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Originally posted by: Ms.Lizzie
I m thoroughly impressed.
This is way better than what I had planned long back.When writing the prompt, I was sure that Tej should be shown in a better light and Omkara should understand his father better.You have captured both beautifully.It was sad Dhruv passed away, but life is mixed with birth and death. I m really happy that you named their son Ved because in all my stories RiKara's son is called VedFinally Om called Tej Papa... It was emotional.I believe it's not gauri but their child who can bring TejKara closer. Omkara has to be a father first in order to understand Tej. Dhruv will look down at a happy familyIt was brilliant dear. Keep writing.
thanks alot for reading and commenting on it lizzie..
im glad that u enjoyed it..
This is way better than what I had planned long back
This line made my day. i am too happy that i could reach ur expectations..
i was skeptical to kill dhruv as i always wanted a happy family for Rikara but making him overcome his disorder will make it a typical show script so i have chosen the other way to make it more real.
that was why i made a point that probably dhruv came to their life to give om his father. though dhruv is physically absent between them his memories will always be treasured by everyone especially om gauri and tej.
yes more than gauri it has to be rikara's baby who has to get om and tej closer. Tej has done many wrongs with jhanvi and om but even to forgive tej first om has to be dad then he will realise his father's pain and will be able to forgive him.
the writers made tej commit so many mistakes in the show that its not easy for any son to forgive him and that was why i chose this plot to make om realise that tej do cares for him and his family and love him so much that he bore all the pain all alone to save him and his wife from the pain..
finally thanks lizzie for the prompt and it made me write sumthing that is appreciated by so many..
thank u dear..
keep giving us more prompts so that we get more writers on this forum..
