RiKara TS- Ranjishein - last part - Pg 14 (completed)

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Farri25

@Farri25

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#11

Me here sitting and thinking how you manage between exams and something so good as this !!!

I've had a breakup with my studies since the time I fell for RiKara...😆

I don't want to hope of something like this onscreen and have a heartbreak later... they won't think of showing this much..🥱

We're already buddies Savvy ! Waiting for the next PM ! 😃

Good Luck for your exams ! 😃

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mina

@minamma

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#12

Great job savi

And please concentrate on your exams first

Dont take pressure

I know you wont ditch me

About this

Its just wonderful

Hope to see the same in show too...

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Srivalli

@Srivalli.t

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#13

Awesome start!!

Loved it.

Guri is heartbroken..

He has broken her trust n I really don't want her to forgive him so easily..

Hope we can get to see something like this in show but we all know it's quite impossible..soo sure this time also cvs r going to disappoint us..

Very well written..

Eagerly waiting for the next part.

Plz continue soon..

Thanks for d pm:)

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Swagata

@Aphrodite26

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#14

Loved it .. continue soon dear..

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Roaiba

@roaiba

Explorer

Posted: 7 years ago

#15

Oh gosh, this really hurts 😭 she is doing exactly what he did to her 💔 loving it so far and I'm intrigued to see where you'll take this

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AparnaChinnu

@AparnaChinnu

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#16

awesome update yar

Totally loved it

But in the show i really have no expectation... because they will brush it off as a comedy but it's not so fun...

Ya they were drugged but wat ever they did was...I have no justification

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BIaddict

@BIaddict

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#17

I would love love love if this happens. But I have very little hope, they will make this go away in a comedy track sadly 😭

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praj

@Gratitude_Me

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#18

Amazing start..I wanna know how he reacts to this now.

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Saivir

@Saivir

Explorer

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#19

Savvy please lend your brain to Harneet .

I hope CVs would see this and copy the idea.

This is absolutely freaking awesome and loved both your Om and Gauri.

Waiting to see how it shapes up❤️

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RingsOfSaturn

@RingsOfSaturn

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#20

Love it,

At first I was thinking where you are going with this when Gauri said, enough talks.. ., let's get down to business.

😉

But never saw it coming, ouch, Omkara better be ready to be stabbed.

I agree with you, don't want the track to end in comedy, brushed under the carpet, coz that wouldn't be the case if the girls had done it.

We know Shivaay accusing Anika with Daksh, Om accusing Gauri with Arjun and Ridy accusing Bhavya...

All this without proof.

The girls have proof .

We want some anger, angst, pleading and then closure.

Continue dear, looking forward to next update

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