ShivIka Os|New Feelings|Redux [No Pm]

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Anya

@elysianights

Voyager

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Posted: 7 years ago

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AparnaChinnu

@AparnaChinnu

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

awesome update yar

it was beautiful

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Himanshi

@Blink_Cat

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

Anya😳firstly, welcome, gayab ho jati ho yaaar,

and update ia wow, their new favorite feeling, thanks to dadi that she send her there, aur nikhil ko bhi thankyou,. the instant no was so😆, unknown to himself he was so close to her, and the almost kiss was so good, lock ne bhi kamal kiya,

do write more, gayab ladki.

waiting to read more from your side, make a comeback again soon😳😳

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Kshithi

@Muggle_Diaries

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

Hello Anya,

There are very few people I have seen who can write fan-fiction as elegantly as you have written. It is rare that I come across a piece of writing this interesting.

The flow and transition was smooth. The scenes did not feel forced nor misplaced. The dialog (inner or external) were just right. I could feel what the characters were feeling. Their desire, their possessiveness, their insecurity came right through the screen.

Well done.

You are so talented that I cannot help but give you a suggestion. Please take care of some minor editing problems. Of course, they are very few and often we all overlook them in the hurry. Our thoughts go faster than we can type, isn't it? 😊

I really enjoyed reading this. (From one writer to another)

Looking forward to read more from you.

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Kshithi

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Rose

@Roseville

Beginner

Posted: 7 years ago

You donno how much I have missed your shots 😳

And this was worth the wait! Can't be thankful to you enough for sharing this with us. It's as always Amazing and Lovely.

The raw attraction, confusion was crystal clear here. Shivaay's possessiveness is something we can't overlook and this is what it make us viewers hook to it. Beautifully written. Nothing seems to be cheesy but it was like for real. Every action, thoughts, expression was to the situation.

I'm eagerly waiting for you to write more, will be waiting for the next update patiently ;)

- Rose ❤️