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Posted: 7 years ago
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Kashish...let me tell you one thing first..after reading this I can say (Ankhein baandh kar ke) that it's my personal fav of all your writings..
Whoa...the way you gave a transformation to Omkara's character...hats off to you girl..the way he dealt with Pinky literally gave me goosebumps..he's not that shaant chirota anymore..he is THE OSO who won't even tolerate a word against HIS WIFE...
I just loved the way he did OH MY MATA of Pinky..she deserved it..for the sake of God, can't this woman just vanish into the air..?? I never saw someone so shameless like her..it's been years since Ri left..still this woman doesn't leave even a chance to spew vemon to that girl...I just hate her...
Coming to Obros..you wrote their equation so beautifully...Shivaay and Rudra didn't interfere in Kara's matter..but they supported and cheer for him silently...Kara has their full trust..
TejKara tashan..!! How much I miss that..!! Yes yes yes..you gave it back...though Tej is a changed man now, there are so many thing to be settled in father-son's relationship..Tej is a proud father..loved the way he supported Kara and his marriage with Ri..Jhanvi was there for her bahu as always...so basically Pinky had the worst the of her life..
And that girl Riddhima..!! Is she kidding yaar..?? How could she think Kara will accept and marry her after the drama that took place years ago...usse chhod bhi de toh bhi yeh ladki soch bhi kaise sakti hain Kara pe dore dalne ke bare mein...she was with him for so many years..samajh jana chahiye thha Kara isn't that type of man who'll fall for her cheap harkaatein..and she had no idea what Ri meant to him...Kara ke life mein dobara entry marna aur yeh sochna that he'll marry her is probably the biggest mistake of her life...you know...I feel pity on her..bin bulaye apni beizzati karwane aayi thi...aab kaisa laga..?? Hehe..
Accha chalo..Oberoi Mansion mein tamasha toh koyi nayi baat nehi hain..adat ho gayi hain humein..right..?
Let's peep into Ri's life..
Yes..she's strong yet filled with so much love and emotions...MommyRi is starting a new life with Aadya..I googled the names of Goddess Parvati few days back..and this name caught my attention...the name is beautiful just like that little bundle of happiness..Ri made a lamba safar to reach where she's today...finally her desire of having a baby is fulfilled..Aadya is going to play the cupid to unite their parents I guess...
Can't wait to read more of RiDya chemistry..aab toh Kara bhi aagaya Kashmir..hope you'll be giving a RiKara confrontation part soon...you're doing a brilliant job dear..continue soon...and thanks for the pm...
Edited by tasnimrodela - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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This is getting intresting day...
Totally loving the way the story is moving forward...
its superb
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Oh my mata what a lovely shot it isšŸ‘kashish this is one of the best hanšŸ‘šŸ¼
Eww ridhima is here 😲 usko dekh kar mujhe michmichi hone lag gyi thi🤢dumbo..lines marne ki try kr rhi thi chalu kahin kišŸ˜†and how dare she to call gauri gawar😔 but thank to my hero omkara...acha mza chakhya bimbo košŸ˜†
Pinky singh oberoi..haila mai dar gyi..get ready for oh my mata pinky aunty
You know i love obros...the way they support each other and love each othershivru are really worried for om and chose not to interfere in this
And shocking and surprising part for me is..TSO...he also support his son wow not bad han
And the moment came..he reached kashmir..hawayon ne rukh badl liya.. waiting for the moment when rikara meet..waiting for the moment when kara meet beautiful Adya..thank you kashish meri choice ka name rkhne ke liye..
Arre poorva and kashish kya yar tum dono ne mujhe itne ache khase hero ki behan bna diya bhua bol kešŸ˜†
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: _PrincessPooru_

I will be very happy to call Jyoti as Adya's Bua

And Pinky ki aur OMM hone wali hain 😲 arree wah wah wah ... Are wah wah wah šŸ˜† yeah Om does not know that she was the last person Gauri met before leaving ...

And I trust you fully with where this is going kash ... Mommy Ri and Daddy Kara are going to be a treat ...

Bold@ not good han..bhua..tu jealous krti hai na mujhse kahhin woh mujhe na pasand kr le🤣
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Oh things are taking a new turn and I'm loving it. Once again, I'm awaiting the next part.
Thank you for the PM!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: tasnimrodela

