~||Advini Drabble - A Night To Remember||~

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hello peeps 😛
Few things before the actual part😆

1. I'm a beginner when it comes to writing and this is my very first drabble.😳

2. I was very much hesitant to post this here but ( Dhaakad ) Sandy here wanted me to share this. Thanks for the talk and appreciation Sandy love yaa❤️

3. Comments and criticisms are welcome. No rotten tomatoes or chappals pls😆

4. This is just purely my imagination as i want to see Advay consoling Chandu like this😳


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A Night to Remember



"She is impure, "She is shameless, Look at her wandering outside without any shame, "I

wonder if she ever felt guilty before doing this. The same insults, the same taunts were

vibrating in her ears. A series of incidents flashed continuously, she getting drowned in

the water, his cruel laughter, she running towards the waterfall jumping to save herself.

"Stop! Make it stop! No! Leave me alone! Please leave me! " He ran to her room as he

heard her shouting. He saw her squirming in the bed shouting the same words. He held her

in his arms trying to calm her down.

"No! Please leave me! Just leave me alone! She started twitching and turning until a warm

yet strong pair of hands held her. She tried to fight back but later succumbed to its warmth.

The same familiar touch, the touch which always managed to calm her every single time.

"Dev!? She whispered as her face became calm without any emotion as she went back to

sleep.


He heard her whispering that name. Did she really recognise him? He was stunned as he

saw her face turning back to her usual calming self as she held his hands as if that is her

sole support. Is he making any mistake? Or is he missing something apart from the ones he

saw? Did he misunderstand her? Many questions started to form in his mind slowly as he

watched her sleeping form. This, for sure is a night to remember.


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That's it😆

Hope its readable😆

Do leave your comments and likes😳



--Aishu--

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Posted: 8 years ago
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wow! this is really awesome... Thank you for posting...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#3
It's so good I want a scene like this in the show
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Posted: 8 years ago
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It's so beautiful, Aishu. I absolutely loved it.❤️ Even I want similar scene in the show. Advay getting to know about Dev from Chandni.
You should write more.🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
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That's your first?
You should definitely write more, bud.

Its always a pleasure to see more and more budding writers (I am one of them, you see) And it always feels awesome to come across new and good works.

Bravo for the attempt. Congos for pulling it as fab as you did.

And yes, I would love to see something as this happen in the show. Makes a lot of sense and does proves the solid base and turn to the AdNi equation.

Once again, welcome to the world of writing and all the best for your future ventures.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Beautiful Drabble.
Loved it❤️
Thank you for posting it.
Do write more if possible will love to read ur work.
Edited by Fa13 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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and this doesn't seem like a beginner's writing to me wow it is 👏👏👏
Aishu🤗 darling wow it is amazing👏👏👏

I loved the way Advay roars upto her and expresses the love in himself too lovely👏👏👏

Like this a scene must be a part of the show 😳😳😳

I indeed loved reading it girl pls do write more😃😃😃

Next time I expect big FF's SS from you😉😉😉

love ya❤️
Jen🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Absolutely loved this Drabble Aish! ❤️

Advay's thoughts were indeed beautifully penned.

Do write more. 🤗

~ Mrina <3
Edited by -Mrinalini- - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Short and sweet drabble dear.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Her subconscious knows that it is Dev
She feels safe and warm in his arms
Loved the drabble

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