Rikara FF: Ishq aur Dard(Part 2- Page 2) 22.12

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Part-1
She flips the channel because she has nothing to do. She just finished her shooting schedule for latest movie which have very tight and she didn't get any chance to rest so for whole one month she took break. Her Uncle advice her to go for holiday but she didn't have any mood to go anywhere. She just wanted to sleep on her bed. She had sleep whole day but now she getting bore. She misses her work. Human natures you see when we have lots of work we need break and when we take break you start to miss your work. After searching many channels randomly, some news catches her attention "The famous Artist Omkara Singh Oberoi is getting married to his childhood friend." She had a shape pain in her heart and she doesn't even know why. It shouldn't matter to her after 2 years. She has already moved on. She shouldn't get bother by such news. She tries to turn off the TV but she couldn't, someone took the remote and turn it off, She raise her head to look to the person but she didn't see the clearly, Why what happen to her eyes, she close and again look to the person. Finally she get the clear view of his blank face like he doesn't feel any emotion, "Why are you watching this news?" He asked her. "Why I was feeling bore so thought to watch it. Why? Can't I even watch the TV?" She ask him while trying to not to see on his face because he didn't take a min to found out what she is thinking right now. "You can, you can to anything but not the things that hurts you Ri." He answers her; she can see the concern in his eyes. She knows that he loves her the most. She gives him small smile "I don't feel hurt I don't even feel anything" I tries to assure him. "Yes, you don't feel anything maybe that is why you have tears in your eyes which are rolling in your cheek." He point out. She looks at him blankly as she doesn't know what he is talking about he wipe her tear and show her. Unknowingly she had tears in her eyes and she doesn't even know about it. "It..it just that" She tries to define herself but nothing comes on her mind. "2 years 2 years Gauri please forget about him." He told her. "Did you forget her?" She asks him further. "Now nothing matters to me and she doesn't affect me. She gets what she always wants. She never loved me It was just me who love her with my heart and soul but she always love him and only him. She only uses me to get him. I have moved on and now it's your turn to forget him". He turns and leaves. "What just she made my baby brother from a joyful and happy person to emotionless person. I know she loved him No correction she loves him now too but she had no rights to use my Aku. For what she did to my baby bro I will never going to forgive her." She told to herself. She wants to huge him, shares her pain with him and cries in his shoulder just like before but she don't want burden herself too. He already has enough but he is easily hide his pain as he is way mature and strong than her but She can see his pain on his face how much he tries to hide but she know my baby brother cum best friend. Just like how he finds out her.

She lie on her bed and close her eyes, 2 years it's being 2 years but still she couldn't forget about him even after he gave her so much pain. Why, why he became so important in her life. It's not like before he came to her life she has no life, than why now everything is change in her life. Why her happiness and sadness depend on him? Happiness? Which happiness she is talking about from 2 years she is only getting pain and sadness in her life. She couldn't enjoy her success; she couldn't able to be smile whole hearty when she gets what always wants. Now she is superstar like her father used to be but she is not happy only because of him. Now she didn't works because it's her passion and dream but to ignore the pain and sadness. She hate the feeling of loneliness even being surrounded by so many people who loves her, respect her adore her the way she is. "I wish I could change my past than I will never let him enter my life and change my life like this. You are the biggest mistake of my life Mr. Omkara Singh Oberoi." She wishes with the lone tear rolling on her face to ear. She wants to cruse him for making her so miserable and one leading a happy life. But she couldn't how can her when she loved Loved? Whom she kidding she love him still now with her heart and soul. She just wish him to get what he always wish for, which she never able to give him. Maybe she will be perfect for him. The thought it self gives her shape pain which she always feels whenever she thought about him with someone else. She wipes her tear "Again I have tear in my eyes. It being 2 years like Aku said but why didn't I move on my life. He is going to move on but why not me. I myself leave him just for his happiness and now he is happy then why not me... Why always end up with silent cry every night..." She asks to herself but couldn't able to answer.

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Please tell me how is it. Do you like it or not. Next chapter will be Omkara POV. I have written this on someother couple but I think this will be perfect for Rikara. I know bada bakwaas sa title hai 😆 but kuch bhi mere mind me aaya hi nahi, agar aap ke pass suggestion hai tho please give me some😳

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Index
Part One- Page One
Part Two- Page Two
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The first chapter is quite interestingly..Omkara is getting married to someone else while Gauri still loves him...I wonder what happened two years ago that changed her life..?? Waiting for Omkara's POV...
Your title reminded me of Omkara's dialogue..."Ishq sirf ek sauda hain, jisme dil deke dard khareeda jata hain.."
Continue soonish..
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Originally posted by: tasnimrodela

The first chapter is quite interestingly..Omkara is getting married to someone else while Gauri still loves him...I wonder what happened two years ago that changed her life..?? Waiting for Omkara's POV...
Your title reminded me of Omkara's dialogue..."Ishq sirf ek sauda hain, jisme dil deke dard khareeda jata hain.."
Continue soonish..


