Rikara OS: Tu Pyar Hai Tuhi Tabahi..

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hello Rikarians..

I am big fan of Shrenal & Rikara.. I loved the stories by all writers here & they all are great. This is my first attempt to write story & i wanted it to write on very special couple Rikara. Story is based on current track but here Gauri decides to leave OM after watching her Bade bhaiya finally proposed Anika bhojai & they were united. Story is mostly in hindi & English as per needed in situations. Sorry for all grammatical mistakes in advance because I know there will be lot of mistakes. So here we go... No proof reads..

Tu Pyar hai Tuhi Tabahi

And here she was watching her jatadhari hippi smiling & laughing whole heartedly after so many days. He was so happy for his brother finally getting his happiness in form of his wife. She was happy too. She came OM to unite her bade bhaiya & bhojai & finally they are united. She was happy that her Shankarji has made her wish true by bringing them together. Then suddenly she realized it was her purpose to return in that house was over and she has to go now. She was always keeping her self respect aside for her husband but he cleared that she don't have any place in his heart , she has to go, she must go from there. The last time she saw them happily dancing around each other, shivay flirting with Anika & her blushing , rudy n Bhavya dancing around them n taking selfies, Her Om was chatting with dadi smiling through his eyes. All of them were so happy. It was the memory she want to take with her when she will leave them. She was watching them teary eyes & then made a way to her husband's room.

She done her packing & place suitcase in one corner. At that time Omkara returned to room .

Gauri's POV:

"Aaj man kar rha he bas aapko dekhate rahe. Haste hue kitne pyare lag rahe hai omkaraji.. Aur shayad aakhari baar hum aapho dekh rahe hai She was just watching him silently .. Then he speaks

Om: "Tum jaldi upar kyu aagai?? Me niche doondh rha tha tumhe.. Aaj sab bahot khush hai aur mai bhi.. " He was sharing his happiness with her unknown to that she is leaving him after that night.

Om: Are batao na.. kabse mai hi bole jar aha hu. Hamesha to ye chiraiya baat krte thakti nahi .. Aaj itni chup kaise hai??

Gauri: "Kuch nahi Omkaraji.. Hum bhi bahot Khush hai.. Hum prarthana krenge ki is ghar ki khushiya hamesha aise hi bni rahe..

Om: "& u know what tumhare shankarji tumhari baat jaroor manenge He said smiling.

Gauri: "Ab so jaiye , bahot raat ho gai hai

Om: "Ha ha Good night ..

He slept & she stand there watching him last time. She just take out her mobile & take picture of him while sleeping..

Gauri's POV: Hume nahi pata hume aapse door jane me itni taklif kyu ho rahi hai shayad pyar krne lage hai aapse, aapka dard humse dekha nahi jata, aap paresan hote hai to hamari saanse atk jati he.. hm nhi krna chahte aapse pyar fir kyu hume ye mehsoos ho raha he ke aapke bina sayad hum nahi ji payenge...

Par hme jana hoga kyoki aap humse pyar nahi krte. Galtfehmi bhalehi khatm ho gai ho pr hum aapki majboorika fayda uthake nhi reh sakte yha.. Hum apne patike sath pyar aur vishwas ke rishteme bandhna chahte the kisi majboorike nahi.. Hume jana hoga yhase, aapse door.. Maaf kijiyega bina bataye ja rahe hai.. Per hume jana hogo..

She woke up at 5 in morning, after freshening up pray to her shankarji to kept her Omkaraji & his family always safe & happy. She watch him sleeping peacefully. She placed a very soft kiss on his forehead & left OM.

Om woke up n shouted for his Glucose biscuit wali chai. But no one answer. He thought she must have in kitchen helping his bhabhi . She always want to help others .. his pagal chiraiya is really single Unique piece in whole world. He went down after bath. Saw his happy family chatting with each other , teasing shivika on their proposal.. He had best crazy family ever..

Dadi: "Are Om tu aa gaya ?? Gauri kha hai?? Hamesha to use khana bananeki aur khilane ki sbse jyada jaldi hoti hai.. Aaj kaha reh gai meri pyari bahu??

Om: "Are dadi ye to me puchne wala tha. Subhse use dund raha hu. I wanted to see her face in morning ... I mean kamre mebhi nhi dikhi , muze laga niche aa gyi hogi

Rudy: "Dekha dadi O kitna romantic ho gaye hai.. He wanted to see chulbul bhabhi's face first after waking up.. hahahaha..

Om: "Shut up rudra.. yhape nahi he to kha gai

All started to panic then because Gauri was not anywhere in the house. Om stand still in his position watching Shivay Rudra, Anika bhavya finding gauri everywhere.. He gone blank. After CCTV footage shown by Khanna they got to know that she left early in the morning..

