RiKara DRABBLE - HER

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HER

"Bhabhi kal aap mujhe lunch mein rajma chawal pack karke dena ... kal main apne classmates ke saath library jaa raha hu poora din wahi rahunga. Rudra said to Gauri as she serve some more rice on his dinner plate.

"Achha theek hai Rudra ... hum khana pack kardenge aur saath mein chhass bhi rakh denge ... lekin abhi tum khana finish Karo aur apne room mein chale jaao ... tumhaare bhaiiyaa abhi abhi office se aaye hai aur ...

"Oh ... baadal garjenge ya toofan aaega? Rudra asked concentrating on Gauri's expressions.

"Pata nahi ... lekin mausam ka haal bohot kharaab hai aaj.

"Fikar not bhabhi ... O aapko dekhenge aur unki saare din ki thakaan chhu mantar ho jaaegi. Rudra reassured.

Gauri walked into their room and saw Omkara scribbling somethings in a notebook.

"Khana lagaaun? She asked carefully.

He had still not changed his clothes ... busy with writing ... and again his phone rang.

Gauri sighed helplessly. She swore to her god ... no woman should marry a workoholic. She knew that now that he has not freshened up and eaten he is going to behave like a cranky child.

She massaged the kneaded flour and rolled the chapatis when he called for her. She knew that tone ... it was Volcano Kara ...

"Where is my green file? I had kept it in the side table drawer! Why do you guys even touch my things ... everything is so impposible in this house ... jab koi cheez chahiye hoti hai ... tab woh milti hi nahi hai ... you are so careless Gauri! He almost yelled.

She kept staring at him and let him rant for two whole minutes and then walked to the same side table and took out his green file which was just hidden under two books and kept it near his laptop.

"Aap jaldi se fresh ho jaaiye ... hum khana lagaate hai. She said and left him alone.

He kept looking at the file for some time and then walked to the cupboard to take out his T shirt and pyjama.

He freshened up and went to the dining table where she was serving their plates.

"Rudra be khana kha liya? He asked taking his seat.

"Haan.

"Uski exams ka time table aa gaya? Omkara questioned pouring the glasses of water.

"Agle hafte se hai aur project submission do din baad. Gauri said sitting beside him.

He looked at her for a while and held her hand across the plate to press her palm.

"Sara din beet gaya ... thakaan ho gayi hogi aapko ... bhukh bhi lagi hogi naa ... khana khaa lijiye. She smiled.

"Mirchi ka achaar laakar do naa...


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Posted: 7 years ago
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Eekkss i'm the first one here😆

It was lovely dear
Awesome drabble

A very Understanding wife she is

and friendly bhabhi she is..loved rudy's words 'badal garjenga ya toofan ayega and she said mosam ka hal khrab hai😆

Keep writing
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Perfect, understanding wife
Friendly and caring bhabhi

She is wholesome here

Loved the drabble

Loved title more
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Chiraiyya is a super woman..
She managed the whole house and took care of each and every need of Kara and Ru...
The thing I liked most of this was their equation with each other makes a total whole..Omkara shows gussa, dantofy her, yell at her and lebel her as careless..but end of the day he knows his chiraiyya is the one to be there for him..and Gauri knows whatever he says he cannot have a single moment without her..
They're couple goals..
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ms.Lizzie

Perfect, understanding wife

Friendly and caring bhabhi

She is wholesome here

Loved the drabble

Loved title more


You know Lizzie ... Such subtle scene will suit RiKara very well ... I wanted such scenes to be written for them.

She being the wife ... Knows her man very well ...

Thank you
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: tasnimrodela

Chiraiyya is a super woman..
She managed the whole house and took care of each and every need of Kara and Ru...
The thing I liked most of this was their equation with each other makes a total whole..Omkara shows gussa, dantofy her, yell at her and lebel her as careless..but end of the day he knows his chiraiyya is the one to be there for him..and Gauri knows whatever he says he cannot have a single moment without her..
They're couple goals..


Correct ... They are each others habits and such small tussles keep happening everyday ... hungry+Angry = Hangry men are not easy to deal with and here Gauri knows ... 'Yeh sabto Roz ka hai'... Om knows if he is her Mr. Right she is his Mrs. Always Right ... He just cannot do without her. So they are couple goals.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Loved it❤️
Chiraiyaa is soo understanding wife
Loved the devar vabi relation.
Kara is hardworking businessman.. It suits him

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Awesome
Super woman chiryya knows better to handle his hubby
Is really om want "mirchi ka achar" but why he didn't even like golgappa
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: AfrinHrid

Loved it❤️

Chiraiyaa is soo understanding wife
Loved the devar vabi relation.
Kara is hardworking businessman.. It suits him


Thank you so much Afrin ❤️
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: chils

Awesome

Super woman chiryya knows better to handle his hubby
Is really om want "mirchi ka achar" but why he didn't even like golgappa


Thank you

Yeah Om did not like gold gappa because he felt the roadside junk food is unhygienic.

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