let's discuss - shivika's progression and promises - Page 2

I'm sorry, but what plot? Let's see.. man who's been dying to marry the love of his life leaves her on the wedding night for a message on a crumpled chit. Man then stays missing for 15 days with no explanation. Man returns with new wife of less than 15 days and claims to have forgotten his real wife. His whole family (all of whom he remembers), telling him that Annika is his wife is not enough for him to accept it (the blackmailers just want the great SSO to announce this new girl as his wife, logic and reason be damned). And of course the whole world complies with the blackmailer's needs, the media quietly takes notes, family quietly accepts. Wife starts begging to be recognized. In the meantime, random guy (dadi's somebody's somebody) takes over the reins of the great Oberoi empire. Such a fantastic plot!!

Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU

awesome post yar...

we are not blaming SSO here...its the cvs and writer sahiba's exclusive writing... whenever we point out Shivaay's wrong doing all will assume that it's Team Annika v/s Team shivaay... I loved shivaay more than Annika... but when seeing his character being butcherd...its affect me too much... the yesterday's episodes really disappointed me... if this was before the wedding then it's acceptable but after all the promises he had given...if he is doing this then I really can't accept this...and seriously he is a terrible husband... after yesterday's episode he is not at all perfect for the title best pati... No good husband will bring another girl and ask his wife to get out... vo insaan pati banne keliye bilkul be laayak nahi hai...

its hurts me to say this but it's wat his doings proving...

he can be a Good son but never a Good husband... if he is then he should prove it because I really lost my faith in him...how can we trust him? wat guarantee is there that he will not give her divorce papers again to save his family?

Originally posted by: kinnika

I'm sorry, but what plot? Let's see.. man who's been dying to marry the love of his life leaves her on the wedding night for a message on a crumpled chit. Man then stays missing for 15 days with no explanation. Man returns with new wife of less than 15 days and claims to have forgotten his real wife. His whole family (all of whom he remembers), telling him that Annika is his wife is not enough for him to accept it (the blackmailers just want the great SSO to announce this new girl as his wife, logic and reason be damned). And of course the whole world complies with the blackmailer's needs, the media quietly takes notes, family quietly accepts. Wife starts begging to be recognized. In the meantime, random guy (dadi's somebody's somebody) takes over the reins of the great Oberoi empire. Such a fantastic plot!!

And what progression? Lots of empty promises made to be broken immediately afterwards? Shivaay's married Annika twice now, and both times denied the marriage immediately after. What's the difference? The first time he didn't love her and wanted to hurt her, this time he loves her and promised never to hurt her but the end result is the same. So much progress.

@bold:

completely agree😆
there is no plot, just random repeats from Tia's time and Annika being blackmailed again😆
i never get this "family accepts quietly"
if this had been my family, they would literally have taken SSO's class😆, is this a game or what? you just married a girl, and after 15 days another girl? this is bigamy for god's sake😆

@red:
totally agree🥱

@blue:
this is even worst actually, Annika is like a toy now, to push and pull at the convenience of him being blackmailed😊

Originally posted by: angel_nonu

This isn't about Shivaay vs annika or bashing Shivaay as you said. It is about CVs floppy writing

As for seeing pain, I am not sure if writers wanted to show his pain but frankly it didn't come out in NM acting. It really looked as if he was determined to get proof. Outside Om's room he was saying I have to make annika believe in ML then they could have shown his hurt too that he has to do this but nope it wasn't there. She was pleading but I did not see any pain in his expression.

Aashika that what writer Sahiba does always.

I am not sure if Shivaay will tell Annika & she is in plan. If she is (which I am expecting) then they did learn from separation mistak but if not then I don't know what to say.

If she isn't in plan then again once track is done we will get a plain sorry & Annika will forgive him lol.

Well then this has always been the case isn't it? After forced wedding even before his sorry annika forgave him, infact what we got is she was his lawyer while explaining his family - ok fine

Then he called her pros*/characterless then what we got simple sorry just in one epi and Shivaay forgiven. Pinky kept insulting annika/ he kept shouting on her but what we got annika forgiven even without sorry sometimes. But but when annika did one day kand then her just sorry wasn't enough lol.

In fact he didn't even think once that there could be some reason behind her act. OmRu kept telling indirectly but still he didn't even once thought of thinking or asking her "WHY". What he did to Sahil but annika forgave even without sorry but he wasn't ready even when his brothers were asking him to let it go. If not for Tia tongue slip then he would have never thought or ask her why. yes she did wrong & he threw her out in cruel way but still she came back talking full responsibility on herself of that mistake whereas he was equally responsible.

Then after Tia saying that she did sacrifice then he went behind annika pushing her to tell the truth. Now he is doing d same but we won't get more than one epi of simple sorry and annika all ok. This is the obsession of writer sahiba with Shivaay.

Progression & promises gaye tel lene for writer sahiba lol

PS: before anyone jumps gun on me. This isn't about Shivaay bashing or vs. This is about how CV's think that FL are only for crying purpose, ML progression, glorifying ML etc etc

@bold:
exactly Angel, we discussed same yesterday
he's just determined that he gets the proofs totally uncaring how much he has to hurt Annika for this... and sorry even i didnt see any pain at all, i saw only his determination for hiding the problem from Annika

@red:
if Annika isnt in the plan, then SSO has royally sacrificed Annika for his family again😆, this literally destroys the very basis of shivika for me😆

@blue:

completely agree, i made another post on Girls and Nayi Soch, asking why male leads are always forgiven while the female leads have to literally walk through fire everytime for no faults of them

@pink:
i did say this is not against SSO, but against the writer now! so much for story progression and growth, when it seems the writer herself didnt understand the whole point of their first separation track, and she didnt even learn anything from it😆

Behen yeh Promises and kashme Sab jhute Hein Gulneet Aur Modi Sarkar kii Tarah🤪