TS - Unbreakable [ ShivIka, RiKara, RuVya and Soumya ]

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IAdoreYou

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Posted: 7 years ago

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@BoonAndBane

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Posted: 7 years ago

Res😳😳

Unres😛😛

This was pretty awesome, Harshada.😳😳

Believe me, more than anything I want Om to return in the mansion and see what all has happened after he was gone. 🥱🥱

I admired Jahanvi and Shivaay's bond and this is what causes the actual pain. 😭😭

I am glad that you have decided to incorporate all the couples in this one-shot. After all their bond is Unbreakable .😆😆

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chocopie369

@chocopie369

Explorer

Posted: 7 years ago

Hii Harshada

Hope u r dng fine now

Coming to update

This is what exactly I want it to be in show

Om calling Janvi as Mrs.Oberoi is a much awaited scene.

Donno whether it happens or not

But u made me happy by writing a TS on it

With the name of laal ishq itself I found myself blushing..

Waiting for next update

Take care

-sushma❤️

Edited by chocopie369 - 7 years ago

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Priyaarora570

@Priyaarora570

Beginner

Posted: 7 years ago

It is amazing. I want the same to happen in the show. I agree it would be hard for Om to believe it. Would be waiting to read further.

Thanks for the pm😊

P.s. I also love rumya😉

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NONIE

@Nonie12345

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

Fantastic part Harshada

I loved how Omkara answered back to Jahnavi and called her as Mrs tej Singh Oberoi 👏

The scene between Rikara was so emotional⭐️

P.S- I never expected Jahnavi to behave like that with Shivaay in the show😡

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Krishi

@Black_Maniac

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Posted: 7 years ago

Res

Arey yaar, first page reh gaya:/

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Hey Harshada!

This was amazing.

Poor Om... He would get the biggest shock of his life, when he will come back *sigh*.

Jhanvi is such a sorted character, well she was, until the fiasco happened,

it is actually hard to believe she did that:(

Okay, so you are including all of them here. The three pairs ?!

Wow, it would be intriguing to see all of them coming up together once again.

I'm still hoping against hope that the end game should be Rumya.😃

*fingers crossed*.

Anyways, can't wait to read what role Saumya has to play, here.

I love her too.

And I hope things are better on your end harshu.

Cheers

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GoWithTheRhythm

@GoWithTheRhythm

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

Loved it :D

How Om believed Rudra but had hope that maybe maybe his mother hadn't asked Shivaay to leave

loved how Gauri hugged him crying and how he realized he hadn't even met her since he returned and fell even deeper in love with her once he knew that she cried because Anika and Shivaay had left

The best part was when he asked her to come along, to find Shivika

would love to see that on screen

Wonderfully written, the emotions were nicely portrayed

continue soon👏

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Shaina744

@Shaina744

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

Hi Harshada Di...
Love the update...
Really wanted to see this on the show...
On called Janvi as Mrs Oberoi... His anger is totally justified...
Now OmRi is going to find their Bhaiya and Bhojai...
Tnq so much for pm...waiting for the next part

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vriddhi

@vriddhi

Explorer

Posted: 7 years ago

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hey!!
firstly thanks for pm
coming to this update... I just loved it and it's amazing... fabulous... in fact even in serial I'm just waiting for omkara's entry now... I so want to see his reaction which will be more interesting than shivika vanvaas in jungle...
bt one thing I really wanted to say about serial that isn't it weird that annika is wearing no jewellery bt still they r having car worth lakhs I mean tej let shivika take car with them bt not jewellery... wow!!
coming back to update... just too good... u r an amazing writer... plz continue soon... eagerly waiting for another update

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