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Posted: 8 years ago
Seriously ...Chandni is a complete mess...she is a teenager who acts like one. I really hope she break away and growup away from this over protective family who agrees to all her whims and learn to be a good and sensible person first ...


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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: 2filmy

Arnav slapped him for Chandni
He will not forget it so soon
Chandni has to set things right now


Arnav shouldn't have done that but he is impulsive. Chandhini is in for big trouble but not in next chapter.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: mistofshadows

Chandni... She sure messes up.

Poor Advay


@bold I know right!😆. Poor soul everything she does backfires.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Interesting comment. Thank you
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: rajatshweta


OMG, the cracks in the relationship has started showing its signs. Advay as such does not disclose his feelings in front of family but today, he has raised his voice against his father, against his Father's love for his dead friend and for his daughter Chandni. Both Advay and Chandni are part of the same family and the entire family will be forced to choose sides on the downslide.

The unforgiving Advay has not forgiven his long standing GF for what she did to him and his family on just one day. And here, Chandni has cost him his Tiny, his GF, his self respect, his trust, his family too. He is going to come down on her with more humiliating punishments after returning to Delhi.

Poor girl, Chandni. She is on for a rollercoaster ride of her life. She should just divorce him and give him his much needed freedom to choose what he wants.

Her love is strong enough to let go ... she was earnestly waiting for this guy for 16 yrs and yet, when she came to know that he loves Swathi, she let him go seek his happiness.
She wanted him to see and feel her as a woman after marriage, and when she saw him in pain for what he did, she couldn't control herself from admitting her mistake. Her love for him couldn't tolerate to see him repenting it. His pain was hers... She loved him that much to feel what he feels .
She was so mature in answering him after he insulted her in front of the servant, emptied her account, closed her cell number, threw money on the bed and made her feel like a s**t... she took it all because if it offers him some kinda solace by even hurting her - she was willing to take it... Her love was stronger and mature than her age .
The Aditi error would have got ironed out with time, but this mistake of hers is not going to go down easily with Advay. Because of her, the Father and Son are pitted against each other and things have gone bitter in the family .
Now she should just divorce and let him go as he wishes... Currently he feels suffocated in this relationship. Once he gets out of this relationship and cools down, he will be able to think clearly. Chandni has already started stirring feelings inside him unknowingly. I am sure, Chandni's love is strong enough to pull him back. And this time, he will choose her on his own...


I think that is inevitable because of difference in their age and thinking. He is not ready to give her benefit of doubt and she does whatever she wants without thinking about consequences.

Advay is very difficult person. He is private about his emotions, and very unforgiving. He is one of the hardest character to write but then I have seen rigid people like him.

Chandhini is selfish too. She should not have agreed to marry him in first place. But she did and then she tried to have each and everything her own way which obviously clash with Advay because he wants things to be his way.

She will grow up but experience will be a bitter one. It's not as easy for them to divorce now as it was earlier. The more time passes the more difficult it gets because now slowly the perception is changing from a daughter to a daughter in law.

Advay doesn't hold his punches and yes he will regret it once he made the mistake he shouldn't have but that's what is interesting about this story.

Like the Chandhini said in drama, time may be with Advay now but a moment will come which will only be hers. One day he will be the one who will want to make this relationship work.



Edited by .Ashleydevlin. - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: mira

Seriously ...Chandni is a complete mess...she is a teenager who acts like one. I really hope she break away and growup away from this over protective family who agrees to all her whims and learn to be a good and sensible person first ...



She is very impulsive. There isn't any place she can go. she has got no relatives, no job, no money. She is literally dependent on raizada family and if things go wrong between them, which already has already started, she will be the one in trouble.

Seriously no man is worth all this trouble. I am the one writing the story but I feel like saying just go and confess to Arnav and get over with it.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: .Ashleydevlin.


She is very impulsive. There isn't any place she can go. she has got no relatives, no job, no money. She is literally dependent on raizada family and if things go wrong between them, which already has already started, she will be the one in trouble.

Seriously no man is worth all this trouble. I am the one writing the story but I feel like saying just go and confess to Arnav and get over with it.



I know...she is still too young to live of her own... maybe she can go abroad for studies or something. Her attachment with Advay is completely justified considering she go no one in world ... but she messed up too much ...has to let him go ...and see if he comes back...
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: .Ashleydevlin.


Arnav shouldn't have done that but he is impulsive. Chandhini is in for big trouble but not in next chapter.


OK but she is in a mess now
Already Advay is angry on her and now this
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Posted: 8 years ago
I think the main problem is she had made Advay her support system
Age difference is also a factor for the clash of emotions
Neither of them wants to accept the other's conditions
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: mira



I know...she is still too young to live of her own... maybe she can go abroad for studies or something. Her attachment with Advay is completely justified considering she go no one in world ... but she messed up too much ...has to let him go ...and see if he comes back...


Going away will be good option but I have already written it in mannmeet, my first ff ever. So, it would be hard to write something new
Edited by .Ashleydevlin. - 8 years ago

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