It is love or just concern rikara part 5 page 1

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Part 1

Hi friends I am writing this again I hope you support for it

(After marriage Omkara left gauri in barely only he said that marriage is drama)

After one year
In OM

D: I wanted to see Omkaras marriage

J: yes mom I also wanted to see my oms marriage

R: but he is not ready to marry
Om came there
o:what all are you discussing

A: we all wanted to see your marriage

O: what

S: yes how many you will be alone in your life

O: no I don't want to. Marry again

R: what again already you married

O: I mean I don't want to do any commitment in my life again

D: don't worry om your isqabaj will start very soon

R: yes dadi and my second bhabhi also destroy oms car like anika bhabhi did to to shivaya bhayyas car

Om suddenly remember how gauri destroyed his car and he become angry

O: shut up Rudra and I don't want to do marriage so please all of you close this marriage

Om went from there

R: what happened to him I was just joking

D: don't worry when he will meet his takkar ka love he will become like my billu

S: yes dadi love changes everything I wish my om should become artist om again

R: and also boring shayri om so many days over we did not listen one shayri also I am waiting for my beautiful second where are bhabhi I am your devar please come fast in my oms life

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Posted: 7 years ago
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loved the scene when Gauri destroyed Om's car 😆...going down memory lane. Nice.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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The good old memory of Gauri destroying Omkaras Car

Continue soon ;D
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Posted: 7 years ago
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It is love or just concern part 2


D: tomorrow we all are going to village

R: why dadi

D: because I am conducting puja there

S: which puja dadi

D: I am conducting puja for my grand childrens

S: for us why dadi

R: I know why dadi kept pooja for us

S: what you know

R: dadi kept pooja for us to get good wife's

S: shut up

D: billy why you are scolding him he is telling true

S: what my marriage is over she is sitting beside me only I can't do another marriage

A: billuji first listen to dadi

D: billu I am conducting this puja to get good wife's for omru like anika and also I have some jewelleries that I am giving for anika and om rus wife

R: dadi tell to om to get married fast then only I will get chance to marry

S: don't act like kid ok

R: ok but when will om marry

D: one girl will comes in oms life then no one can stop him

J: yes mummyiji I wish that only mummyiji

(in oms room)

O: all are thinking about my marriage but I can't marry because I don't want to marry one more time gauri where is she how is she

J: om what are doing

O: nothing maa

J: ok get ready tomorrow we are going to village

O: why maam

J: because your dadi has conducted pooja for you

O: maam I don't want to come I have work

J: every one is coming please

O: but ma'am

J: I don't know your are coming that's it

O: ok maam

precap(gauris entry
Hi friends how it is please give your comments
Edited by user88295853 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Part 3

Everyone went to village)

R: it is beautiful village

S: yes dadi

D: yes puttar it is beautiful village mine and your grandfather love stared in this village

O; waw dadi

D: i wish you will also get your love here

O: dadi please

J: everyone get freshup we are going to temple now
All: ok

O pov: i am felling something that someone is there here i don't why i am feeling like this .
All went to temple
Pandit : namaste so many year over today you came here nice to meet you
D: yes panditji we are glad to see you
Please make pooja in my granchildrens name

Pandit : ok

J: panditji who done this all flower decorations in this temple
Pandit: this was done by gauri
O: gauri

R: who is gauri

Pandit: she is a selfless girl she consider thay sankarji is her father

Opov: gauri also praying for shankaraji no om she is not that gauri . That gauri is in barely

A: where is she panditji

Pandit: now she is teaching dance to the childrens

R: she is dancer

Pandit: yes she is dancer singer multi talented girl

P: why we are talking about that girl lets start puja

(Puja was over then dadi given two box of jewellers to jhanvi which belongs to omrus wife then they went to see around the temple then they saw a beautiful girl teaching dance to the childrens but om went out of the temple so he did not seen the girl)

A: shivaya see there i think see is only gauri

S: yes i think so

J: she is very beautiful panditji is saying right

R: we can talk with her no

P: why you want to talk with that girl i am tired now so please we can go to home

All: ok

(But one of the jewellery box fell down there only)
(Precap: gauri meet oberois)

Hi friends how it is i hope you like it
Please give me your comments


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Posted: 7 years ago
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Part4


G: today dance practice is over so tomorrow come on time

She started move suddenly she saw a box which was on the ground she picked

G: whose this box I think it is jewellery box and who lost this box there are thinking about it so i should return this to them and this is kept for pooja I think I should ask pandtji about this

