Finding Aadya - Rikara OS (Changed #7)

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gumpchump

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Posted: 8 years ago

#31

Amazing gurl 👏👏

Such intensity in that scene where Om thinks Gauri has moved on - wonderfully done 😊 simply loved it.

Like how you had Om's character transition into DaddyKara by himself and not "just because", can very well imagine Gauri refusing to share her baby 😆 while Om be like - "wait a sec! i love you and i love the baby too" that'll irk Gauri big time 😳

waiting... waiting... for your next update 😊

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Ann17

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Posted: 8 years ago

#32

surprised..

kashis.. u gave us another update!

loved it, superb..

specially loved thr emotional turmoil om going through..loved the cutie putie adya

keep it up, waiting fr nxt..

stay blessed!

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nathalie_rs_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#33

OMG!!! this ff is absolutely amazing. The way you write and express yourself is mind blowing. I love it. Ur style of writing is amazing. I'm definitely looking forward to more from you. Keep up the excellent work.

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guy3

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Posted: 8 years ago

#34

Yaar, Keeping track of your OS becomes difficult. I missed this for so many days until I looked up your posts this morning!!! Whenever you write the next part, probably edit the end of the previous part and add the link to the next part. Btw, shouldn't this be a SS or FF instead of an OS series as it has continuity from one part to another?

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kashishsr

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Posted: 8 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: guy3
Yaar, Keeping track of your OS becomes difficult. I missed this for so many days until I looked up your posts this morning!!! Whenever you write the next part, probably edit the end of the previous part and add the link to the next part. Btw, shouldn't this be a SS or FF instead of an OS series as it has continuity from one part to another?

The links already there 😆. As for making it a SS or FF, that's so daunting for me. As it is now, if I had to stop for whatever reason it would bother me less. That's why every post ends on some heavy line or promise for the future. In case there is no next part for a while. It's just the way I prefer it.

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ericas

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Posted: 8 years ago

#36

Amazinggg fabbb

Was searching it Kab seee

Plz plz pm me when the next episode is out

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sara1990

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Posted: 8 years ago

#37

Daddykara rocks. Om accepts Aadhya. Baby Aadhya won Daddykara's heart by one look. Lets see how Aadya brings her parents together. Waiting for the next shot.

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guy3

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Posted: 8 years ago

#38

Intehaan ho gayi intezaar ki
Aayi na kuch khabar mere yaar ki!
Ye humein hai yakeen
Bewafa wo nahi
Phir wajah kya hui
Intezaar ki?!

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kashishsr

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Posted: 8 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: guy3
Intehaan ho gayi intezaar ki
Aayi na kuch khabar mere yaar ki!
Ye humein hai yakeen
Bewafa wo nahi
Phir wajah kya hui
Intezaar ki?!

🤣 itna impatience ke shaayri shuru?

By this weekend pakkha. I'm sorry, but real life's been getting in the way. I'll try to have it up as soon as possible.

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The_RomancePen

@The_RomancePen

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Posted: 8 years ago

#40

Loved the os series

update soon

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