Shivika OS-Our Perfect Family - Page 2

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Posted: 7 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: Sakkiyah

Nice os.

Shivika's perfect family.Missed omru and Dadi in this.
The cute antics of Shivaay and kids...The bonding between them.
The way Shivaay replied to Ragini...it was needed.But I expected pinky there.
But the dream of Anika of a happy family was completed.

I was also thinking to change Ragini's part to Pinky because readers are demanding this
Thank You for putting forward your suggestions
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Posted: 7 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: Dik..

Nice os... shivaka ki complete family..

Bt missed omru..

Thank You so much dear,I am glad that you liked it 😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Apu_915

Lovely OS❤️

The ideal happy family. Missed Omru & their better-halves though!
Loved the way Shivaay retorted Ragini.
Keep Writing!
Thaks for the PM :)

I am glad that you liked it and I am thinking about making some changes as everyone is missing OmRu and Dadi and Pinky too LOL
Keep showering your love
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Posted: 7 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: Shaina744

It's awsm...love it... Shivika and their little family...
I love the name 'Shiv'..
Keep writing..

Thank You so much for your comment dear and I am glad that you liked their little family and yeah I love that name too and Keep supporting me like this
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Posted: 7 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: Seema84

Sorry for the late comment dear I was out of town n bit busy ... I always love ur concept of writing n it's really lovely n beautifully written keep it up...

It's Okay dear and I am glad that you liked it😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: Shivika_ishqbaz

hi dear just read your story, it is an awesome and lovely piece... 😊 👏
Shivika are both sweet and caring... 😊
I loved the bonding between shivika and their cute little munchkins... 😛
I also loved the way how shivaay is keen to do anything for his family...the great sweet singh oberoi which becomes romantic singh oberoi for his one and only wife Mrs. Anika singh oberoi... 😉
Ragini is such a mood spoiler i really didn't like the way she accused ani... 😡
Felt really bad for ani can't see tears in her eyes... 😭
Loved the way shivay gave befitting reply to Ragini in typical Sso style... 😎
I missed omru and dadi and also I wanted a grand oh my mata of pinky... 🥱
But nonetheless I loved the os and yes they are indeed a perfect family consisting of tadibaaz baggad billu and billi and their little chipmunks... 😛
Armaan and Shivangi are so adorable...loved their cute antics... 😛
Once again a wonderful Os... 👏
Thanks for pm... 🤗

Aww first of all a big hug from my side for such a long review🤗
Yeah Shivaay is the best husband and father and He will not spare anyone who would want to hurt his wife and kids and I am now thinking to make some changes in the story to make entry for Pinky and OmRu
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Posted: 7 years ago
#17

👏 👏

awesome Os...

written beautiful... with family as concept

thanks for the pm


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Posted: 7 years ago
#18
Sorry for being horribly late.
Res 😊
I will try to unres soon.😳

Unres😛
This OS was super cute.😆
Loved both the kids a lot.😛
Pinky ... no comments. 😕
ShivIka bonding is adorable.😳
Edited by Rainzz - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Made some changes in the story
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Sweet os.
All was hunky dorky snd pinky turned up😡
Apne grandchildren ke samne itni batamizi, Shula hai milne ate hai.
Good they have their own ashiyana.

Thanks for the pm

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