Rudy cried out: "Matlb unhone sach kaha tha ki wo bhaiya bhabhi ko milake chali jaiengi.. Ye sab aapki galti hai O.. Aane unhe roka kyu nahi..

Shivay: "Matlb kya he tera Rudy?? Wo sirf muze aur Anika ko milane vaps aayi thi??

Rudy: "Ha menehi unhe manaya tha ki waps aajaye.. Aur ab wo chali gai rudy stared crying badly.. She was his sweet n cute bhabhi , his crime partner, his family member..

Dadi ,Anika ,Bhavya were shedding tears..

Shivay: "Aise kese ja skti hai wo.. bina muze bataye.. bade bhaiya bulati thi muzko aur apne bhai ko bina bataye use chodke chali gai.. Shivay's voice choking with his each & evry sentence.. She was his small packet bada dhamaka sister.. In just few days she has managed to get in heart of SSO. She was his angle. He was feeling emptiness in that house without chirrping of that cute chiraiya..

Shivay: "Om tune use jane kaise diya.. Agar tune use hurt kiya hai to tu usase abhi mafi mangega aur use waps le aayega.. jaha bhi wo gai hai vahase.. "

Om: " Wo chali gai Shivay... Wo chali gai.. His voice was unbearable.. He was just staring at nothing.. He was not feeling anything..

After watching om like this Shivay & all get scared.. It had affected him badly very badly ..

Shivay: "Wo tuze batake gai hai kya?? Wo kaha hai om?? Shivay asked him desperately..

Om: "Wo chali gai.. Me nahi keh paya usase.. Me nahi rok paya.. His voice was not audible.. He was breaking inside..

Shivay was shaking Om & asking him about her.. But he didn't speak a word.. He just left to his room..

2 days was passed & shivay was searching Gauri maniacally.. But she was just vanished.. Shivay was not able to see his brother in this phase.. He was totally broken.. not eating anything , locked himself from last 48 houes & SSO was not able to do anything.. After swear on the name of Gauri Shivay made him open the door.. Shivay was shaken seeing Omkara's state.. He was not alive.. just breathing for name sake.. His red rimmed eyes showns how much he had cried in last 2 day.. but now eyes were dried but there was no life in his brother's eyes.. Shivay was not able to see him like this, he was breaking himself watching his om like that..

Shivay: "Om tu chinta mat kar.. Gauri mil jayegi.. mai use kahise bhi dhundke launga.

Om: "Uski jaroorat nahi hai shivay He stated coldly..

Shivay: "Tu kya keh rha hai.. pagal to nahi hogaya..

Om: "Acha hua chali gai.. his voice was shaking again..

Shivay was in verge of cry: "Bas kr om.. kya keh raha.. apna bhai manta hai na muze.. kbtk apni fellings dabaega.. kbhi na kbhi batani padengi tuze.. Apna dard baher nikal om.. Aise ander hi ander ghutata rahega to kaise jiyega..

Om: "Ab jine ki koi vajah dikh nahi rhi shivay.. Bahot hurt kiya hai mene use.. usiki saja hai ye..

Shivay: "Aisa mat bol .. Tu jaan hai hmari.. baat kr mujse .. bta muze kya chal raha hai tere dilme.. muze jana hai... please.. mai tuze aise nahi dekh skata om.. mai toot rha hu.. WO meri behen thi jo bina boley chali gai aur tu yha hokar bhi yha nai hai.. please bol shivay was crying loudly now.. Rudy & anika at door were crying watching them..

Gauri has been taken all happiness with her... Her new family was incomplete without her...

Finally he broke down in Shivays's arms...

Om: "Me use deserve nahi krta shivay.. maine bahot taklif di hai use.. bahot bura bhala kha.. kabhi uspe trust nahi kiya.. She was innocent shivay.. she is so pure.. I am devil who treat her like trash.. but she was an angle , she took my all pain away.. saved my life risking her own life many times.. I m the one who threat her, accused her, scared her, hurt her each time.. When she left I realized i am feeling empty without her, I... love her shivay ,I love her so much, I just don't want live without her.. I want to see her when she is praying to her shankaji every morning, want to see her laughing like child, want to see her cute antics with Rudra, want see in play with her bhabhi n Sahil, I want to see her happy, I want to take away all the tears that she shade because of me.. I want to love her, cherish her.. but I can't. I cant shivay.. she is gone.. She will not forgive me & even she does I will not forgive myself... This is my punishment shivay, live life without love, live life without reason of my life... live life without my... wife..

Om just passed out after confessing to shivay.. Shivay thought he has to find his sister.. She is lifeline of his brother, she is happiness of this house, Anyhow she have to comeback to us, back to Om..

