Moving Forward - Rikara OS (Changed #4) - Page 3

Originally posted by: rikara94

No kashish i m not godmother😆

Plz dont call me..aise feeling aying jaise mai hi karta dharta hoon😆bhua hi theek hai😛

Waise i loved the joint name ridhya❤️

Btw kashish i'm jyoti

Originally posted by: guy3

Lovely! I was imagining OSO in ASR mode in this part;)
Gauri and Aadya- awesome! God bless them.
Let's hope OSO again doesn't misunderstand Gauri after seeing a baby in her arms:(

Originally posted by: tasnimrodela

If you're planning for RiAadKara moments then please jaldi de do yaar...I'd love to see RiKara's moment with that baby girl..and about TejKara..let's see how Tej do the bhaarpayi of his deeds...TBH I'm liking Tej these days..hope we'll see him as perfect father and grandpa soon...and Aadya is going to have the best parents in this world I tell you... 😳

Originally posted by: Ann17

wow.. awesome update.. now eagerly waiting fr Rikara meeting .. loving it.. plz keep writing ...

Originally posted by: perFICtionist.

DId you just give us a Volcanokara?😳 okay imma delve into the details of it with much dedication in the end. 😉

Omkara's relentless search for HIS Gauri is a spectacular development! Somehow the calm, composed artistkara going after his wife seemed remote to me as he is the one to accept fate and graciously welcome the pain and punishment of separation. But hold on.. you just created OSO! the determined force of nature, created to destroy. His persistence to keep at it regardless of a myriad of failures and rejections is the new OSO. This unstoppable force strives to write his own fate and change destiny itself if the Gods dare to snatch what is his.! Another intricate masterpiece. How? such beautiful characterization kashish? A world of difference yet inherently the same! hats off👏

ShivOmRu bond. Much has changed yet nothing at all. The Great wall of Shivaay tries to intervene and protect his kingdom but relents when he senses his brother's determination (not OSO's but Om's). Rudra's silent support.. never the one to draw attention yet the strongest and most reliable pillar! You did wonders there. So much portrayed yet so little said. 👏

TejViKara. Did you just give us a happy family? *still in the digestion process* probably this is what it would look like when the current svetlana drama ends. Understanding, support, care, concern. A guilt ridden proud Tej is a sight to behold!

Pinky and Ridhima! quite the entertaining jokers! they brought out the best out of all and im thankful to these empty vessels.

Gauri. MommyRi❤️ so beautiful. the bonding! each being the other's strength in ways they havnt stopped to comprehend. the happiness they filled each other with in a single touch spoke of boundless affection, tenderness, warmth, and above all belonging!

Ahem Ahem! Volcanokara. i started off by writing about OSO and i end by writing about Omkara. Vocanokara is nothing but Gauri's Omkara which was buried deep inside OSO. Thanks to Ridhima and Pinky acting as lovely catalysts the earth shook, the deep layers of plates moved and out came the fuming lava which would stop at nothing but burn the very source which caused the disturbance. the source that talked ill of HIS Gauri. who dared to harbor the slightest intentions of replacing HIS Gauri. And when Gauri is threatened the mighty Omkara is born out of OSO! What a transformation.

"For a star to be born, there is one thing that must happen : A gaseous nebula must collapse.

So Collapse.

Crumble.

This is not your destruction.

This is your birth."

Originally posted by: kashishsr

Ok, second attempt at writing a reply to you - the first got deleted😭. Firstly, 👏 for this mini essay. Your analysis skill is on point. You've not only picked up on the distinction I've tried to create between OSO and our beloved Om, but you've also detected that Om is hidden in there somewhere... just how much of him is reflecting out will become clear once Rikara reunite. VolcanoKara is usually just used as a name for when Omkara's temper explodes (or as I like to say... his third eyes opens), but you've gone into the geography of it.😉

Yes, lets talk plate tectonics (btw I always hated Geography at school so I'll keep it brief). The Om we saw at the beginning of DBO (post his mother's suicide attempt, and Tej Singh Oberoi's continuous betrayals) had created layer upon layer of defence against hurt. When he was riled up those layers would shift as his anger tried to bubble through - hence VolcanoKara. Not only did he spew lava, but he could cause devastation and destruction with his anger fuelled actions.

OSO is also wrapped up in layers, but this time they are not a defence for him. He is surrounded by his own self-loathing and guilt. OSO is punishing himself for his crimes against Gauri - he doesn't believe he deserves the pleasure of his loved ones company and has sentenced himself to a purgatory of loneliness until his Gauri returns and he can really repent. What was feebly constructed back then to protect himself has now become his punishment - a fortress to imprison him.

TejViKara - In this part they laid down the stones that will build the foundation of a bridge between these individuals who have drifted apart. There is a journey to go until 'Happy Family'... but it's a start.

Pinky 'OMM-a-la-Omkara' was a long time coming in my story, and is still a long time coming on the show... I really want that!!!!😭😭 Pinky OMM #2 is still to come in my story.

I love MommyRi and I am seriously looking forward to DaddyKara. Belonging is something I've felt Gauri lacked on the show since leaving Bareilly, and I'm glad you caught on to the fact I was trying to return it to her😊.

ShivRu are the kind of brothers that know when to fight for their bro... but also when to let him take the lead.

Looove the quote!! Birth from destruction - a real revival... That is what I want for Rikara in this story.👏

I'm so glad you liked the characterisation. Thank you for the lovely review.😊