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Sarita

@AnonMSK

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#51

How can you think about not continuing. This is a thing of beauty girl. It is beautiful. Please carry on.

I love the detailed elaborate well paced chapters. The whole premise is so frustrating . There is so much water under the bridge. I am excited to see how this unfolds

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Jasmine457

@Jasmine457

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#52

Thank you for the likes and comments! Will try to update soon! 😊

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NONIE

@Nonie12345

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#53

Fantastic chapters Jasmine

The conversation between Shivaay and Omkara was nice😊

The scenes between shivika was amazing

I hated how Shivaay talked to anika😡

Shivika first meeting was amazing ⭐️

The scenes between Priyanka and Anika were wonderful 😃

The flashbacks were awesome ❤️

Shivaay and Anika's point of view were interesting 🤗

You should definitely continue this FF👍🏼

Edited by Nonie12345 - 7 years ago

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Chanda124

@Chanda124

Beginner

Posted: 7 years ago

#54

Plz continue and pm me with next update

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Jasmine457

@Jasmine457

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#55

Story Removed

Edited by Jasmine457 - 6 years ago

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angelshah

@angelshah

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#56

Awesome update
Felling sad for anika
She is working overtime
I really want to see how shivika story progress
Are shivika married previously?
Plz cont soon

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Anya

@elysianights

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#57

Wait! So Annika and Shivaay were married? Like How could this be possible? I thought maybe that they were just in a live-in! Now this is making me curious! Like hell curious.

That's the only reason why Annika is this much affected by him and so is shivaay. Maybe he loved her but still can't put a finger over that matter, he isn't able to accept his feeling for her which is still confusing him. He think that he did all that just in a fit of rage but the reality is he is truly and irrevocably in Love with Annika.

Well to be true, I was very upset with Shivaay the way he approved of Annika's tight schedule, like it's really unfair and cruel of him to do such thing, maybe it's just his frustration about his feelings towards Annika which let him do that.

And the way he passed his lunch to Annika and then at the dinning table asked the servant not to give Lauki to Annika shows he still care for her little things and know keep a keen look on her behaviour and likes and dislikes. His blunt behaviour is causing suspicion in the family member's heart while it went a notch up with panditji's predictions!

You are really taking the story smoothly and in a good pace, nothing seems to be rushed or slow. it's good and perfect! Please do update it soon and long updates is what we crave and you are going pretty well with it! Eagerly waiting to know what's the past as well the future hold's for them!

Much Love,

-Anya.

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LyssaPie

@LyssaPie

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 7 years ago

#58

WOAH WOAH
This just keeps getting better and better

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arhi10

@arhi10

Explorer

Posted: 7 years ago

#59

Hi,

i read all the chapters together and i must say it is very very interesting.

I love the way you portray their emotions.

The pace of the story is just right and i am very very curious for the next update.

Love the story.

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Adithi555

@Adithi555

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#60

Thank you for the long update...the story is going good.but their past confusing me a lot..n whats with this SSO he is a weirdo...Anni is in so much pain. Poor girl. Hope you will clear what went wrong with them n whats wrong with shivaay soon...waiting for the next update.

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