Rikara:Zindegi laayi humein yahan(DBO)(Thank U For 100+Likes A/N PG14)

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The_RomancePen

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Posted: 7 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: nathalie_rs_
This was so we'll written. It was jus perfect... infact it was way beyond perfect. I absolutely loved it.
Thank you so much for giving us this beautiful OS. ❤️

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The_RomancePen

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Posted: 7 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: devildiva21
Beautiful story ❤️ MummaRi and DaddyKara were very sweet and in the end got what they wanted...
loved it

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Barenya

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Posted: 7 years ago

#43

wow so lovely suvly story ❤️sweet mom gauri n rocking daddy omkara just superb ...love so much.👏

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priyadil

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Posted: 7 years ago

#44

Nice OS dear...

The journey of Rikara to mommy Ri and Papa Kara...awesome...

Loved it

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Palakh Aggarwal

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Posted: 7 years ago

#45

This was such a beautiful piece to read sigh kash ye Sab show main hota but pregnant Gauri kelie omkara needs to activate his hormones n jo writers likhte Nai h ye Sab sapne hi bnke rehjayenge

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Aaniya

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Posted: 7 years ago

#46

Thanks for pm..

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The_RomancePen

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Dazzler

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Posted: 7 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: rikara94
How can i miss this beautiful piece😲

Finally read it..and its really really amazing shot yar And emotional too

Just perfect..the way you penned down their emotions, their fears, omkara's fight between heart and mind...was superb aaru👏

I just loved this pregnancy track and ri's midnight cravings😆
That Golgappa vendor🤣i'm still laughing

Thank you so much for sharing this wonderful piece aru🤗

Joythi didi thank you so much 🤗

golgappa vender i loved writing 😆

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The_RomancePen

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Posted: 7 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: -Emerald-
Beautiful OS
Finally happy complete family
Aww lil Om n lil Gauri
Last part ❤️
U penned down so well
It's picturesque
Loved it
Thanks for the pm

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Jayeeta Paul

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Posted: 7 years ago

#49

Superb os...loved their confession...loved their passionate moments...loved the bold Gauri...so they both were blessed with their prince and princess...loved it...thank u 4 pm...