After a week Shivays gets photo n address stating they have seen that girl in Pune.. She was doing work in temple.. Watching photo he was so happy.. She was Gauri.. their Gauri.. without telling anyone He take a flight to meet her with Rudy..

There she was.. helping old woman to climbing staircase of temple.. But what happened to her.. She looked so weak, with pale features, lifeless eyes.. It seems she has no happiness inside her.. there was only body who was living but no life.. She was distributing Prasad to people in temple then..

Rudy: "Hume Prasad nahi dengi asked Rudy with tears in his eyes.. Shivay was just watching her.. She hold for 1 minute & then tightly hug both of them... Three of them were just trying to stop tears but is was getting difficult for them.

Shivay: "Itni nafart krti ho Omse , jo bina bataye chali aayi.. Nafrat jo bade bhai ke , devarke, behenoke aur dadi ke aur pure pariwarke pyarse bhi badi thi

Gauri: "Ye aap ka keh rahe hai bhaiya.. hum aap sbse bahot prem krte hai, aapki izzat krte hai bhot..

Shivay: "To kyo chod ke chali aayi gauri, pata hai tumhare jane ke baad ghar ki kya halat hui hai..??

Gauri: "Bhaiya hum aap sab par boz nahi banana chahte the.. hum bine rishteke kaise waha ruk jate

Shivay: "To ab Omke alawa tumhara hum sbse koi rishta nahi, us rakhi ki koi kimat nahi jo tumne muze bandhi thi rakshabandhanpe?? Ha.. bolo Gauri...

Gauri: "Aise nahi hai bhaiya... hume smjhane ki kosis kijiye..

Shivay: "Muze kuch nahi smjana gauri.. Kya tumhare dilme Om keliye itni Nafrat hai kit um baki sbka pyar bhul gai, agar kbhi muze dilse bhai mana hai to sach sach batao ???

Gauri: "E aap ka keh rahe hai bade bhaiya.. aap hmare bahi hai.. Aur omkaraji se ... unse hum nafrat nahi krte.. par wo shayad humse nafrat krte hai.. wo hume patni nahi mante aur kbhi manenge bhi nahi.. Hum is dard me nahi reh skte the ki hmare pati hme apni patni,.. apna sathi nhi mante..

She was crying bitterly now..

Shivay: "kya tum omse pyar karti ho??

Gauri: "hme nahi pata.. hum unse pyar nhi kr skte.. agar pyar ho gaya to hum kaise jiyenge unse alag rehkar... aur agar krte bhi hai to hume pta hai wo humse pyar nahi krte.. Aur hum unke upper boz nahi banana chahte. Jabardasti ka rista wo bhi ektarfa nahi nibhta bhaiya.

Shivay: "Aur mai kahu ke Wo tumse bohot pyar krta hai tooo

Gauri: "nahi ye mumkun nahi.. wo nhi kr skte... wo nfrt krte hai humse..

Shivay: "Wo tumse bahot pyar krta hai gauri... bahot jyada... Om kuch bol nahi pata pr uski aankhe sb kuch bol jati hai.

Gauri : "wo hume patni nahi mante na.. humse milne bhi aap our rudy bhaiya aaye he.. Wo nahi...

Shivay: " Om tut chukka hai tumhare jaane ke baad.. Saas to le raha hai pr zinda nahi hai.. khana nhi kha pata, baat nahi krta yhatk ki apne kmrese bahar bhi nahi nikalta

Gauri : "sayad aadat ho gai ho hmari unhe.. thik ho jayrnge thode dino me... she was crying after knowing his halat after she left him..

Shivay: "Bus ek bar vaps chalo gauri.. aisa na ho tumhare bina wo aise hi mar jaye...

Gauri: "ka keh rahe hai bade bhaiya... kuch nahi goga unhe.. unhe kuch ho gaya to hum jiteji mar jayemge.. She was missing him like hell.. she wanted to meet him right now.. wanted to hug him n take away all his pain..

Shivay: To chal rhi ho na.. She just nodded at him...

Omkara's Room

He was seating there blank, & suddenly he feels her around him.. It is dream he thought.. She will never come back to him.. She must have hate him to the core..

Gauri : "E ka haal banake rkha hai khudka ... Aur kamreka.. Haftabhar chale ka gaye hum aapne to karma pura tehesnehes kr diya hai..

Om: "Tum aagai.. tum vaps aagai.. his eyes started flowing, Voice started choking..

Gauri: "Ka krte aap ne kbhi roka nahi aur baki gharwale door jane nahi dete..

Om: "Bahot nafrat kri ho na muzse.. bahot dukh jo diye hai maine.. he said crying..

Gauri: " Nafrat to aap krte hai humse .. isliye kbhi rokte nahi.. She sounds so broken..

