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Posted: 7 years ago

#11

Beautiful Shot.

If only something similar plays out on the show as well.

" Ramayana would end with Ram's victory,as always ".

That was a strong punch line.

I hope to see that coming true, soon.

Cheers

-jennie

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Posted: 7 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: ridz13sdqt
Woww.. this is beautiful.. I am hoping it's like this in the show too.. 😳

Thank you!

The show may take this in a totally different direction. I don't think character consistencies are on top of any creatives priority list when writing for daily soaps 😆

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#13

Originally posted by: Ms.Lizzie
Beautiful
Hope they show something like this in show

Because I don't think Jhanvi is unreasonable mother and ask Shivay to leave

She knows om is Happy with what he has and she will never force him into business by evacuating Shivay

Thank you. I love your writing and your comment means a lot.

I wish the characters are made to play characteristics that are consistent with their basic nature or atleast the story is written in a way that shows why a character changes to do something unexpected.

From what I have seen Jahnvi is rather cool about how her children handle their affairs. If that changes I hope there is some good justification.

It irks me though that characters like Shivaay and Om written as leaders in their field are made to do stupid things.

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Posted: 7 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: sosweetsumi
such a beautiful story
wow

Thank you 😊

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
Brilliant OS!!

Thank you👍🏼

Originally posted by: daisydee425
Wonderful

Thanks a bunch 😊

Originally posted by: idolovestories
Wow

Thank you 😊

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#15

Originally posted by: .Dalisay.
Superb shot. 👍🏼

Thank you 😊

Originally posted by: AnjuRish
Wow this is truly s s o style .hope CVS do something similar

Thanks 😊.

I would like a proper story and some justifiable reason for the vanvaas. Hopefully that happens.

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#16

Originally posted by: arshifansiri
Beautiful os!!

Thank you!😊

Originally posted by: sky-if
Aw! This was lovely! Everyone in character and what we'd expect from Jhanvi 👏

Thank you😛

I do like Jahnvi in some ways and would feel sad to see her do something that hurts the unity of the family. Out of the senior set in OM, Jahnvi and in some ways Shakti have been the keepers. So destroying that to make way for a separation needs to be justified with some good writing.

Originally posted by: AnnzSageflower7
What a satisfying read. Thanks for penning this so beautifully

Thank you. Appreciate the comment 😊

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Posted: 7 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: DisneyDreamer
Loved the os but wrf to the show, I think Tej is playing the role of kaikeyi.

Thank you 😊

I am an irregular watcher of the show and a far more irregular to the forum 😆 I don't mind it being Tej, Pinky, Shakti or heck even Daadi as long as the story leading up to it is worth it.

I do dislike the puppet master and puppet routine though.

Originally posted by: farinaks
Lovely amazing khidkitod incredible
Filled with loads of hope

Thank you 😊

I do believe the end is a foregone conclusion even in the serial itself. The bond between the brothers would be unbreakable.

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Posted: 7 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: GayathriV
Excellent!
Amazing...Jhanvi's characterization is fabulous!
I also believe that Jhanvi also part of Vanvaas drama...hope they will show something like this..

Thank you 😊

Both Shivaay and Omkara are characters written to be intelligent and smart. Jahnvi was also part of the Oberoi business I believe and IMO she is the coolest among the four seniors. So wanted to write something that justifies these characterizations.

Originally posted by: Jennie.
Beautiful Shot.
If only something similar plays out on the show as well.

" Ramayana would end with Ram's victory,as always ".
That was a strong punch line.
I hope to see that coming true, soon.

Cheers
-jennie

Thank you 😊

If this is inspired from the epic, then the end is a foregone conclusion 😆 Plus I don't know if anyone would like to see Svetlana of all villains win in the end 😉

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Posted: 7 years ago

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A big thanks to everyone who read, liked, commented on the OS. 😛

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