Shivika - The Royal Rejection - FF [Ch7-Pg17]

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javeria

@Javeria3991

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Posted: 8 years ago

#31

Fantastic update
I love these line: The name that's written on your hands doesn't define what you are made of. Your world is shattered, but it's not destroyed. Your pain is lodged in your throat like a thorn right now, but you will survive... albeit you'll carry the scars, you'll probably even carry the poison and darkness of this with you... but you'll survive and you'll learn how to build yourself from those shattered pieces.

Looking forward to read next chapter.

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Amber

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Rohini

@ithihaas

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Posted: 8 years ago

#33

Sarah,

It was wonderfully written update... all the emptiness that these two people are going through has been written so well that I could literally feel that gloominess and the sadness myself.. your words have magic that have engulfed me and left me wanting for more ...

So Shivaay is broken inside and still trying to give Annika that strength...

There seems to more to this Shivaay's side ... he is brother of Daksh, the man who almost destroyed Annika with his cruelty, yet he has some softness for her...

Daksh & Annika were lovers..hmm... Why did Daksh leave her on the altar and if the Oberoi family itself has arranged for the marriage of Shivaay with Annika then the family of Shivaay is fine with her as daughter in law ?

I am intrigued of the lady is who brought tea to Shivaay .. What is Daksh enmity with both Annika and Shivaay ? From his talks, its kind of evident that he hates both of them and wanted them to suffer...

Will Shivaay misunderstand Annika & Daksh ? I dont want that ... already that poor soul is going through so much and a misunderstanding from him would only add to the woes !

I know as is when the story progresses, I will get to know the answers.. eagerly waiting for your next updates...

I am in awe of your writing !

Love

Rohini

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Amber

@amberose

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Anya

@elysianights

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Posted: 8 years ago

#35

Sarah!

Girl you are literally surprising me with each chapter I swear and believe me I'm in love with the way you write. Really! It's that amazinggg!

And I'm grateful of you that you are updating it everyday, just keep going like this.

Loving this Shivaay to the core ❤️ Man!! He is just too shady and mysterious. Daksh! He is a Devil, and I'm getting the Idea of what type of relation both the brothers share. Royal life are always good to see from outside but once you see it from inside, you will never ever want to go there even though it promise you luxury and name.

And who was the girl Man!?? Looking forward to know her identity.

Do update it soon.

Love,

-Anya.

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Amber

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Rohini

@ithihaas

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Posted: 8 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: ---Sarah---

Thank You, Rohini! I absolutely love your name.
I always look forward to your comments.
Like I said Shivaay is confused and Anika is suspicious and they both are stubborn😆
Daksh is a chantu Mai😆

Thank You so much, Rohini. I really appreciate your words.❤️

Thank you Sarah for writing back to me..

Please do share if you have written anything before on Shivika .

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Aparna

@Apu_915

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Posted: 8 years ago

#38

Amazing Update!

You described the emotions so beautifully. Shivaay's pain then his care and the way he was astounded by Anika's beauty and then recovered that quickly- everything was written just so beautifully 🤗

I love Shivaay here, silently providing Anika with the much needed support even when he is torn between his family's mission and Anika. Just loving the way the story is progressing 😊

Waiting for the nxt!

Love ❤️

-Aparna

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vriddhi

@vriddhi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#39

hey!!
loved it... again a fabulous update... too good... I just love ur writing... the way u write and shows so many different shades of a character and that too so gracefully... phenomenal!!
I lv this story... so shivaay is helping annika in healing herself and bcoz he himself is broken so he doesn't want her to be like him... it's interesting... firstly he was with her all the time bt when he saw her with daksh he just left from there, why????
want to know and read so much of this story...what i believe is that annika will bounce back bt in her own way and will show daksh who she is... she is surely not gonna be like damsel in distress who wants someone to save her... she will surely won't fall weak at least in front of him... I hope I'm guessing right...
Daksh is a devil... he is cruel... he broke her and now he is just rubbing more salt on her wounds... he is disgusting...

shivaay and annika both r mystery and another mystery is that girl who gave him coffee...and what is the past they share... would lv to read more of it... plz continue soon... eagerly waiting for another update and of ur reply too... I lv reading replies to my comments... thanks for this story

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