Kashish...let me tell you one thing first..after reading this I can say (Ankhein baandh kar ke) that it's my personal fav of all your writings..
Whoa...the way you gave a transformation to Omkara's character...hats off to you girl..the way he dealt with Pinky literally gave me goosebumps..he's not that shaant chirota anymore..he is THE OSO who won't even tolerate a word against HIS WIFE...
I just loved the way he did OH MY MATA of Pinky..she deserved it..for the sake of God, can't this woman just vanish into the air..?? I never saw someone so shameless like her..it's been years since Ri left..still this woman doesn't leave even a chance to spew vemon to that girl...I just hate her...
Coming to Obros..you wrote their equation so beautifully...Shivaay and Rudra didn't interfere in Kara's matter..but they supported and cheer for him silently...Kara has their full trust..
TejKara tashan..!! How much I miss that..!! Yes yes yes..you gave it back...though Tej is a changed man now, there are so many thing to be settled in father-son's relationship..Tej is a proud father..loved the way he supported Kara and his marriage with Ri..Jhanvi was there for her bahu as always...so basically Pinky had the worst the of her life..
And that girl Riddhima..!! Is she kidding yaar..?? How could she think Kara will accept and marry her after the drama that took place years ago...usse chhod bhi de toh bhi yeh ladki soch bhi kaise sakti hain Kara pe dore dalne ke bare mein...she was with him for so many years..samajh jana chahiye thha Kara isn't that type of man who'll fall for her cheap harkaatein..and she had no idea what Ri meant to him...Kara ke life mein dobara entry marna aur yeh sochna that he'll marry her is probably the biggest mistake of her life...you know...I feel pity on her..bin bulaye apni beizzati karwane aayi thi...aab kaisa laga..?? Hehe..
Accha chalo..Oberoi Mansion mein tamasha toh koyi nayi baat nehi hain..adat ho gayi hain humein..right..?
Let's peep into Ri's life..
Yes..she's strong yet filled with so much love and emotions...MommyRi is starting a new life with Aadya..I googled the names of Goddess Parvati few days back..and this name caught my attention...the name is beautiful just like that little bundle of happiness..Ri made a lamba safar to reach where she's today...finally her desire of having a baby is fulfilled..Aadya is going to play the cupid to unite their parents I guess...
Can't wait to read more of RiDya chemistry..aab toh Kara bhi aagaya Kashmir..hope you'll be giving a RiKara confrontation part soon...you're doing a brilliant job dear..continue soon...and thanks for the pm...


Hey!!! I'm so glad you enjoyed it... It was my favourite so far too. I would feel bad for her had she not insulted Gauri - I had to justify OSO's treatment of her. TejKara is an important issue, but we won't see them again for a while. I want Aadya to have a Grandfather so he had to be redeemed. I hope he proves a better Grandpa than he has a father. Also Om's difficulty with his own dad will make him a better father to Aadya.

I'm glad you like the name, but all credit to @rikara94 for that. She had the perfect name and reasoning. I love the joint name RiDya! I'll get you RiAadKara soon hopefully.


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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: rikara94

Oh my mata what a lovely shot it isšŸ‘kashish this is one of the best hanšŸ‘šŸ¼

Eww ridhima is here 😲 usko dekh kar mujhe michmichi hone lag gyi thi🤢dumbo..lines marne ki try kr rhi thi chalu kahin kišŸ˜†and how dare she to call gauri gawar😔 but thank to my hero omkara...acha mza chakhya bimbo košŸ˜†
Pinky singh oberoi..haila mai dar gyi..get ready for oh my mata pinky aunty
You know i love obros...the way they support each other and love each othershivru are really worried for om and chose not to interfere in this
And shocking and surprising part for me is..TSO...he also support his son wow not bad han
And the moment came..he reached kashmir..hawayon ne rukh badl liya.. waiting for the moment when rikara meet..waiting for the moment when kara meet beautiful Adya..thank you kashish meri choice ka name rkhne ke liye..
Arre poorva and kashish kya yar tum dono ne mujhe itne ache khase hero ki behan bna diya bhua bol kešŸ˜†


I just knew you would object to being Om's sister... that's why I said if she wants to be Bua she can. it's ok lets make you Godmother. Thanks so much for the awesome name! OBros are the best, and Pinky is the worst.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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No kashish i m not godmotheršŸ˜†
Plz dont call me..aise feeling aying jaise mai hi karta dharta hoonšŸ˜†bhua hi theek haišŸ˜›
Waise i loved the joint name ridhyaā¤ļø
Btw kashish i'm jyoti
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Lovely! I was imagining OSO in ASR mode in this part;)
Gauri and Aadya- awesome! God bless them.
Let's hope OSO again doesn't misunderstand Gauri after seeing a baby in her arms:(
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: kashishsr


Hey!!! I'm so glad you enjoyed it... It was my favourite so far too. I would feel bad for her had she not insulted Gauri - I had to justify OSO's treatment of her. TejKara is an important issue, but we won't see them again for a while. I want Aadya to have a Grandfather so he had to be redeemed. I hope he proves a better Grandpa than he has a father. Also Om's difficulty with his own dad will make him a better father to Aadya.

I'm glad you like the name, but all credit to @rikara94 for that. She had the perfect name and reasoning. I love the joint name RiDya! I'll get you RiAadKara soon hopefully.


If you're planning for RiAadKara moments then please jaldi de do yaar...I'd love to see RiKara's moment with that baby girl..and about TejKara..let's see how Tej do the bhaarpayi of his deeds...TBH I'm liking Tej these days..hope we'll see him as perfect father and grandpa soon...and Aadya is going to have the best parents in this world I tell you... 😳
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