Advni FF~ Phoenix UPD part 13 pg 58 - Page 2

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: hailly


Thank you dear 😃


I am sure this will be a gripping story
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: hailly


I think something similar to this may happen in the show otherwise I don't know how they are going to wrap up the story. Since cvs are so unpredictable don't know what they have in store for us. Let's wait and see.


Yes this is the only way they can wrap it up fast
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Posted: 7 years ago
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very nicely written. plz update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: 2filmy


I am sure this will be a gripping story


I hope so dear I have just finished writing the second part hope the rest of the story turns out to be okay as well.
Edited by hailly - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: mahin123

very nicely written. plz update soon


Thank you dear 😃 will update it soon.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: hailly


I hope so dear I have just finished writing the second part hope the rest of the story turns out to be okay as well.


dont doubt yourself
I have full faith on u 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hi i have updated the next part. hope you guys like it.


Part Two

Two days later

"Banu I have arrived Mumbai I will reach your house in a while. "Really, Mama Ji I cannot wait to see you come soon bye. Finally the time has come to find out the truth please god be with me today and give me strength to face the truth whatever it is. "You sound so happy dear whose phone was it. "It was my Mama Ji call Naani he came to Mumbai for some work and that he would come to see me today. That is really good news I will ask Murali to get the guest room ready for him. "There is no need for it Naani. "He is my daughter in laws uncle taking care of him is our responsibility and do not argue with me on this matter. Advay does not like my family do not know what he will do if he finds out that my Mama Ji is staying in his house but I cannot say no to Naani "As you wish, Naani. So her Mama Ji will be here today I will find out what you are planning Chandni and will bring your real face in front of everyone soon. "Murali keep an eye on Chandni and inform me if you see her alone with her Mama Ji okay. "Okay Bhaiya.

After a while she sees her Mama Ji entering the house she runs and hugs him tightly, "how are you Mama Ji, how is everyone at home? "Chandni let him come into the house first dear then you can ask him your questions she moves aside to let him in. They spent some time chatting with everyone later Chandni shows him his room. "Mama Ji you will be tired after the long journey you rest for a while I will see you in the evening. "Okay Banu bye.

"Murali have you seen Chandni. Ji I saw her going towards the garden. "Bhaiya Chandni Bhabhi and Mama Ji are in the garden. "Okay Murali. He quickly leaves for the garden when he sees Chandni he hides behind a nearby pillar. "Banu you are sitting here I have been searching for you in the entire house. She quickly wipes away the tears and turns around to face him. "It is so peaceful here I did not realise how late it is time that is why I did not wake you up. He sits beside her and holds her hand. "Banu now tell me what the matter is. She takes a deep breath and looks up at him. "Mama Ji please tell me the truth what exactly happened to Dev and his family 16yrs back. He let go her hand and moves away from her. Now what is the new drama she knows very well what happened with my family, then why is she doing all this.

"You called me here to talk about this Banu looking at her with disbelief evident in his face. "Yes Mama Ji. "Dev is gone Banu he is not coming back for, you are married now think only about your husband dear. Forget the past and move ahead in your life. "I too want to move ahead in my life mama ji but my past is obstructing my future. I can move ahead only if I overcome it. That is why it is important for me to know the past. "I do not understand what you are saying Banu, why are you asking me all these questions now. "My future depends on the answer to this question. "How many times did I tell you Banu? Dev and his family left Allahabad because everyone came to know that Mahant ji stole the temple treasure and I have nothing else to tell you. "You are lying Mama Ji that is why you could not even meet my eyes. "No Banu I am telling you the truth. She places his hand upon her head "swear on me Mama Ji that you are telling me the truth. He quickly pulls away his hand. "You will not be able to do it, as you very well know that you are lying. If you have ever loved me even little bit, please tell me the truth Mama ji holding his hand while tears continues to flow down her cheeks. He sighs in defeat. This means Chandni was telling me the truth she actually did not know what actually happened to my family is I wrong in judging her.

