Finding Aadya - Rikara OS (Changed #7)

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Farri25

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Posted: 8 years ago

#11

SURPRISE SURPRISE !

Kashish gives changed #7 before Sunday.. yay ! 😃

I hope that doesn't mean no update coming sunday...😊

Baby Aadya looks cute 😊

Already in luvv with papakara !

I can see him as a grreeaatt husband in the future !😳

MamaRi maanjaye ab 😊

Thank you for the update !

TYSM for PMing...

❤️

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kashishsr

@kashishsr

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Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: _PrincessPooru_
Coming to the next part 😳

And we meet the new vogue of businessmen ... He is going to gift her that village 😲 (Pooru shocked ... Kash rocked) ...
This dangerously handsome man is a delight ... He is going to win her back what come MAY! such an Omkara is genuinely the need of the hour.

And with kabir we realize how much of a mechanical man Omkara had become ... His manager could see him softening now.

"Home is where the heart is." *Sigh* ... RiKara in Kashmir! My expectations are of top notch level now!

Thank god Omkara has so much of brain ... He checked into her details before going to see her or Adya *How UnIshqBaazically Sensible!)

What i feel here is he is reading into the details and relating it to the chirpy chirraiyya he knew ... He saw that she has changed but to what extent ... He does'nt know! And so he is being conclusive about how Gauri made a frantic decision of adopting ... I felt like MAN! get over yourself ... Yeah she missed you. She loves you ... But she needed something which only you snatchdd away from her ... A family! Om certainly does not have a clear idea of Gauri's maturity ... (Om ab Gauri ko samajhne ki koshish karega)

And for that reason ... I felt it was okay for him to panic after seeing Adya just as her one month old baby ... He deserved a shock like this...

" They could have as many biological children as they wanted - she didn't need to adopt."
UFFF ☺️ ... This man is desperate and she is so totally irresistible ... Now I hope for some sanskaari stuff also ...

Hema aunty and her two unwed daughters ... Oh my my ... I so wanted such a twist 😆 now make Hema aunty talk about the marriage alliance to Omkara in front of Gauri ... Mazaa aaega 🤣

And he meets Adya and realizes that she is more than someone who could fill his void in Gauri's life ... This man is having way too much of sense ... My IB watching logics are not able to bear with him 😆

"Hello baby. It's great to meet you Aadya. I'm your father." ... Kash ... Girl you have my heart ❤️ ... I love Omkara ... Not just that he wants his wife back ... He has happily accepted his family 😭 ...

This is my second most favorite part of the series ... I love love love adya ... As I said previously ... I want to see some AdKara moments ... Daddy Kara is goals ... RiKara sharing responsibilities ... Now that I know he is so desperate ... Please add some red sanskaari tinges 😉 ...

And I suggest that actually scripting a chirpy, bubbly and talkative jyoti maasi is a good idea 😳

You ended with this, I'll start with it. Do you want Jyoti to 'Ek Jhaap' both of us? You know what you've planted the idea in my head and now it's happening. Soon there will be special appearance from Jyoti in Kashmir. If she gets annoyed it's on you Pooru😆.

'Vogue of businessmen' 😆 I love it. Basically he still carries the guilt of stealing her home from her (even if Kali had already made it un-livable there), and this time round he won't do that.

Reading about Aadya on paper is different to seeing her min real. Firstly he would have already subconsciously resented the baby because of the heart attack her existence had just given him and secondly because it's so random to him that Gauri would adopt. He doesn't know about her natural maternal instinct and the hardships that instilled it in her - they need to talk for all that to come out. So he reasons with himself... she's desperate to adopt... she's lonely... she misses me.

Girl, I haven't written romance in my whole life, toh sanskaari kahan se aayega? Someone asked me on the AT a couple days ago to write them something steamy about RiKara, and I was like 'main... really?' and I referred them to you. If you have some spare time go and look at that conversation... it'll be really hard to find so if I were you I would take my word for it😆.

Yes a sweet jealousy twist that was actually inspired by your request for jealous Ri a while ago. Hema and her two daughters😆.

You can drop IB logic at the door before stepping into this Changed world Pooru, it will save you a lot of head scratching.😆

What's your fav part Pooru?

Loved the live update.😊 Thankoo.

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Poorva Chakraborty

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Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Kashish do write a special appearance by a cute, chirpy and bubbly Punjaabi Jyoti maasi ... I swear my pathakdi is going to love me even more to put that idea in your head ...

About Omkara and the adoption theory ... Gotcha ... As I said ... Ab woh Gauri ko samajhne ki poori koshish bhi karega aur samjhega bhi 😳 they are in love ...

I am so excited to meet the two daughters of hema aunty 😆 ... Jaldi jaldi likho kash ...

And about my favorite part of your OS series ... It has to be OSO as a family man ... Firstly for Gauri and then with Gauri ... That time when he single handedly did Oh-My-Mata of Pinky and ridhima and ShivRu were the brothers and tejvi were parents ... And today we see him as a husband, as a father ... He is a complete man now.

