Love beyond hatred~ DevNi FF~updated page 52 chapter 17

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2filmy

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Posted: 7 years ago

#391

just wanted to add a few things about the previous update
the opposite emotions when he was driving away leaving her at the temple and then when he stop and took back the car to check was displayed very well
Leela and Nani reactions were bang opposite of each other
thankfully Nani informed him that the media was concluding that she is his secret girlfriend
the happiness in Nani s voice when she told him to correct the media mistake and announce about his marriage was so clear
the way Advay was so restless in front of the doctor and the way he told him what had happened was so wonderful

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2filmy

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Posted: 7 years ago

#392

his various feelings when he saw Chandni in that state in the temple was well written
this day belonged mainly to Dev
he took over from the moment he decided to take back the car to check Chandni
he was solely devoted to her at that time and all his attention was also on her
else I think Advay won't have let the media click the pics of get a whiff of his relationship with Chandni
the way he had called the doctor and was impatient when he had to wait for his response was so awesome
I an sure he willing investigate on this matter in full details and will try to find out how she had got hurt
the last scene is so heart breaking where he laments that he had almost lost her today

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2filmy

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Posted: 7 years ago

#393

short but sweet update
will review in details in a while

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mahin

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+ 5

Posted: 7 years ago

#394

short but impactful update. Chandni has suffered so much in her life. now Advay will play with her heart. he will make her fall in love with him and later he will break it into pieces. the attention to details in your story is really good. thank you so much for the part. plz update soon dear

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Lubana

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Posted: 7 years ago

#395

Interesting

Wonder whats cooking in Advays head

I felt for a second that he was playing tricks on Chandni like he intends to always

So intrigued to know more in the next chapter

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2filmy

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Posted: 7 years ago

#396

poor Chandni was so confused when she woke up in the hospital
she remembered all that had happened and understood that the stampede was creating intentionally
she assumed it was her stalker who was still following her and created the stampede and stabbed her
she was confused seeing Advay there
Dr Malhotra is such a jolly man I like him already
he joked with her teased her about Advay made her feel comfortable and lightened the atmosphere
Advay was so sweet to her and the doc asked for a grand welcome party to which Advay easily agreed
Chandni was lost in her thoughts as her emotions were in a whirlwind with everything that happened today