Obro's Drabble: Lafzon ka yeh Rishta Nahi~(3/12/2017)

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hello guys...
Kirthi here...

This is an Obro's drabble based on vanvaas...
Hope you like it...

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~~~~Lafzon ka yeh Rishta Nahin~~~~

Shivaay hugged his brothers for the last time before leaving...
Tears welled up in his eyes...

Cupping their faces he smiled at them through his tears...
Shivaay:"Promise me you Will always remain happy..."

Rudra hugged his brother crying...Shaking his head...
Rudra:"how can we be happy if you are not with us...Bhaiyya..."

Om:"Maat javo Shivaay...we can take care of everything...please don't go..."

Shivaay:" Om...everything will be fine..."

Rudra:"No it won't Bhaiyya...Nothing will be fine...Shivaay ke bina OmRu nahi...aur OmRu ke bina Shivaay nahi..."

Shivaay hugged his two little brother's close to him...

Shivaay:"I''ll be there for you always...No matter where I'm..."

Shivaay pulled out of the hug and held out his hand...
Shivaay:"one for all..."

OmRu burst out crying...

Shivaay:"one for all..."

OmRu kept their hands above his...the hands which held theirs when they stumbled...the hands that feed them when they were hungry ...The hands that fought for them when they were in trouble...the hands that supported them when they were broken...the hands those fought their battles...

Tears rolled down their eyes...

Annika cried for her husband, Her Shivaay who had bravely put on a smile even when his heart was breaking...She cried for her brothers-in-law...who were broken into a thousand pieces with pain...

Shivaay:"One for all..."
He said his voice breaking with pain...

OmRu:"All...for...one..."

Shivaay:"one for all..."

OmRu:"All for one..."
Shivaay blinked away his tears...
It hurt him to leave his brothers...but he had promised...promised Badi Ma, that he would leave his entire property in OmRu's name and leave OM...so that his brother's can step out of his shadow and grow...and not be dwarfed by his fame...And he couln't say no to badi Ma who loved him as her own son...

Slowly he pulled out his hands...he had to step back to let his brothers to learn to walk themselves...
He took his suitcase and walked backwards...

Shivaay:"Annika...let's go..."
He said calmly to her...

Shivaay held out his hands...Annika placed her hand in his...

And holding her hands Shivaay walked out of the OM...

As they reached outside Shivaay sat down on the stairs unable to control his emotions anymore...leaning onto Annika, Shivaay cried...

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Guys how was it...?

Let me know through your comments and likes...and also provide suggestions...

Kirthi...

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Kirthi dear
You made me emotional😭
Beautifully written and I loved every dialogues. 👏 🤗
Would love it as an ff😉

Love
Krishna
Edited by krish_10 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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awesome update yar...
Totally loved it
it was tooo emotional
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Posted: 7 years ago
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amazing kirti, so emotional...
its gng to so emotional to watch t epi..
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Posted: 7 years ago
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beautifully written
waiting fo this track in IB since ages
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Posted: 7 years ago
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i cant say will i be able to see this episode ever
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: krish_10

Kirthi dear

You made me emotional😭
Beautifully written and I loved every dialogues. 👏 🤗
Would love it as an ff😉

Love
Krishna

Aww...Krish...😊
I was feeling so emotional after the Vanvaas promo shoot vala video segment came out...😭
penned this down because of that...
Inspiration is playing ankh micholi these days...😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Emotional painful heart wrenching
Everyone is writing on this track. ...in this 1 hour I've read 4 stories on vandals track. ...all rights bend to bring tears in my eyes
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU

awesome update yar...

Totally loved it
it was tooo emotional

Thank you dear...😊
Have been waiting for vanvaas since the 1st promo...but now that it's right at the corner, can't help but feel sad for ShivOmRu...And the obahu's and Dadi...😭
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Blink_Cat

amazing kirti, so emotional...
its gng to so emotional to watch t epi..


Himanshi...😊
Thank you dear...
Yeah it's really going to be emotional...😭
Is feeling the pain even from the promo...tho episode ka Lys hoga...😭

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