ADVINI SS - EK RAAT KA SAATH Part 5 Pg 16 Up! - Page 9

Originally posted by: Barunkidiwani

[ Priyaaa my bae...I love to read your comments... what do you think will she agree?? yaa thoda aur naatak karegi 😆

She will agree but may be after doing some nakhra 😆
Good to read the update bae

By the way I actually loved that she initiated the kiss

this title reminds me of today's episode.. ek raat ki dulhan 😭 ...but the update is awesome I personally like the
concept of him being a cricketer as I am big cricket fan...so cricket binds me with this one even more...vaise I love chandni...thanks for pm...you are awesome... and I 'll be waiting for an poetic update too.as you are so so good in that... [ 😊

Wow!!! That was so so intense. I am curious how this affair will progress😉

Originally posted by: Lost_Somewhere

Chandu will not agree that easily..😆Advay ko aur thoda tadpayegi..phir haan bolegi..😉 I loved how you didn't make her a damsel in distress.👏 Boy she can protect herself too. What a punch!!😳

Thanks Antra...I do await your comments...Chandini tadpaayegi yaa nhi next update mei pata chalega...Personally I love women who stand for themselves...hence the lead in my story will always be a strong one.. 😊

Originally posted by: 2filmy

She will agree but may be after doing some nakhra 😆
Good to read the update bae

Next update mei sab clear ho jaayega...Stay tuned 😉

Originally posted by: 2filmy

By the way I actually loved that she initiated the kiss

I love bold women...if you know what I mean 😉 😳

Originally posted by: lovi9

this title reminds me of today's episode.. ek raat ki dulhan 😭 ...but the update is awesome I personally like the
concept of him being a cricketer as I am big cricket fan...so cricket binds me with this one even more...vaise I love chandni...thanks for pm...you are awesome... and I 'll be waiting for an poetic update too.as you are so so good in that... [ 😊

I don't want her to be ek raat ki dulhan 😭 Hifi dear even I am a big cricket fan one of the reasons for penning down this story. Glad you bonded with the story...I love Chandini too... Loveena though I am not a regular shaayar if possible will try to incorporate something poetic if my creative brain works...Thanks for commenting 😊

Originally posted by: shibaniana

Wow!!! That was so so intense. I am curious how this affair will progress😉

Loving it👏

Thanks a lot shibani...just one thing this is gonna be an intense affair I promise 😳 😉

Thanks for pm superb update love it update next soon will be waiting