Aahhh romance ... Again I have an idea 😆 ( please mujhse bore na hona)

If Gauri is the seamstress ... Make Omkara break the buttons of his shirt to gain her attention, the inspiration of which he gets from a daily soap... He will be like ... Fix my shirt and she says I know your tactics ... You want to talk to me ... You want to be close to me ... You want to hold me and so you brkoe the button ... He is quite sad ... When she does not let him be near her ... And then she abruptly says ... I don't want you ... I want that shirt ... Give it to me ... He removes the shirt and lazily sits in front of her ... Just to realize the effect of his bare exposed body on her ... She has become one beautiful beetroot-tamato hybrid ... He grins seeing his effect on her ... Moves closer to her ... His lips nears her ears ... She is melting ... Shivering and feeling the moment ... When OSO whispers ... When people work for me ... I like it more proffesional! 😆

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kashishsr

@kashishsr

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Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: _PrincessPooru_
Kashish do write a special appearance by a cute, chirpy and bubbly Punjaabi Jyoti maasi ... I swear my pathakdi is going to love me even more to put that idea in your head ...

About Omkara and the adoption theory ... Gotcha ... As I said ... Ab woh Gauri ko samajhne ki poori koshish bhi karega aur samjhega bhi 😳 they are in love ...

I am so excited to meet the two daughters of hema aunty 😆 ... Jaldi jaldi likho kash ...

And about my favorite part of your OS series ... It has to be OSO as a family man ... Firstly for Gauri and then with Gauri ... That time when he single handedly did Oh-My-Mata of Pinky and ridhima and ShivRu were the brothers and tejvi were parents ... And today we see him as a husband, as a father ... He is a complete man now.

Aahhh romance ... Again I have an idea 😆 ( please mujhse bore na hona)
If Gauri is the seamstress ... Make Omkara break the buttons of his shirt to gain her attention, the inspiration of which he gets from a daily soap... He will be like ... Fix my shirt and she says I know your tactics ... You want to talk to me ... You want to be close to me ... You want to hold me and so you brkoe the button ... He is quite sad ... When she does not let him be near her ... And then she abruptly says ... I don't want you ... I want that shirt ... Give it to me ... He removes the shirt and lazily sits in front of her ... Just to realize the effect of his bare exposed body on her ... She has become one beautiful beetroot-tamato hybrid ... He grins seeing his effect on her ... Moves closer to her ... His lips nears her ears ... She is melting ... Shivering and feeling the moment ... When OSO whispers ... When people work for me ... I like it more proffesional! 😆

Ok, ok , my more sanskaari friend. I will try😳.

I could never get bored of you and I promised that sewing shirts thing anyway.

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kashishsr

@kashishsr

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Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: tasnimrodela
Yeey..!! Another update..it was like a surprise..can't even explain how much I liked this one...AadKara was too too too much adorable..pehle I felt bad that OSO thought his wife moved on..but then I remember you told that your Kara will definitely use his brain..and he did...he believed Ri won't marry again when she was already married to him...and his vishwas won today..baby Aadya made her place in her father's heart..aaawww..!! I loved this part...can't wait to see Kara apni biwi ko kaise manata hain..waiting for their family moments...

I'm glad you liked it😊. Kara certainly used his brain when it switched on, but then it switched off again when it came to Gauri's reasons for adoption. Yes today Kara did learn the value of 'vishwaas'. DaddyKara is coming up - he needs someone to complain to about how stubborn MummyRi is being😆.

gauri will have her hands full with these two.😉

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kashishsr

@kashishsr

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Posted: 8 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: vrindagupta
Fantastic update
Omkara was happy having found the love of his life
Kabir was so happy for OSO

Omkara even kept chulbul's photo in his office
He must have confused every one

But the file
He was shocked
Gauri has a baby
He was angry at the baby taking his place
But adya made a place for herself in his heart
She is now his daughter
Only I her mother agrees
The family can be together again
Which I think would be a tough task
Omkara will need adya's help

Waiting eagerly to read more
Update soon

Thanks for reading and reviewing😊. Chulbul ka photo - couldn't resist😆. Aadya will always be ready to help DaddyKara😊.

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kashishsr

@kashishsr

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Posted: 8 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: fariah25
SURPRISE SURPRISE !
Kashish gives changed #7 before Sunday.. yay ! 😃
I hope that doesn't mean no update coming sunday...😊
Baby Aadya looks cute 😊
Already in luvv with papakara !
I can see him as a grreeaatt husband in the future !😳
MamaRi maanjaye ab 😊
Thank you for the update !
TYSM for PMing...
❤️

Still will get another update this week, no worries😆. Thanks for reading😊.

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kashishsr

@kashishsr

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Posted: 8 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU
awesome update yar
Totally loved it
aadya made a place for her in om's heart by herself
it was superb

Thankoo😊

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Poorva Chakraborty

@Cinnamon_Kisses

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Posted: 8 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: kashishsr

I'm glad you liked it😊. Kara certainly used his brain when it switched on, but then it switched off again when it came to Gauri's reasons for adoption. Yes today Kara did learn the value of 'vishwaas'. DaddyKara is coming up - he needs someone to complain to about how stubborn MummyRi is being😆.

gauri will have her hands full with these two.😉

And you are going to take at least some time to update that

😵 Kashhhiiissshhh ... I am feeling so impatient now 😆 Gauri being hands full with Omkara and adya ... And he is going to be more like a three year old brother of her ... And stubborn mommy 😆 ...