The warmth of forgiveness-AdNi Os

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Posted: 8 years ago
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I never thought I would come up with such kind of Os.It is way too steamy,so people read it in their own responsibility.Hope you will live each and every moment I created.

THE WARMTH OF FORGIVENESS

He looked at her, frowning: "You're shivering. You'd better get straight back to bed "He put an arm round her shoulders to turn her and lead her back into her bedroom.
She was so aware of his bare legs and feet that she stumbled over the long folds of her nightie.
Advay tightened his grip to stop her falling, then suddenly swept her right off her feet, lifting her up into his arms
Startled, she clutched at him, her heart banging like a drum. He began to walk towards the bed; she tentatively slid her arms.
Startled she clutched at him, her head on his chest, very conscious that it was bare where the toweling robe parted at the lapels.
He began to lower her to the bed. She went on clinging, her body soft and pliant in his arms.
He made a muffled sound in his throat; he sat down on the edge of the bed, still holding her. His head came down and hers lifted. Their mouths met with a rush, an explosion of need and feeling; heat broke out between them instantly.
He groaned her name "Chandni!
The sound made the hairs on the back of her neck stand up. His voice had such hunger in it.
She had never been kissed like this _ it was an invasion, so intimate that she was shock and yet the inner warmth of her mouth, the demanding movement of his lips.
The kiss had a disturbing effect on her; she seemed to be boneless, she was melting, like hot wax. His hands moved sensuously on her nightdress, the starched folds creating of white cotton, moulding them to her like a sculptor creating a woman from clay, her body emerging under his touch: her high, firm breasts, her small waist, the soft curve of hip and thigh. She was trembling, eyes tightly shut, as she caressed his black hair, the nape of his neck, her fingers sliding inside the robe, the small dark hairs roughening his naked chest prickling under her finger tips.
That was how she found the sickle-shaped scar, a raised contour she could feel. She lay still, tracing it, remembering all what he had to her,the humiliation,the badmouthing,everything and then a sorry after all happened.Chandni was wishing that Advay never should have found her innocence as now his sorry is seeming very disgusting to her.She pushed her from her whole body and started to go from here.Advay quietly grabed her arm and said " Not today,chandni.Dont stop me today." He had so lust in his voice and chandi couldn't say anything nor could move a bit.She shivered.He kissed the scar that he once given her,softly. "I wish I would never leave you and we could live our childhood again."
.Chandni saw a small teardrop flowing over her cheeks.Clutching his shoulder,she burrowed into him like a small animal seeking refuge, her nostrils quivering at the scent of him, his mouth attacking hers, his tongue tasting saltiness of her skin, the roughness of the curved scar.
She tightened her grip on his shoulder.She breathed thickly as his hands moved downwards, following.She gave a sharp moan. "Stop it,Advay!!" Her words didnt effect him at all.He suddenly opened the zip of her nighty and started rubbing it slowly,"Isnt it effecting you?" She was getting wet and maybe liking it.Her pulses beat wildly.He wanted her.But whether she wanted him or not -was a a question.She looked up at him through lowered lashes and saw his face; she barely recognized it now it was strange, unfamiliar, lustful.He moved his hand more down.She couldn't take it anymore and groaned softly,'Advay!!"'
He got his answer.His eyes were so hot she felt as if they might burn. His lips were apart; he breathed through them roughly, unsteadily.
"It wouldn't be fair to you. you'll regret this in the morning"She grated, frowning. He tried to unlock her arms, push her away against the pillows, but she held him, her body arching in invitation. "Don't... don't..just dont..please" She whispered, and heard his breath catch, heard him give another deep, hoarse groan. "You don't know what you're saying "
"Of course I do "She said almost angrily, husky, very flushed.I' m not a child, I'm a woman and this is not the way to treat a woman."
Advay smirked"Then what is the way? Like this?"He again jumped on her.Her mouth found hers.He kissed him passionately and he felt Chandni shuddering, then he began to kiss her back hard, his mouth hungry, demanding. Chandni sank backwards, taking him with her, their bodies tangling on the bed. He was heavy. Driven by instinct as old as time , she moved under him, her legs parting so that he sank between them , her nightdress riding up so that their bare skin touched.
Advay broke off the kiss, sat up shrugged out of his robe, and she looked at him, swallowing, so hot that she felt feverish.
He was deadly serious, and it scared her, but she knew she would never feel this way about anyone else, so she pushed all the hesitation away, pulling him down towards her, her hands trembling, eager.
"You don't need to have any doubts about me. I love you. All I want is to belong to youShe said and Advay had nothing to listen anymore.He was forgiven."All right, chandni!!You're going to!
He was gentle, but it hurt; her body tensed involuntarily, resisting him, refusing to yield to the hard, naked flesh attempting to enter it.
"I m hurting you...I don't want to hurt you he said, trying to withdraw, but her arms tightened round his back, pulling him down. She wrapped her legs around him too, enclosing him in her body. "I don't care... Hurt me, I want you to she groaned.
"Chandi!!" He said, sounds shaken, almost shocked. "Well, if you're sure... But stop me if it hurts too much
And then he finally took her _ his body entering her with a force that was like dying. She bit back the cry of pain she couldn't help, swallowed it into herself, trying to relax her clenched muscles.
Advay sighed heavily; lay still inside her for a moment. "In love with you,tweety"
He began to move, slowly, softly; each movement hurt. Chandni felt faint, but the pain was nothing compared with the fact that he was inside her, they were part of each other.
She closed her eyes and clung to him, abandoning herself, her body totally submissive.
He slowly lost control. He groaned; his thrust grew deeper, deeper, until he was driving fiercely into her, his hot face between her lips,his cries of pleasure and satisfaction so loud that he was unaware that she was silent. Afterwards he fell forward on her and lay there, breathing hoarsely, roughly.
She held him in her arms, hearing his breathing slow, feeling his shuddering body quieten and lie still. Their bodies entwined, naked and silky; they lay in drowsy silence, heavy with the peace that came after such rending passion, warm with the onset of sleep.


Thats all...

Please bear with my mistakes...hope you will enjoy it.
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AshtaVasus thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
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OS on SR is not new in Shows related to romance and revenge.
Honestly I don't enjoy very mushy mushy romance and SR sequences.
But...
There is one line in your OS which caught my eye and I loved it very much :
like a sculptor creating a woman from clay, her body emerging under his touch

Very beautifully penned - how a woman comes to life in the hands of man, like a statue is created from a stone in the hands of a sculptor 👏
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thank you so much for your kind observations,dear..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Excellent OS
Such a good change
Loved it
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Can you explain the scar ?
Did he ever push her and she fell down
And got it ?
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: 2filmy

Can you explain the scar ?
Did he ever push her and she fell down
And got it ?

Actually it is my imaginary thing to be added in the story and the scar is kind of a symbol of advay's aggressive nature..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: tasnimrayian

Actually it is my imaginary thing to be added in the story and the scar is kind of a symbol of advay's aggressive nature..


OK that explains it
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Posted: 8 years ago
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This was so beautifully written
Loved itt
Write more on AdNi❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: ASRkiMoonlight

This was so beautifully written

Loved itt
Write more on AdNi❤️


I would try to come with another one😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Your profile pic is also very nice dear😛

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