G: namaste panditji

Pandit: what you want. Puttar

G: you know about this box it fell down on ground

Pandit: yes puttar it is oberois jewellary box

G: where are they panditji

Pandit: there are in that big haveli which was situated in outside the village

G: ok panditji I will handover this box to them and thank you

In haveli

(Om was in his room )

J: mummyji one jewellery box is missing

D: what you saying

J: yes mummyji one box missing that box belongs to omkars wife

P: o my mata i think it is bad because om is not ready to marry and jewellery box which belongs to his wife that is only missing
I think he will not get married in his life

D: shut up pinky.

G: excusme

A: you are gauri

G: how you know my name

A: panditji told

P: why you came

S: mom please talk nicely

G: actually i came hear to give this box

(Everyone become happy )

P: so you are a thief

D: pinky just shutup

J: thank you puttar where you got this box

G: i got this in temple

D: puttar you know this box is very important to us

G: ok i will go now

A: 1 minute you did not introduce your self

G: my name is gauri kumari Sharma

A: my name is anika this is shivay my husband Rudra my devar jhanvi aunty pinky aunty and this is dadi


G: nice to meet you all

D: thank you puttar

G: its ok dadi its my pleasure

J: gauri tomarrow we are doing pooja at home please come to that pooja

G: sorry. Aunty i have work

R: no way you should come gauri Didi

S: what didi she is the first girl you call didi

R: yes because she is looking like bhabhi i can't call bhabhi no so i called didi its ok didi

G: its ok Rudra

R: call me Rudy and please come
S: yes gauri please come

G: ok bade bhayya and Rudy

A: 1 minute shivay become your bhayya what i am

G: bhojai

A: what is this bhojai

G: bojahi means bhabhi ok bye i will meet tomarrow bye bye

D: she is very good girl

R: she is perfect forour om no

All: shutup Rudra

precap : gauri meets omkara

Hi friends how is todays update if you like it then give me your lovely comments I am waiting

Love you all

by kavita


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Posted: 7 years ago
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Part 5

R: om you know one jewellary box fell down in temple almost we lost it but gauri Didi saw that and retrned that box to us

O: who is this gauri di now

S: om panditiji told about one girl no she is only gauri very nice girl

O: something interested because our Rudy called her Didi

R: om you know she is very beautiful anyways she is coming tomarrow you can also meet her

O: i will see

Rudra and shivaya went to there room

Opov; why this gauri name always coming in front i wish she is not that gauri

Next day
At pooja time

Om is not attending pooja because he does not belife in god
Panditiji : anyone should sing song

A: i know only filmi songs .

P: who will sing the song now

(Suddenly some one started singing she is none anther then gauri everyone memorized by her listening that song om also came down to see who is that suddenly he become shocked to see gauri )

O: stop it

(Gauri become shocked to see om)

S: om what happened

O: why this girl came here

R: she is gauri didi you know her

O: waw you are following me what a game gauri kumari Sharma

G: why i will. Follow you and who is playing game Mr omkara

O: get out of my house

G: if i know this is your house then i will never come to this house

S: om what is this you know her

O: she is mistress shivaya

G: ek jaap devar pe satjayeba who are you to talk about me if any one in your place then i almost kill them but i can't kill you

R: i heard this language somewhere

A: yes i also

S: even me ..

O: stop your thinking. And gauri kumari Sharma get out

(Gauri went from there with crying face )

A: gauri don't go

S: om you know her what you know about her

O: she is doing any thing for money shivay

Pandit: puttar you dont know any thing about her. She is very good girl from ten months in this village there is no divided family because of her because she teached us to live in peace laugh everything today you insulted that shankarjis daughter so there is no use of doing pooja so i am living and i am sorry

(Pandit went from there)

D: om please tell us what do you know about her and if any one in her place then they will not return that jewellery i think you misunderstood her you should say sorry to her

J: om you can't do this you should ask sorry from her because i called her to pooja you can't insult my guest like that

O; ok dadi i will ask sorry

(Precap: gauri left village )
Hi friends how is todays update if you like it then give me your lovely comments I am waiting

love you all

By kavita

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Oh no I missed so many parts
I liked the way the story is progressing
So Om wants to apologize but before that I want him to find out the truth about Ri :D
Let's see what destiny has in store for them
continue soon

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