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Nice, it's public now.

Lovely update.. awesome it is.. hope Mallika understands.. update soon .pls

I really don't understand Mallika... She has nvr bothered to b with Annika... Their parents nvr spoke to Mallika.bout daksh ka rishta... Mallika.nvr told her parents how wrong daksh was for Annika... N Mallika expects Annika to HV told about herself n shivaay... Y? When in past 3-4 years has she been a friend to Annika... When annika's frnds we're getting married...did she ever speak to Annika about what she wanted? Frankly she has no right to be this upset ... Kapoor family is weird... Parents don't discuss anything with their elder daughter...sisters don't share ( abhay n Priyanka knew bout shivaay first time they met Annika but mallika doesn't know even after 3 years) ... If Mallika hadn't kind of understood it's very stupid... If shivaay n Annika hated each other y wud shivaay give her a lift everyday for 3 years? N that's something annika's parents as well as shivaay's family knew ...

Wow excellent update except the last part (malika)... I mean what makes her so much angry that she didn't try to listen anything... where she was when annika suffer alone in every step of her life whether it's her personal or professional phase ... suddenly so much concern for annika seriously I'm not able to buy that part 😕

N for me annika accept the proposal z a good one because in this ff she z always forgiving nature whether for tia or Daksh... n this time it's shivaay her true love so at least for her own happiness she can give one chance n I think it's not a crime 😉

But the most interesting part was Daksh ka major chop 😆 I just loved that ...

Thanks for the pm dear n eagerly waiting for the next update...

Shivaay has made up for some of the mistakes but i guess the real test begins now...i always thought of Malika finding out first because of her relationship with the two and i understand that she's hurt but pls she should not take it to the extreme.

I cannot believe she forgave him.. I'm sorry but to that's just not realistic. It's not about making Shivaay pine.. it's about self-preservation. This relationship almost killed her/destroyed her..it had turned into almost a toxic poison coursing through her veins... how are you prepared to risk putting yourself through that again?? And ok let's say for arguments sake she says yes because she still loves Shivaay, I don't think anyone in real life could jump into the guy's arms and forget everything in like moments..she would have been more cautious and taken some time..maybe said let's ake this slow becuase I need to learn to trust you again with my heart ..not tear up and sing along like a desperate romantic fool and forget months of pain/self-humilliation just like that...

Apologies if my comment is very critial/rude.. I like your writing and story but I just don't like the direction it's going because it's reminding me of how the show is..

Awesome update!!

Originally posted by: vivacious_gurl

I really don't understand Mallika... She has nvr bothered to b with Annika... Their parents nvr spoke to Mallika.bout daksh ka rishta... Mallika.nvr told her parents how wrong daksh was for Annika... N Mallika expects Annika to HV told about herself n shivaay... Y? When in past 3-4 years has she been a friend to Annika... When annika's frnds we're getting married...did she ever speak to Annika about what she wanted? Frankly she has no right to be this upset ... Kapoor family is weird... Parents don't discuss anything with their elder daughter...sisters don't share ( abhay n Priyanka knew bout shivaay first time they met Annika but mallika doesn't know even after 3 years) ... If Mallika hadn't kind of understood it's very stupid... If shivaay n Annika hated each other y wud shivaay give her a lift everyday for 3 years? N that's something annika's parents as well as shivaay's family knew ...

Fantastic fabulous update

Originally posted by: vivacious_gurl

I really don't understand Mallika... She has nvr bothered to b with Annika... Their parents nvr spoke to Mallika.bout daksh ka rishta... Mallika.nvr told her parents how wrong daksh was for Annika... N Mallika expects Annika to HV told about herself n shivaay... Y? When in past 3-4 years has she been a friend to Annika... When annika's frnds we're getting married...did she ever speak to Annika about what she wanted? Frankly she has no right to be this upset ... Kapoor family is weird... Parents don't discuss anything with their elder daughter...sisters don't share ( abhay n Priyanka knew bout shivaay first time they met Annika but mallika doesn't know even after 3 years) ... If Mallika hadn't kind of understood it's very stupid... If shivaay n Annika hated each other y wud shivaay give her a lift everyday for 3 years? N that's something annika's parents as well as shivaay's family knew ...