EDT 93[SHIVYA VS ANIRU-1ST TASK&RIKARA-MISSION MURTI] NXT EDT PG66 - Page 84

Originally posted by: Srishank

Gud mrng girls . What is the pic all r talking abt . Can anyone tell me where is the pic

Originally posted by: napstermonster

I'm 99% sure the CVs have some intern or the other checking into the EDT so in case I'm right and one of the IB people are reading, please note-- we the audience need "the talk" more than Anika does, honestly. Its one chance to deal with elements like:
Actual gaps in storytelling:

Did he stalk her by visiting the chawl every day/night or what?
Did he stop her from getting all those jobs?
Does she know she literally caused him to have a heart attack?
Why did he buy her goddamn chawl for god's sake? Give us a romantic or pseudo insanely in love reason. Chalega. But close that.
Did she ever tell him what happened at the dargah?
Why a bike? seriously?

And emotional issues:
The whole Vikram thing brought one thing out into the open--how much she was broken by the way he threw her out. Yeah she engineered it, but how he dide it, in one moment. She is NOT over that. one apology is not enough. He has to beg for that one. And promise that no matter what, his instinct wil never again be to treat her as less than family, because that is what he did.

She said over and over again, that she had to throw herself out of his life, but she didnt quite believe he would LET HER DO it. her insecurity about who she is, for him.Thats something they have to address.

His own reactions. His mom HAD HIM KIDNAPPED. He was in fear for his life. Come ON...where is the emotional trauma?

I dont think he's had enough time to process what a betrayal his mother did, because theres MORE, yeah? Its more than that. How about Nayantara, and the issue of Sahil being kidnapped, and Anika being called a s**ts daughter in the media? I want him to find out all this. Pinky wont tell him. maybe he got Khanna to do some research on Pinky's bank records to see who she paid off at this time, Khanna found the payment to Shivaay;s orphanage (the one he bougth because of Anika) and he gets the info from the matron there.

I need him to reflct on all the times when he kind of sort trusted his mom over Anika. Sahil being a thief. The whole Tia thing. The hundred times when Pinky was vicious, and he let it fly--how about when Pinky threw Anika out of the hospital?

He must revisit those WITH Pinky when he runs into her or Pinky tries to talk to him. There is much more to unpack there.

I was happy in his breakdown scene where he acknowledged how big a thing it was for someone like Tej and Janvi to silently let their eldest son be vilified and not immediately reveal what thy thought of Shivaay at that time. That was the biggest "family" thing Ive ever seen tej do, for Shivaay, no less. I'd like Shivaay to thank tej, and Jahnvi, for being real parents to him at that point.

I guess, reading all this, that the Talk has to be with Anika AND Pinky. I'm not speaking for Pinky or wanting her to get her son back. Or even get Anika's help here. NO WAY.

But Shivaay needs to get the poison out of himself to heal, for himself, and to have a healthy marriage. And they havent even touched on the hell they were both under, for 3 months, that they compounded by hurting each other with the Vikram nonsense.

I want them to finally promise themselves, and us, that this is absolutely positively the last time Shivika get married, either to each other OR to other people. Aur seh nahi sakhta. wada kar do yaar.

Originally posted by: napstermonster

I'm 99% sure the CVs have some intern or the other checking into the EDT so in case I'm right and one of the IB people are reading, please note-- we the audience need "the talk" more than Anika does, honestly. Its one chance to deal with elements like:
Actual gaps in storytelling:

Did he stalk her by visiting the chawl every day/night or what?
Did he stop her from getting all those jobs?
Does she know she literally caused him to have a heart attack?
Why did he buy her goddamn chawl for god's sake? Give us a romantic or pseudo insanely in love reason. Chalega. But close that.
Did she ever tell him what happened at the dargah?
Why a bike? seriously?

And emotional issues:
The whole Vikram thing brought one thing out into the open--how much she was broken by the way he threw her out. Yeah she engineered it, but how he dide it, in one moment. She is NOT over that. one apology is not enough. He has to beg for that one. And promise that no matter what, his instinct wil never again be to treat her as less than family, because that is what he did.

She said over and over again, that she had to throw herself out of his life, but she didnt quite believe he would LET HER DO it. her insecurity about who she is, for him.Thats something they have to address.

His own reactions. His mom HAD HIM KIDNAPPED. He was in fear for his life. Come ON...where is the emotional trauma?

I dont think he's had enough time to process what a betrayal his mother did, because theres MORE, yeah? Its more than that. How about Nayantara, and the issue of Sahil being kidnapped, and Anika being called a s**ts daughter in the media? I want him to find out all this. Pinky wont tell him. maybe he got Khanna to do some research on Pinky's bank records to see who she paid off at this time, Khanna found the payment to Shivaay;s orphanage (the one he bougth because of Anika) and he gets the info from the matron there.

I need him to reflct on all the times when he kind of sort trusted his mom over Anika. Sahil being a thief. The whole Tia thing. The hundred times when Pinky was vicious, and he let it fly--how about when Pinky threw Anika out of the hospital?

He must revisit those WITH Pinky when he runs into her or Pinky tries to talk to him. There is much more to unpack there.