Thank you😳

Will post next chapter tomorrow😛
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Awesome loved the start.
Continue soon.
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Thanks😳
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Originally posted by: -Chipper-Treat-

Awesome loved the start.
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Interesting update
What happened between them?
Continue sooon.
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Originally posted by: AfrinHrid

Interesting update

What happened between them?
Continue sooon.


Thank you, Will update soon😳
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Part 2

He looked at his sister in law's who means more than his sister smiley face which gave satisfaction about his decision from his room's window which gave me perfect view of garden where all his family is gather to discuses about his engagement and His Anika bhabhi has biggest smile. Of course she will be happy as her dream going to be fulfill her sister and her dever going to get married like she always wish for. He saw her so happy after many days. Glow on her face became brighter as she is pregnant too. I look at to my big brother who is giving her angry stare to as in excitement she becomes out of control but she ignores him completely which make his brother frustrated. He loves Shivaay frustration when Anika gives dam about him.

He knows that his big bro is not isn't happy with this alliance. He is worried about him and his bride's happiness. Shivaay knows that he have not moved on from his past. He will never be happy with this marriage and couldn't able to make his bride happy too but he keeps his mum just for his brother as Om told him that he has already move on and now his past will not bother him. Om had promise his family that now he will be happy and will not think about his past. To prove them that he again starts to go to his studio which he left 2 years ago but wouldn't able to work. He feels that he lost his touch in Art. He even joins the business to help his brother. Now he is ready for the marriage which makes everyone from the family convince with him but shivaay knows better.

Omkara make promise but will he able to the same? He questions himself. Will he able to give her that place in his life but he wants to make her happy but will he able to? He don't know will he ever to give her that place which already belongs to some one else. He even ask her that to think once again about this alliance as he don't want to keep her on dark and broke her hope and heart again but she told him that she have faith on her that she will make her place in his heart and on his life and he will give her right and love which he already give to her. He can understand her. She loves him from time she gets to know what love is. She is the one who is always with him to support when she left him. She comes as biggest support in these two years.

Then His eyes landed to his mother who looks happy but sad at same time and he knows why. She is happy that at least he will be move on but she also concerned that Is he take decision with his heart or not? His mom is his life. He can do anything for her.

His eyes went on her "His would be bride" who is sitting with her friends. She has red hue on her cheek maybe her friends tease her. He smiles at himself. "My one decision gives so many smiles. In two years I became so much selfish that I never saw people over my soreness. But now I will not give people anymore pain. They will be happy. He will make them happy at any cost." He promises to himself.

"But are you happy?" he ask himself. "Yes, of course his whole family is happy then why won't I will." He tries to lie himself but he knows on his heart that he isn't feel any excitement which as a broom he should feel or what he used to feel when she was with him. He doesn't feel that happiness when Bhavya smile which he used to feel when he saw her smile. "Stop it om, Why are you thinking about her? She left you. You should think about Bhavya not her" His close his eyes and make him remember himself that She has left him. Her career, her dreams are more important than him and their love. Her love for him is not strong to get first place on her life. Then why can't he forget her. She has moved on her life with her dreams and success which she always wants, for what she left him but why not he? He again looks at Bhavya and remembers that she was his past and Bhavya is his present and future. He should think about his family and her happiness. Bhavya his best friend and soon to who help him to come over his darkness. Bhavya was with him when he lost himself in sorrowful. She leaves everything behind to be with him. He can't be selfish. He mocks his fate. The person he love more than his life left him for her own selfish reason and he could never love that girl who love him more than anything. Why? Why can't he love the person who loves him, why he is still stick to the past which only gave him soreness? He wants to move on he really want but he is not able to? Why? She is happy with her life than why not him?

"I cruse the day you enter my life Gauri Shrama. I cruse the time I fall in love with you. I hate myself for giving you so much privilege to destroy me. I hate each and everything that links me to you but I can't hate you why? I want to hate to with so much power but I can't, I can hate everything but not you. I wish I could change my past. I wish I never met you...

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