as u think
i just say what i feel
your story touches my heart
oh we will always be friends

1. AWESOME,Amazing,Lovely, sooo Romantic,❤️ ☺️just what I really want to watch or read in a fiction.Keep writing,updating Neha,I am in love with your AdNi Love story completely, I am an ardent lover of AdNi,serious fan of Love Stories ,full of passion.No words Dear,Just out of this World your FF 👏⭐️👍🏼 it's obviously Clap from me 👏

loved chandni words from her heart
she poured out all her feelings to him
her words broke his heart in anguish
and i loved how he trapped her in his own words
i loved their love making session too
miku advay talk was so emotional
it touched so deep in my heart
poor advay felt so bad when he knew
how chandni had found out veer and told him all
naani advay scene was beautiful and soothing

Originally posted by: Anraysha

1. AWESOME,Amazing,Lovely, sooo Romantic,❤️ ☺️just what I really want to watch or read in a fiction.Keep writing,updating Neha,I am in love with your AdNi Love story completely, I am an ardent lover of AdNi,serious fan of Love Stories ,full of passion.No words Dear,Just out of this World your FF 👏⭐️👍🏼 it's obviously Clap from me 👏

Originally posted by: 2filmy

loved chandni words from her heart
she poured out all her feelings to him
her words broke his heart in anguish
and i loved how he trapped her in his own words
i loved their love making session too
miku advay talk was so emotional
it touched so deep in my heart
poor advay felt so bad when he knew
how chandni had found out veer and told him all
naani advay scene was beautiful and soothing

advay was hesitant to tell her about office
but she handled it all so well and maturedly
her feeding him was so cute
miku is so understanding and mature
shikha will be very happy with him
aww now he wants to know more about him
i loved how she gave the burqa idea
i am happy with what leela said
i think she has really changed for the better
naani maasi no one could help her
miku shikha nok jhok was so sweet
shikha is still the same old fighter
finally pooja told her everything
i loved adni phone talk it was so sweet
geeta recital and explanation was so good
she got an invitation too amazing

Originally posted by: LovingAHA2017

Sweetu pie, thanks that you read each n every word of the story! overall you liked it? has it come out good? I was a little skeptical while writing.

of course i read all the details well
as i told u this story is very close to my heart
it is not good it is as perfect as advay / dev

oh so he is unwell now
poor adi does not know it
chandni knew him so well
thankfully adi understood and left
chandni is so angry now
advay lied to pooja