RiKara SS - MUSE - A COLLABORATION -PART TWO UPDATED Pg ONE - Page 3

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Vm is so beautiful...tge story is so heart touching and sad...the feelings of gauri towards him is known...but what about om?did he not feeling anything towards her?
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Oh Gosh..!! 👏
How could I miss this..?! 😲
This is so freaking amazing..
I loved how you created this strong, self cconscious and dabang Gauri..she loved him..but not more than her self respect..maybe he also loved her..but not more than his ego..not more than his phobia of committing..
I loved how you made Gauri express her feelings through those letters..she might write them on her diary..but those pages of her diary are letter for him..
She is remembering their marriage after a certain year..she is remembering the kind of intimacy they shared..
They're close both physically amd mentally..he touched her like no one ever did..not only her body..but her soul also..they touched, loved, exploded each other..but nothing was enough to bind them in a relation called marriage..
Maybe they drifted away..but love is still there..
I loved when she said she thought she was his habit.. ❤️
I loved it when she said she wanted to carry his babies in her womb.. ❤️
I loved when she reminisced how she thought of the moment they shared was moment of love..
I loved how she loved him even when he insulted her..ignored her and let her go..
She might be far away from him..but he still reside in her heart..
I love the GKS..
Continue soonish pleej..
Edited by tasnimrodela - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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And how can I forget the VM..
The female version of Ek dil ek jaan is so enchanting..maine pehli baar suna and I just loved the song..
Aroohi has made an amazing VM for you..
Gauri in that red suit and getting ready for Karva Chauth scene was so perfect..
Even I loved the choti choti intimate scenes of Rikara she added..
Aaru deserve a jhappi from you behna..
Bhej diyo.. 😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
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There is no complain in her voice as such. It only shows she is a better person due to all she has faced with him, because of him.
I always believe everything happens in our life is a lesson and it makes us a better person. So, I love how you are handling this story now


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Posted: 7 years ago
#25
Awesome lovely update dear
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 7 years ago
#26
wow this is amazing
thanks for the pm
continue soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
#27
Behna🤗

First of all i loved the storyline dear..its very interesting

Both parts were outhstanding pooru..i have no words.. Just wow

Its too sad and heart breaking..they separated 😭 because of lack of trust and understanding between them..but she is strong enough

she remembering old memories..you wrote them beautifully dear..

Loved it completely..

You presented this story with a excellent vm made by aaru.. She did great job han..So painful and emotional..loved the song too..wonderful arohi

Continue soon..can't wait poorva


Edited by rikara94 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#28
Superb updates...beautifully portrayed...loved it...thank u 4 pm..
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Awesome parts..
Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: GoWithTheRhythm

Oh My heart
How beautiful the second part was :(
All the pain, the love and the bittersweet memories:(
It was amazing just wonderful ❤️


Thank you so much amel 🤗
You know I feel RiKara is a couple which would give justice to separation also and here she has gone away from him after he had trust issues and then even certified her character ... Yeah she loves him but at the same time she is the woman who was introduced to us in bareilly.

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