Advni FF~ Phoenix UPD part 13 pg 58 - Page 23

Originally posted by: 2filmy

of course I loved it dear

Originally posted by: 2filmy

wow so veer and his ammi too have come here to get treated for ammi heart
love the way ammi comforted her
veer recognized her immediately
when Advay called she couldn't speak so veer spoke to him
I loved how Advay Veer spoke to each other so warmly
Advay was touched when he heard how Chandni had come to the hospital inspire of her problem
I am happy that Leela too understood he mistake
she apologized to Chandni but Chandni told her to forget it as she is elder to her
Advay offered Veer and his parents to stay with them till the treatment is done
that was so sweet of him to do so

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

good

Originally posted by: ASRkiMoonlight

Lovely update dear

Chandni was so brave despite of her fears to help Adi in need

Poor one was so scared

Looking forward to Veer staying with them

Beautifully written

Update soon