ADVINI OS - NAYI SHURUAAT (Ehsaas Series) Pg 1 Up!

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Hola sweets!! Here is a shaayraana ehsaas on how our Advini feel during the griha pravesh ceremony...

NAYI SHURUAAT

Advay and Chandini stood at the doorstep for the gruh pravesh ceremony. Giving a slight push to the kalash containing rice with her right foot, Chandini completed the ritual.



When she was about to set her first step in the house, she looked at him and found him staring at her already. Advay and Chandini tried to read the emotions in each other's eyes.





Advay

Ghar mei ho gayi daakhil
Karunga nhi zindagi mei shaamil...
Tum ho nafrat ke kaabil
Mera pyaar naa hoga haasil...

Ab aayega mazaa
Pal pal jab katogi tum sazaa...
Tadpogi har waqt
Dand bhugtogi bohot sakht...

Firse dekar mauka
Khaaunga naa dhokha...
Nahi hai tumse wafaa
Bewafaai karti ho har dafaa...

Jhooth hai yeh sindoor aur mangalsutra
Nahi hai yeh rishta pavitra...
Nahi hai yeh saat janmo ka bandhan
Tu thi aur rahegi bas ek raat ki dulhan...

Rahunga kareeb
Bankar reqeeb...
Ek pal ki naa hogi raahat
Hai yahi teri kismat...

Tere aasuo se nahi honga kamzor
Ansune honge tere fariyaad...
Naa jode hame koi dor
Fareb hai iss rishte ki buniyaad...

Shaadi toh karli Chandini
Sirf naam ke liye ho meri patni...
Naa ho tum jeevan sangini
Aur naahi ardhaangini...

(You have entered the house
But you will never have any place in my life
You deserve only hatred
You will never get my love)

(Now the fun begins
When you will serve your punishment
You will be tormented
You will face my severe wrath)

(By giving you another chance
I don't want to get betrayed again
I don't trust you
You are a traitor)

(This red vermilion and chain are a lie
This is no sacred relation
This is not a bond of seven births
You were and will always be a bride of one night)

(I will stay close to you
As your enemy
You will not be relieved even for a moment
This is what is written in your destiny)

(Your tears won't weaken me
Your pleads will remain unheard
No string ties us together
Deceit is the foundation of this relation)

(You are married Chandini
But you are my wife only for namesake
Neither you are my life partner
Nor my better half)

Chandini

Tere zindagi mei aana hai majboori
Hamaare beech hai kitni doori...
Jo shaayad naa honge kam
Kya kabhi ek honge ham?...

Ilzaam lagaaye tune har baar
Kehta hai jhoothi baar baar...
Kis baat ka liya badla
Kar diya mujhe akela...

Rakhne apne parivaar ka maan
Sahungi tera har apmaan...
Diya hai nani ko vachan dil se
Nibhaungi yeh rishta sache mann se...

Tu sataayega
Tu rulaayega...
Tu tadpaayega
Tu tarsaayega...

Zindagi ne liya yeh kaisa mod
Iske imtehaan mujhe rahe hai tod...
Nhi khone doongi apna aatma sammaan
Yeh himmat tab tootegi jab jaayegi meri jaan...

Kasme khaayi thi agni ko saakshi maanke
Phere liye the saat janmo ke...
Maane iss shaadi ko jhooth
Lekin yeh bandhan hai atoot...

Kabhi pyaar naa hoga tujhe
Tu hai nafrat ke kaabil...
Fir kyu darr hai mujhe
Tujhe de naa baithu apna dil...

(I am part of your life because I had no other choice
We are so distanced
Which will never fade
Will we ever become one?)

(You blamed me everytime
Time and again you have called me a liar
What was the revenge for?
You made me a lonely person)

(To keep up my family's honour
I will bear your torture
Since I have promised nani
I will fulfill my duty towards this relation whole heartedly)

(You will harass me
You will make me cry
You will make me yearn
You will make me sigh)

(My life has taken a drastic turn
Its tests are breaking me apart
I will not lose my self respect in any case
My courage would end only when I die)

(Bearing the holy fire as the witness, we had taken vows
We had taken holy rounds of seven births
You term this marriage as a lie
But this is an unbreakable bond)

(You will never experience love
You deserve only hatred
Then why am I afraid
That I will lose my heart to you)

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Hope you all like it. Please hit like and comment. Happy Reading.

Loads of love,
Nazia😊
Edited by Barunkidiwani - 7 years ago

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2filmy thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Advay thoughts are so clear
Chandni thoughts are a bit mixed
But I loved the way you penned it down
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Amazing and brilliant
Another addition toe the awesome ehsaas series
2filmy thumbnail
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I am keeping my record intact 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: 2filmy

Advay thoughts are so clear
Chandni thoughts are a bit mixed
But I loved the way you penned it down

Priyuuu...right now Advay is totally focused on revenge... Chandini's thoughts will be cleared once she gets to know he is Dev and his reason behind the hatred...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: 2filmy

Amazing and brilliant
Another addition toe the awesome ehsaas series

Yes...8th addition...all because of readers like you ❤️ 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: 2filmy

I am keeping my record intact😃

Baeee ❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Barunkidiwani

Priyuuu...right now Advay is totally focused on revenge... Chandini's thoughts will be cleared once she gets to know he is Dev and his reason behind the hatred...


I think she will be angry on Dev once she knows it is him
And when she knows the reason she may not believe it at all
But then again she will know the truth
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Barunkidiwani

Yes...8th addition...all because of readers like you ❤️ 😳


I wish you could compile all this in a book
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Posted: 8 years ago
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My bae too <3

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