FF: -Chandni- by Jalebi Jane EPISODE 1-14 Rest at JalebiJane.com

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AshtaVasus

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Posted: 8 years ago

#21

Hi JJ,

I am new to IPKKND as well. Nice to read a FF on the Hot Leads...

So, he caught the family in the most weak moments of their life. Family is worried about their future, that the spider web he is weaving around Chandni and her family goes unnoticed.

He chose the spot smartly where he can corner her. I mean, literally. 😉

Scared Damsel. Confident Charmer. Cool start.

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Shreya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#22

Do update the story soon...can't wait to read further. ...nice start ...

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simisworld

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Posted: 8 years ago

#23

YESS!! I knew you would eventually come around to writing something on these two! So excited to be taken on this new journey into AdNi universe! Fantastic start and can't wait to read more (both here and on ArShi)

- Simi

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Jalebi Jane

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Posted: 8 years ago

#24

Yikes!

When I posted the first episode I didn't realize that IF auto-removed the em-rules and the close quotes in the text. Maybe because I cut-and-paste from my writing software and it doesn't recognize certain characters. What a shame---! And what stalwarts you all are for struggling through to make sense of it. I've edited it now and hopefully it reads more clearly. I confess, I would have given up after the second paragraph. So thank you. Next time that happens, don't hesitate to nudge me, ok?

I'll be more careful next time but I also cross-post my work at jalebijane.com.

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Jalebi Jane

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Posted: 8 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: simisworld
YESS!! I knew you would eventually come around to writing something on these two! So excited to be taken on this new journey into AdNi universe! Fantastic start and can't wait to read more (both here and on ArShi)
- Simi

I love that you knew that about me---!

Put a Raizada man in front of me and my imagination races :-)

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Jalebi Jane

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Posted: 8 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: rajatshweta

Hi JJ,
I am new to IPKKND as well. Nice to read a FF on the Hot Leads...

So, he caught the family in the most weak moments of their life. Family is worried about their future, that the spider web he is weaving around Chandni and her family goes unnoticed.
He chose the spot smartly where he can corner her. I mean, literally. 😉
Scared Damsel. Confident Charmer. Cool start.

Hello Sister,

I'm actually not new to IPKKND. I've been chasing Raizadas since March 2012.

If you are new to IPK1 then I totally envy you that discovery. The fall/winter of 2012-13 when I "met" Arnav and Khushi was a life-changing experience for me. I discovered writing and I discovered what it means to be a Heroine. No exaggeration.

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Jalebi Jane

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Posted: 8 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: Lol77
I have always wondered if few of the appreciated and respected FF writers of Season 1 will ever write a FF on IPK3.
Thank you for giving me a Hope and for leading from the front.

I love your work, especially JALEBI.

Thank you Sister.

Will edit my comment once I finish reading.

Thank you for your kind words.

For me, the attraction in writing on IPK3 is that it involves a Raizada, and I see the potential of developing a dark revenge tale like the ones I secretly read as a teenager. The challenge is to bring this Hero and Heroine onto the page. When I began writing IPK1 FFs, I had watched over nine months of episodes and I could hear their voices and see them in my head while writing. In the case of IPK3 it is more challenging because I have observed them for only three weeks. But I was itching to begin, so here I am.

To respond to your remark, I think we will see more FFs emerge once the show settles down a bit. It is early days.

Edited by JalebiJane - 8 years ago