Imagine this... #one moment ( as he held her)

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mayukatta

@mayukatta

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

All he wanted was divert her attention from the laptop. It was done and he was about to let her go. It was then he heard it .. heartbeat no ,not hers, his own.

And he thought.. one moment!

Iam not breaking the wall

Iam not crossing the boundaries

But before I tear you to pieces all I need is

One moment of weakness.

Iam not tried of the battle

Iam not here to loose

But before I take you down all I need is

One moment of surrender.

Iam still that burning fire

Iam still that inner chaos

But before I destroy you all I need is

One moment of peace.

One moment, he thought

One moment of weakness

One moment of surrender

One moment of peace

One moment of Dev!!

I know it's not in my usual screenplay style.. but when I saw him holding her I wanted advay to have one moment as Dev.

Edited by mayukatta - 8 years ago

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2filmy

@2filmy

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Posted: 8 years ago

Well written
He must be feeling this

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mayukatta

@mayukatta

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: 2filmy
Well written
He must be feeling this

Last episodes gave no idea about his inner feelings..

I've is not talking to the camera

I miss that.. I hope he talks to the camera and says.. I hating every minute of this but this is how the plan works..

I may have kneel down but I didn't loose.. something like that

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Mahalakshmi Mathan

@melihoney

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

beautiful and again u nailed this imagination thou

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mayukatta

@mayukatta

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: melihoney
beautiful and again u nailed this imagination thou

Thank you😛

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2filmy

@2filmy

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: mayukatta

Last episodes gave no idea about his inner feelings..
I've is not talking to the camera
I miss that.. I hope he talks to the camera and says.. I hating every minute of this but this is how the plan works..
I may have kneel down but I didn't loose.. something like that

I prefer to hear his monologue than speaking to the camera
That some how makes it more emotional
But some how I feel he is lost in Chandni to some extent

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mayukatta

@mayukatta

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: 2filmy

I prefer to hear his monologue than speaking to the camera
That some how makes it more emotional
But some how I feel he is lost in Chandni to some extent

Lost in chandini!!!

No... Not yet..

I don't want him to fall so soon or even get attracted..

Iam not ready... I still want him to hate her

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2filmy

@2filmy

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: mayukatta

Lost in chandini!!!
No... Not yet..
I don't want him to fall so soon or even get attracted..
Iam not ready... I still want him to hate her

I mean to say the Dev in him had got lost for sometime
Of course I too want him to hate her else he will become soft
And cannot take his revenge