Twist?- A redux FF 13.7.18

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Posted: 7 years ago
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After being, a non member stalker of Ishqbaaaz forum for 4 months and a silent member for a month, i finally got the guts to post a story in this forum.
This is my first ever attempt to write anything , so kindly go easy on me.😉

Plot:

Shivaay is madly obsessed with annika and annika can sense something different in the air between them. He is unable to digest nikhil as annika's fiancee but still goes along in marrying tia , as he does not want to antagonize daksh who is priyanka's love.

Torn between mind and heart , shivaay fights a bitter battle with life.
With sudden revelations and shocking truths in just a few hours, Shivikas life gets changed for eternity.

Part -1 :

"Shivaay , tu ne kya kiya? Have you gone mad? You married Annika? Annika ? What is wrong with you?" screamed Omkara from the bottom of his lungs, on seeing a visibly miserable annika and a stoic Shivaay.

"Om ... whatever i did, i did it for... a reason which none of you may ever understand.." screamed Shivaay while his voice reverberated in the guest house

"What reason Bhaiyya? I really don't know what is happening to you. You had been behaving weird for the past few days. I thought its prinku shaadi tension and that you would become normal after prinku shaadi... ab toh you married annika... then what about tia? what about prinku? what about daksh? Did you even think how prinku's life would be with daksh after this? "

"you married a girl forcefully? just for a reason? reason? Is that all you are shivaay? I cannot believe my brother can fall this low" yelled om

"Shut up... Shut up... Shut up..." screamed shivaay while dragging Omkara and rudra away from the hall where Annika was present.

"You want to know the truth? i'll tell you the truth... I married annika because I love her and I can't stand seeing her sacrificing her own life just because she wanted to save prinku. I did what i did, because ..."

*flashback *

*5 days before the wedding*

"Bhaiyya, why do you look so worried?" inquired prinku on seeing a sober shivaay while side hugging him.

"Nothing prinku, you just concentrate on yourself and take care, everything else i'll take care and make sure everything is alright"

"Bhaiyya please tell me na... Am worried seeing you like this..."

"woh toh... there actually is a prospective deal... for our company.If this deal materialises, Oberoi industries would remain on top for the next 20, 30 years. But all of a sudden they say that, all the shares and property of the company should be with a single person... And i don't know what to do.." said shivaay, his voice trailing away

"Bhaiyya, i was joking that you would become 'paraya dan' on marrying tia, but now you have really become paraya dan have you?" sniggered Rudra along with a smirking Om.

"Shivaay , i think i had already made you clear that, i really don't care about shares and properties, nor does Rudra. What matters is you. We have already initiated, transfer process then why do you worry? " said Om calmly .

"om bhaiyya, i think i understood his problem" said prinku suddenly withdrawing her hands away from shivaay's shoulders. "Didn't you say , you need all shares ? Then why didn't you ask me for my shares bhaiyya? Have you already made me an outcast ?" said prinku while tears glistening her eyes.

"Prinku, please don't even think like that...

Its just that, brothers are supposed to shield the sister. Am supposed to guard you. take care of you. Am not supposed to burden you. especially at this moment. You don't need to" said shivaay calmly while omru silently nodded on agreeing to him

"NO... I don't want to talk to any of you guys...

Khanna..." yelled prinku while the brothers tried pacifying her

"khanna... kindly start transfering the shares in my name to bhaiyya's name" said prinku and asked him to hurry up

"prinku... but what about daksh? what if he feels bad that, all your shares aren't in your name?" asked shivaay

"what shares? what isn't in prinku's name?" asked daksh just entering the hall

Priyanka ran to hug Daksh while his eyes where more focussed on shivaay to learn more about the shares.

On hearing , prinku explain her decision of transfering all the shares in her name to Shivaay, Daksh felt his floor slip away. However, he caught himself quick and responded quite enthusiastically "Come on shivaay, do you really think so cheap about me? god ki kasam, Daksh can rule the world on his own earnings... " , turned towards prinku, winked and whispered"And you be prepared to have a rocking honeymoon at Bali, on my own earnings"

Prinku gasped loud and blushed. Daksh hurriedly closed her mouth while the oberoi brothers were worried by the sudden loud gasp of prinku.

"What happend prinku?' asked rudy while daksh said "kuch nahi... kuch bhi nahi " and winked.

Shivaay who was about to give a heartfelt thank you speech to daksh, froze for a second on seeing ...

Shivaay felt like a 1000V shock on seeing...

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Posted: 7 years ago
#2
This is amazing girl. You should have come out of the silent mode sooner. Oh well so glad you are here now and I love this story. Please write the next part, soon.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rachna.KG

This is amazing girl. You should have come out of the silent mode sooner. Oh well so glad you are here now and I love this story. Please write the next part, soon.

Thank you so much rachna .kg.⭐️⭐️ This really means a lot for me. This made my day 😳
Thanks to your encouragement, i have already started writing the second part.
Hope you would like it too.

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Congrats for your first story🤗
Awesome part👍🏼
Edited by Nonie12345 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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something happened
hmm waiting for next part
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Posted: 7 years ago
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AlreasA loving it. Continue soon 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Continue soon
Loved it

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