Flash Back

On that day, the pundits were donating money from the temple treasury to the poor people on Mahant ji orders. He and Mahantni ji went ahead to complete the religious ritual required before opening of the temple. However, on seeing the ravens sitting on the pooja mandap the Brahmins refused to do the ritual. When Mahantni ji was going to offer the Prasad to the Brahmins a trail of black footprints was visible and to top it all the Prasad she was about offer the pundits has turned black. On seeing this Shakun questioned Jiji whether all this is happening because of black magic as even Chandni has seen Mahantni ji flying in the air which was overheard by the pundits. That is why they questioned you, when you told them that you saw Mahantni ji flying all their suspicion were confirmed that she is a witch. To add fuel to the already simmering fire they came to know that all the coins that were given to the poor people were fake when they questioned the goldsmith about it he told them that he changed the coins because Mahant ji asked him to do it. They did not believe in Mahant ji innocence and accused him for cheating them by stealing all the money instead of taking care of the treasury. In addition, they further striped him of his Mahant title and offered the title to your father as he the one next in line to Mahant title. But someone insinuated the already angry the mob that they should punish Dev's family and they stabbed Mahant ji to death and burned Mahantni ji alive and even doing this their anger was not abated they went after Dev and his little brother. Without knowing all this when you went to meet dev at your secret hiding place the mob followed you. Later I found out that some people saw Dev's body floating in the water.

She slumps down the on to the ground defeated, the tiny thread of hope she held on to all this while broke hearing the truth. I thought that I could make everything fine between dev and me once I got to know the truth but the truth has changed everything in my life. I realise now that I wound I have unintentionally inflicted upon Dev were too deep that it has erased my future along with it and not even our childhood memories will be able to sustain it. The only good thing she can do for him now is to go away from his life forever that way his past memories will not be torment him anymore.

Hearing recount of that dreadful day was like rubbing salt on to the still fresh wound in his heart. Tears continue to flow down his cheeks while event of the past kept flashing around his eyes. He closed his eyes and leaned on to pillar for support. He really wished he could move away from here but not before making sure that everything is fine, even if he had suffer in the process.

"You know Mama Ji when I was a kid I used to get jealous on seeing other kids as to how much their parents love them. I used to wonder why god has not given me loving parents but now I know that he did to punish me for destroying such a happy family. "Do not talk like this Banu, you unintentionally committed a mistake when you were a kid it is not your fault dear. "Everything is my fault Mama Ji, she died because of me I will not be able to forgive myself for this. I cannot let her live her entire life feeling guilty for no mistakes of her own I have to tell her entire truth today. I know she will be hurt after knowing it but there are no other options left. "Listen to me Banu none of this is your fault shaking her by holding her shoulders, "if anyone ought to be blamed for it then it is Jiji not you understand.

She did not mean to betray me but then why did she lie to everyone about my mom, why. The only that is holding him back from consoling her, as seeing tears in her eyes still pull a chord in his heart.

She looks up at him on hearing this, "what do you mean Mama Ji what connection does Ma have with all this matters? "She is the one behind all this. All she wanted in her life was money and power in order to achieve that she planned on over throwing Mahant ji by creating false evidence against him. The goldsmith changed the money because she asked him to do it and later put all the blames on Mahant ji. She hired an actor and made her wear Mahantni ji dress with the help of rope the suspended her in mid air making sure that you see it with your own eyes. Since she know very well that the pundits will never believe them if they accuse Mahantni ji of witchcraft but they will not question kid also will take her words seriously. She also gave money to people so that they can insinuate the already angry people into taking a violent action against the Kashap's family. She eliminated the entire family to make a way for your father to become the next in line for inheriting the Mahant title.

No this is not true; please tell me that you are lying Mama Ji. I know that my other does not love me but she can't be such a cold hearted murderer, at least for one time say that all this is a lie Mama ji, holding his hands. Open your eyes you crazy girl that women does not deserve your love. You love her blindly but in order to get rid of you she hired the goon who kidnapped you but her plan was not successful as you escaped from there. So she tried to sell you off to pp for two crore. She let go of his hands and move away from him. Why did you hide all these things from me Mama Ji why did not you tell me about this before? I did not want to see you sad I thought it is better for you if you do not get to know all this. You see my betterment by doing all this, without knowing her real face I was ready to do anything for her Mama Ji. I was ready to marry a person I do not like just for her happiness. I even took the blame of Meghna's baby upon myself so as keep her honour intact. But what did she do to me in return she hired a goon to kidnap me thereby destroying my honour in front of everyone, she even used a 8 yrs old kid as a pawn in her murderous plans. Do you still think that you did the right thing Mama ji? If you really wished to see me happy then you would not have hid all this from me, today you proved to me that I would always remain as an outsider to you all. No Banu listen to me it is not like that, he tries to hold her but she runs away from there crying.


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Posted: 7 years ago
#18
Finally the truth is out
Both Advay and Chandni heard it
Now things are crystal clear
I think she will go away now
And he will do all to get her back
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Poor Advay to hear all those again
It must have stabbed him so badly
His old wounds were opened raw
But Chandni stumbled with it
It was just too much for her
I wonder how she will cope with it now
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Posted: 7 years ago
#20
Fantastic update
Simply loved it

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