ShivIka SS || Tera Intezaar || Chap 2 - page 8 ||

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hello ishqbaaziyans... How are you all guys??

Oops..! You don't know me right? Well, like you all I'm also a ishqbaaz viewer and my name is Tulika and I am a big fan of Shivika. You might be interested to know more about me isn't? 😛 Okay,I'll tell you. I'm living in Kolkata ( a bengali girl 😛) and by profession, I am still studying 😭 😭 which I don't like to do.. 😕

My basic introduction done.. Now your turn...! Do let me know about yourself friends.

Okay, now let's come to the point. I likes to write stories on television couple and nowadays I'm roaming in this forum and found some really good writers here aur mere andaar jo writing bhoot hai usne kaha chal kuch Shivika pe likhte hain... And then after thinking a lot, finally this concept popped into my mind and here I'm representing my very first story on Shivika.

I don't know what I have wrote here, I don't know will you find it interesting or not but still I'm expecting a comment from you all. Hope I'll get it very soon. 😛

Now.. Now, enough of my Bakwaas... Enjoy the piece of writing... !!!!!

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Shivika Short Story


|| Tera Intezaar ||




Zard fazayein chhu ke guzar gayi..

Khwabon mein teri yaadein bhar gayi..

Jeene bhi na de mujhko ye pyar tera..

Sadaaon ko meri tera intezaar..

Baahon ko meri tera intezaar..




He walked in his room and finds his room same as before, each and every single things are kept on it's place. He was adoring his things which he left two years back when suddenly he heard her saying, "I told you, when you will return, you will find everything same as before which you left."

He looked his side way and take a look on her replying, "I thought you would have left the house by now."

"My old shoes will leave this house." She walked in hurried and stood opposite to him. "This is my house."

He gave her a look arching his one eye brow, she too gave him the same attitude taking one step towards him. Under her gaze, he felt something infused in his heart, he moved his eyes from her asking, "What are you still doing here?"

"Tera Intezaar. Your wait." She replied instant looking into his eyes.

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Some idiotic piece of writing isn't? But please, please don't throw egg, tomatoes, kali coffee or whatever... 😛😛😛 You can tell me anything in your comment. Everything welcome...



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Posted: 7 years ago
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Edited by _snow.flake_ - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Interesting teaser...
Shivaay returned after 2 years and Annika waiting for him...
I am looking forward to this story ...
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Intiguing Update!
Can't wait to read more. Update Soon 😊
BTW even I'm a Bengali & I live in Kolkata as well Tulika 😃
Lots of love ❤️
-Aparna
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: ithihaas

Interesting teaser...

Shivaay returned after 2 years and Annika waiting for him...
I am looking forward to this story ...

Thanks dear, I'm glad that u find it interesting.. 😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Apu_915

Intiguing Update!

Can't wait to read more. Update Soon 😊
BTW even I'm a Bengali & I live in Kolkata as well Tulika 😃
Lots of love ❤️
-Aparna

Hey Aparna...
Wow..!! finally found a bengali girl here.. 😆

Btw thanks.. 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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interesting start :D
I am more a RiKara Fan but still nicely written :D
Let's see what happens next

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: GoWithTheRhythm

interesting start :D

I am more a RiKara Fan but still nicely written :D
Let's see what happens next

Oops.. Even I like lambe baal wale bhaiya.. 😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Woo this is awsome, something new
Two years is a long time? Wonder what happened? Y he left and y would she wait for so long? What relation they share? Want to read more

What I loved the most about the prologue the way you have written their exchange of words after two long years, the way he questions her and her tadi/attitude is awesome (With the authority that she claimed to own the house is superb)

Will be waiting eagerly for next update
Please make it soon
Much love!
.Saumya.

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