Rikara OS- || Faasle || {On Track One-Shot} Nxt shot on pg 5(2-10)

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Khidki

@Khidki

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Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: BIaddict
Loved the story. The ending was sad though. In case you like to extend and give a happy ending it will be awesome too 😆

Haha. thanks.

Suggestion Noted. Let's c😆

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Tasnim

@tasnimrodela

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Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Hey Anni..I read your previous writings on RiKara...but this one gave me goosebumps..you penned down every emotion she was going through so beautifully...she tried to bring roshni in his dark life..but somewhere in that process she lost herself in the darkness...I'd love to read Omkara's POV from you..try to post a sequel of this if time permits...and thanks a lot for this one...

Edited by tasnimrodela - 8 years ago

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Kripa Shankar

@silver_dustXX

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Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Anni this was the most beautiful thing ever! (I bet I'm saying this for every writing of yours😆)

The lines from the song seems to blend perfectly with the whole situation, and Gauri's pain was penned very aptly!

The whole melancholy tone brimming throughout had me through the OS! Very well written!

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The_Inner_Voice

@The_Inner_Voice

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Annika 🤗

That was an intense writing up there... and aptly titled... and blending in so well with the chosen song.

Thanks for the writeup and please do write more on Rikara...🤗

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Khidki

@Khidki

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Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: tasnimrodela
Hey Anni..I read your previous writings on RiKara...but this one gave me goosebumps..you penned down every emotion she was going through so beautifully...she tried to bring roshni in his dark life..but somewhere in that process she lost herself in the darkness...I'd love to read Omkara's POV from you..try to post a sequel of this if time permits...and thanks a lot for this one...

Thank you for those lovely words. 😳

Will surely try once I m done with my exams.

The pleasure was all mine. 😊

Edited by annikaa - 8 years ago