RiKara DRABBLE - ITNI SI BAAT HAIN

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Hola Guys 🤗
This is yet another Off-The-Radar Idea Execution of mine ... Hope you like it 😳
This one for my Coffee loving twin soul Era with a big mug of delicious creamy coffee ❤️ ... I really hope you like it Era


ITNI SI BAAT HAIN


Mom, not again I am just sick and tired of meeting girl's every other day, now I feel like I never want to get married but beta I promised that girl that you will be meeting her at local Pizzeria for lunch, please don't say no now, atleast meet her once said Jahnvi in a requesting tone to her son. Arre bhai just go and see her na, maybe she is the one or your rejection no. 51 winked Rudra. it was not at all funny for Omkara. He started feeling like he was a showpiece in the matrimony market. Mom when will you stop exhibiting your ELIGIBLE BACHELOR SON in your social butterfly circle. Om how do you think you are going to get married if you keep on rejecting girls! Even you deserve a life ... You deserve a wife. Jahnvi reprimanded him Yeah he wanted to get married but for now he left all of it in the hands of his god and behaving like a true gentleman, he obeyed what his mother asked him to do, got ready and left for one more blind date to the Pizzeria.


It has been 20 mins since he has been waiting for the girl. He looks around and she is nowhere to be seen but he spots a familiar face near the pasta counter, He moves towards her, she turns surprised and greets him ...good afternoon sir and that is the time he realizes that she is the same girl who did not come for his fabric painting workshop even after his insisting. seeing her he wishes Good Afternoon Miss Gauri Sharma


GAURI KUMARI SHARMA, one of Omkara's most sincere student who actually disappointed him not attending that particular workshop. As he started a conversation with her about random where about and the events happening in their faculty , he realized that she just came there to relax and have some cheesy pasta. So sir, which girl did you reject today? She asked carelessly ripping the chilli flakes sachet and he gave her questioning looks. Relax sir, its just because I know that the most eligible bachelor in town is all set to tie the knot and you even care to notice it Gauri he replied and she did not know how to get back to him on that


Gauri, you don't need to answer this question, but why did not you come for the workshop. After his asking twice she replied to him saying it was a family matter, then they started talking about his family, then her family and then every possible aspect was a part of an hour long conversation. Omkara knew that Gauri was bold and confident but he saw her caring and emotional side for the first time and he liked it. He started thinking how a girl can have such varied hues and an interesting personality. They continued chatting and he spoke to her about the craziest, dumbest, funniest and the most weird things that happened to him or that he did. She could'nt stop laughing and he was enjoying her company


After some more time ...Omkara received Rudra's call and checking the time on her mobile Gauri gets up from the table and leaves. As Omkara attends the call, his brother tells him that the girl had been waiting for him since the last one hour. but Omkara tells him that he has been in the hotel since and a half hour. They continue arguing and Omkara realizes that he reached the wrong address, yeah the meeting venue was Pizzeria of the same city but of some other area. O!!! Did I not tell you to get her number and talk to her, You are such a heartbreaker ... You ZULMIKARA! Rudra was whining to which Omkara just had to say SHUT UP RUDRA.


O that girl is really upset, what to do now? my dear brother just tell that girl that she is rejction no. 51 because I found the one and a big smile appeared on Omkara's face as he disconnected the call.


Omkara has known Gauri and more than that a DABANG GAURI for more than two years now ... She is a really focussed student, he knew that she liked him ... He was her Proffesor-Crush ... But she never said or did any thing babyish, something that he had expected out of her ... He realized that she is mature possesing high regard and admiration for him ... She has to be the one, he was sure. Sometimes you don't realize what your god has planned for you even though it is right in front of your eyes. this was the thought that kept Omkara's mind busy then ...


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Posted: 8 years ago
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It was amazing, Princess! 🤗 I hope Om's Rejection no. 51 turns out to be Bhavya and as Rudra start flirting with her... they just click and becone an item! It all depends on fate, where it takes them! Going to the wrong restaurant was a beautiful cliche... Loved it! 😉
That was my imagination taking me very far... but this chappy was wonderful! ❤️
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Originally posted by: DeewaniMastaani

It was amazing, Princess! 🤗 I hope Om's Rejection no. 51 turns out to be Bhavya and as Rudra start flirting with her... they just click and becone an item! It all depends on fate, where it takes them! Going to the wrong restaurant was a beautiful cliche... Loved it! 😉

That was my imagination taking me very far... but this chappy was wonderful! ❤️

Wonderful imagination you have Mastaani 🤗 ... About this drabble my aim was to portray how two people are destined to be together ... There is always a right place and right time for life partners to come together ... God has a plan always ... A good plan
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Di,

This was such a cute drabble. :) Professor Om is my current FavKara now.

Loved it! :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
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How cute is that poorva.. 😳 Loved it as always.. Kash serial me bhi Omki Gauriko painting sikhaye..😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
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there is more to this right? ...😳😆
im very greedy sorry... loved loved loved this update.. short sweet and simple rikara story with no complications but just the beautiful realization of love!👏

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Poorva behna...you're going to continue this, right..?? I'm sorry bunny..but the greedy girl inside me wants more and more...
So Kara was her professor crush...haye..!! It reminded me ke next month meri professor crush ki shaadi hain...POOR ME.. *sigh*
Okay, get back to the story..I just loved the way you made him realise that she's the one with whom he's destined to be...it was beautiful..

ITNI SI BAAT HAIN..MUJHE TUMSE PYAAR HAIN... 😳 And I know that you love me too dearie... 😉
Edited by tasnimrodela - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Priya_Iyer

Di,

This was such a cute drabble. :) Professor Om is my current FavKara now.

Loved it! :)

Pri 🤗
You know what I really wanted a ProffesorKara track since the beginning of IshqBaaz ... One more dimension of ArtistKara which has a lot of potential ... I love the idea of ProffesorKara
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tinuu555

How cute is that poorva.. 😳 Loved it as always.. Kash serial me bhi Omki Gauriko painting sikhaye..😉

Even I am waiting for the day jab Omkie Gauri ko painting sikhaaega ❤️ Thanks tinu 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: perfictionist

there is more to this right? ...😳😆

im very greedy sorry... loved loved loved this update.. short sweet and simple rikara story with no complications but just the beautiful realization of love!👏

A simple realization of love for Kara ... Exactly my point
And this is the Pooru Ishtyle 😎 ... No unneccesary drama ji
About more to this likh sakte hain ... Kara pursuing Ri ... Romantic Kara and Hesitant Ri 😉

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