I was happy in his breakdown scene where he acknowledged how big a thing it was for someone like Tej and Janvi to silently let their eldest son be vilified and not immediately reveal what thy thought of Shivaay at that time. That was the biggest "family" thing Ive ever seen tej do, for Shivaay, no less. I'd like Shivaay to thank tej, and Jahnvi, for being real parents to him at that point.

I guess, reading all this, that the Talk has to be with Anika AND Pinky. I'm not speaking for Pinky or wanting her to get her son back. Or even get Anika's help here. NO WAY.

But Shivaay needs to get the poison out of himself to heal, for himself, and to have a healthy marriage. And they havent even touched on the hell they were both under, for 3 months, that they compounded by hurting each other with the Vikram nonsense.

I want them to finally promise themselves, and us, that this is absolutely positively the last time Shivika get married, either to each other OR to other people. Aur seh nahi sakhta. wada kar do yaar.

Originally posted by: napstermonster

I'm 99% sure the CVs have some intern or the other checking into the EDT so in case I'm right and one of the IB people are reading, please note-- we the audience need "the talk" more than Anika does, honestly. Its one chance to deal with elements like:

Actual gaps in storytelling:

Did he stalk her by visiting the chawl every day/night or what?

Did he stop her from getting all those jobs?

Does she know she literally caused him to have a heart attack?

Why did he buy her goddamn chawl for god's sake? Give us a romantic or insanely in love reason. Chalega. But close that.

Did she ever tell him what happened at the dargah?

Why a bike? and highlights? seriously? can she tease him, please?

And emotional issues:

The whole Vikram thing brought one thing out into the open--how she is not sure in her heart, that he really wants her. She needs the words. She told him what to say to her once-- khidkitodh khubsoorat. But he went and did a love confession to OMKARA, confusing poor Om and us, equally. He might not be ready to say I Love You. But she gave him a speech, after her bullet shot. He can use those words, its not like he doesn't obsessively remember everything she ever says to him, word by word

How much she was broken by the way he threw her out. This is huge. Yeah she engineered it, but how he did it, in one moment. She is NOT over that. one apology is not enough. He has to beg for that one. And promise that no matter what, his instinct will never again be to treat her as less than family, because that is what he did.

She said over and over again, that she had to throw herself out of his life, but she didn't quite believe he would LET HER DO it. her insecurity about who she is, for him. Thats something they have to address.

How much BOTH of them owe Omkara and Rudra (and Gauri and Bhavya) . I need words. I need tears. I need them both to say, out loud, to the best Shivika shippers, thank you,apologise for giving these brothers mainly, such a tough time via the separation and then the taadibaaz mariage nonsense. They suffered too.

His own reactions. His mom HAD HIM KIDNAPPED. He was in fear for his life. Come ON...where is the emotional trauma?

I dont think he's had enough time to process what a betrayal his mother did, because there is so much MORE, yeah? Its more than that. How about Nayantara, and the issue of Sahil being kidnapped, and Anika being called a s**ts daughter in the media? I want him to find out all this.

Pinky wont tell him. maybe he's got Khanna to do research on Pinky's bank records to see who she paid off at this time. Khanna found the payment to Shivaay's orphanage (the one he bought because of Anika) and he gets the info from the matron there. Pinky left a mile wide trail. Now he knows who to look for.

I need him to reflect on all the times when he kind of sort trusted his mom over Anika. Sahil being a thief. The whole Tia thing. The hundred times when Pinky was vicious to her, said horrible words to her in front of him, and he let it fly--how about when Pinky threw Anika out of the hospital? He has to remember them. No woman deserves that, and Anika is an angel, she deserves that even less. He has to say to her that he those wont happen again. And mean it.

He must revisit those WITH Pinky when he runs into her or Pinky tries to talk to him. There is much more to unpack there. She needs to know he's remembering everything, and he hates HER for what she did to Anika. That Anika didnt make these happen. Pinky did.

I was happy in his breakdown scene where he acknowledged how big a thing it was for someone like Tej and Janvi to silently let their eldest son be vilified and not immediately reveal what thy thought of Shivaay at that time. That was the biggest "family" thing Ive ever seen tej do, for Shivaay, no less. I'd like Shivaay to thank Tej, and Jahnvi, for being real parents to him at that point, when they put their own kid down for him.

I guess, reading all this, that the Talk has to be with Anika AND Pinky. I'm not speaking for Pinky or wanting her to get her son back. Or even get Anika's help here. NO WAY.

But Shivaay needs to get the poison out of himself to heal, for himself, and to have a healthy marriage. And they havent even touched on the hell they were both under, for 3 months, that they compounded by hurting each other with the Vikram nonsense.

I want them to finally promise themselves, and us, that this is absolutely positively the last time Shivika get married, either to each other OR to other people. Aur seh nahi sakhta. wada kar do yaar.

Originally posted by: DarkPhoenix93

Navin create a twitter account and tweet this to Harneet please. We all will retweet it

Originally posted by: cestlavie

I want navins post on the new thread as well...

Darling post it there too...I want everyone to see it!!