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2filmy

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Posted: 8 years ago

#121

Originally posted by: srdb5

Thanks Priya... 😊

Most welcome
Looking forward to the next part

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Sharda

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Posted: 8 years ago

#122

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2filmy

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Posted: 8 years ago

#123

Extraordinary update Sharda
Finally the truth is revealed
Ugly faces are exposed
Culprits are punished
I am happy Chandni rejected Indrani
And Shakun also shouted at Indrani
Shakun at least loves her own daughter
Indrani deserves to be isolated
Good that Veer too insulted Shikha

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2filmy

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Posted: 8 years ago

#124

So many things happened here
After all what is a marriage without some drama
Now Chandni can move on peacefully

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2filmy

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Posted: 8 years ago

#125

Waiting for the next part
continue soon

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sivani

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Posted: 8 years ago

#126

Hi A beautifully penned story. U brought out Chandni's inner feelings for her Mother very aptly. This is the way things happen in real life. U brought that touch in this chapter very well. Good work. 👏

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mayukatta

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Posted: 8 years ago

#127

Sharda...👏

This is your best update so far..

I liked very bit of it. The reason may be that , now Iam so attached to all these characters.

Loved the pace. The description.

The best part are the dialogue.

Outstanding dear. Chandni's dialogue to indrani was really impressive.

Well done dear. Eagerly waiting for next update. Something tells me we are near to the end. But you brought the story out very well. The characters are so different from the show , these are your own characters and they are beautiful.

The love the fact that indrani hate has a reason. She lost her son and thought chandini is responsible. But in our show she just hates her bcoz she is her step daughter, that's just pure evil.

The precap is so good. Finally chandini confessesing her love.

Just can't wait😳. Don't make us wait longer now...😊

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Sharda

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Posted: 8 years ago

#128

Originally posted by: 2filmy
Extraordinary update Sharda
Finally the truth is revealed
Ugly faces are exposed
Culprits are punished
I am happy Chandni rejected Indrani
And Shakun also shouted at Indrani
Shakun at least loves her own daughter
Indrani deserves to be isolated
Good that Veer too insulted Shikha

Thanks Priya.

I am really happy that so many people actually loved and could relate to my last update. 😊

Edited by srdb5 - 8 years ago

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Sharda

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Posted: 8 years ago

#129

Originally posted by: soumyamurali
Hi A beautifully penned story. U brought out Chandni's inner feelings for her Mother very aptly. This is the way things happen in real life. U brought that touch in this chapter very well. Good work. 👏

Thank you soumya.

Ya right when people close to you hurt you the most this is how you react in real life too. I am glad you liked my work. 😊

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Sharda

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Posted: 8 years ago

#130

Originally posted by: mayukatta
Sharda...👏
This is your best update so far..
I liked very bit of it. The reason may be that , now Iam so attached to all these characters.
Loved the pace. The description.
The best part are the dialogue.
Outstanding dear. Chandni's dialogue to indrani was really impressive.

Well done dear. Eagerly waiting for next update. Something tells me we are near to the end. But you brought the story out very well. The characters are so different from the show , these are your own characters and they are beautiful.

The love the fact that indrani hate has a reason. She lost her son and thought chandini is responsible. But in our show she just hates her bcoz she is her step daughter, that's just pure evil.

The precap is so good. Finally chandini confessesing her love.
Just can't wait😳. Don't make us wait longer now...😊