Advni FF~ Phoenix UPD part 13 pg 58

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2filmy

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Posted: 7 years ago

#281

thanks Limi
u updated quite soon this time

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2filmy

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Posted: 7 years ago

#282

loved the scene where Ammi fed Veer after he came back from the office
am so touched to see the love between them
who is the head of the department ? why is he so rude to him ?
I feel so bad for poor Dev he missed his mom so much
seeing Ammi feed Veer he felt a stab in his heart now
I understand his pain agony of missing his parents
he was badly wishing he could be in Veer s place now
but Ammi called Dev and fed him with her in hands just like Veer and Dev was so touched and emotional
he couldn't tell Ammi the cause of her tears but she understood and soothed him with her words
after years Dev got such motherly love from someone
Chandni saw all this and was so happy
she knew that Dev got some peace after a long time so she too was at peace for now

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2filmy

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Trailblazer

Posted: 7 years ago

#283

so speaking to Veer about Dev makes Chandni blush
so Chandni tells him how Dev had married her
even Veer feels Dev did all that as he loved her a lot
Veer seemed so curious about Dev so she told him all
hearing everything his respect admiration for Dev increased many times
Veer considers Dev as his idol or hero now
he promised to help Chandni find out Miku
this is so significant and symbolic too
so both Dev and Veer have similar dreams of the past
they both dream about their respective traumas
but as Veer was a child he couldn't remember anything
Veer gave a good advice to Dev to overcome this
I am just wondering when will they start to feel a pull towards each other

Edited by 2filmy - 7 years ago

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2filmy

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Trailblazer

Posted: 7 years ago

#284

Ammi was really concerned for Dev after the last days event and it was so sweet of her to ask about him
Chandni did good to tell her about his parents trauma
I think now anniversary will shower more love on him
OMG so this was the grand surprise
Dev adopted Krish and he had gone to arrange for this on his parents death anniversary
how sweet of him to do this
Chandni got the best surprise in her life
now Krish won't ever grow up without love
I think Dev understood that Krish may face the same things he faced so he adopted him

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2filmy

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Trailblazer

Posted: 7 years ago

#285

when they will know they are real brothers they will both be so happy

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ChitraGS

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Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#286

Hello Limi, my lovely

I am so so so so sorry, to not have replied to ur FF's in teh past, yes i need a stick up my backside 😆, but i am here on my knees to beg you forgiveness 😳

TBH I read teh first three chapters, and lovedi it,

But what i loved the most abt this FF is the place from where you started it, that rain sequence after which she calls Mamaji,

TBH even in teh show, i was hoping that at that junction they might steer the show in teh right direction, but alas they didnt do that and instead brought Sasha track and ruined the experience for us. I even had mentioned it in my HAYE series, that they will surely steer it back to track post rain sequence, but what they did after that totally blew my brains to bits...😕😡.

So thank u so much for fulfilling that wish of steering the story from that rain junction.

OK Guilty as charged, i havent read from chi 4 onwards, but jsut read Chap 9 , so again duly sorry, will go back and read an will comment, again on them

Coming to this chapter, what i loved the most is

that Veer and chandini had a cute dynamic, loved Veer and his mothers dynamic, and that Veer too is an insomniac, and that the trauma of falling from a height still haunts him.👏

BUT WHAT I LOVED THE MOST WAS !!!! VEER'S AMMI AND ADVAY"S cute scene where she feeds her... dont know why, it did bring a tear to my eyes😭... and i thought since it moved me i might include this bit in my FF tooo...tho of course i will MENTION THAT I TOOK THE IDEA FROM YOU!!!! But it touched me and i want my ADVAY's in both my FF's too, to have that lovely relationship with Veers' Ammi. 😳, after all the too are motherless boys. 😭

So i hope u dont mind me using that idea, tho i will credit it back to you. If you have any issues pls let me know and i wont use it.

Thanks again LIMI for a wonderful story and for keeping Advini alive, amongst us, adn giving other alternative story of how the plot cud had moved forwards, it is refreshing to read new takes on the show that was slaughtered mercilessly, jsut goes to show how much potential this show really had.,

As for u i give u ❤️❤️❤️, love u loads as always 😳🤗

P.S One small request if you dont mind, I wear glasses, so if you cud please increase the font of your posts, that will be helpful as my eyes start to water when i read small prints, OH And also the color, if you can turn to any other colour other than shades or red please, as red is quite sharp on my poor eyes, sorry i know its your work and your choice of what font or colour you want to post it in , but jsut if you can make it easier for a blind girl like it that will be much appreciated 😳

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2filmy

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Trailblazer

Posted: 7 years ago

#287

Chitra you wear glasses ?
always or just reading glasses ?

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ChitraGS

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Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#288

Originally posted by: 2filmy
Chitra you wear glasses ?
always or just reading glasses ?

always my lovely, i am short sighted 🤓, its not too high my number its only -1.5 and i only had it for last three years, but my eyes water when strained thats all .

but i do wear lenses when i go out 😳

Edited by ChitraGS - 7 years ago

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Pixiepixel11

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Stunner

+ 31

Posted: 7 years ago

#289

amazing update loved it so much.

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2filmy

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Trailblazer

Posted: 7 years ago

#290

Originally posted by: ChitraGS

always my lovely, i am short sighted 🤓, its not too high my number its only -1.5 and i only had it for last three years, but my eyes water when strained thats all .

but i do wear lenses when i go out😳

oh so you have low power
some of my friends have eye power as high as -8
they can't see anything beyond their faces without glasses
lenses are very convenient as they are in your eyes

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