He was not able to see her like that, she is his angle., his wife... his Gauri... He just can't see her like that, His angle seems to be broken... Tears were running from their eyes.. He just reach to her & hug tightly..

Om: "I don't hate u gauri.. I love u .. I love u so much.. muze nahi pata kab tumse pyar ho gaya muze.. pr me nahi ji skta tumhare bina.. har saans adhuri lagti hai jab tum paas nahi hoti.. But mai tumhare layak nahi hu.. I don't deserve u.. tum bahot achhi ho aur mai bura hu.. bahot bura.. I treated u very badly.. Maaf krdo muze.. mai to tumhare mafi ke bhi kabil nahi, par please ho sake to muze maaf krna ha.. He was sobbing uncontrollable. He collapse on the floor.. He can't be selfish now. He have to set her free.. He is not good for her..

She had happy tears in her eyes.. He loves her.. Her jatadhari loves her so much.. She felt like she was the luckiest person on ther earth.. She kneel down to him taking him in embrace she said:

Gauri: "Hum bhi aapse bhot pyar krte hai omkaraji.. Nahi ji payenge aapke bina...

Jab bade bhaiya ne bataya aapke bareme to darr gaye the hum.. Aapki aur humara saanse alag nahi chalti.. Aap hai to hum hai, Aapko kuch ho gaya nahi to hum bhi mar ja...

He stopped her sentence by keeping fingers on her mouth...

OM: "Shhhu... Aisa kuch mat kho please.. Tum jaan ho meri.. U know I just want to hug u, kiss u & love u more n more...

She was blushing through her tears . Her pretty nose has become red due to crying but chicks go pink at his confession..

Gauri: "Chi chi.. kitne besaram chirote hai aap.. aapko saram nahi aati.. Pagal chirote kahike..

"It's Sharam not saram meri pagal chiraiya... & he laughed out loud & started kissing every inch of her face..

And its wrapup..

So how was it?? Do share ur views guys... It was my first attempt in writing.. So please ignore mistakes.. Love Shrenal & Rikara.. If u guys liked it I will try to write more..

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey...it was amazing..loved the way you penned Ri's bonding with the family members...it was more like ShivRi..and I loved them..you created the magic of RiKara's chemistry perfectly..do write more on RiKara.
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Originally posted by: tasnimrodela

Hey...it was amazing..loved the way you penned Ri's bonding with the family members...it was more like ShivRi..and I loved them..you created the magic of RiKara's chemistry perfectly..do write more on RiKara.


Actually i am big ShivRi Shipper after Rikara off course.. So i maintain it like that.. Thanku for Appreciation..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thank u so much..
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Thank u. means a lot..
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Haaye
You know I was just sighing after reading each scene ... This one is so emotional ... RiKara intact ... Obros Intact ... Dabang Gauri ... Finally Omkara ki bhi akkal thikaane aa gayi ... Chahiye kya aur show se 🥳 I wanted Gauri to leave ... I wanted Omkara to repent ... I wanted Obros to stand by Kara and do some damage repair ... I wanted Gauri to give a fair chance to her jatadhari ... This is how it should have been on the show ... Never the less, we have your story Tinu ... It is powerpact, emotional, family oriented and romantic all in the same package ... Thank you for giving such a sensible misunderstanding closure and with that ... I say welcome to the RiKara writers gang 🤗 I am Poorva
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Originally posted by: _PrincessPooru_

Haaye

You know I was just sighing after reading each scene ... This one is so emotional ... RiKara intact ... Obros Intact ... Dabang Gauri ... Finally Omkara ki bhi akkal thikaane aa gayi ... Chahiye kya aur show se 🥳 I wanted Gauri to leave ... I wanted Omkara to repent ... I wanted Obros to stand by Kara and do some damage repair ... I wanted Gauri to give a fair chance to her jatadhari ... This is how it should have been on the show ... Never the less, we have your story Tinu ... It is powerpact, emotional, family oriented and romantic all in the same package ... Thank you for giving such a sensible misunderstanding closure and with that ... I say welcome to the RiKara writers gang 🤗 I am Poorva


Hey Poorva we have talked earlier.. My acc Ashuz123 caught with some problem. I am big fan of ur writings & u r the one who inspired me to write.. Thanku for comment. I was actually waiting for u to read. Now i am so happy..😊 My actual name is Ashwini u can call me ashu or Tinu anything
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Posted: 8 years ago
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awesome update...loving it to the core...seeing their journey from past till the present where they reached now...it seems to me like after loong night, subha honay ko hay :)...
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Originally posted by: perfictionist

awesome update...loving it to the core...seeing their journey from past till the present where they reached now...it seems to me like after loong night, subha honay ko hay :)...


Thanku for lovely comment..😊
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Such a sweet yet intense story...beautifully expressed
RiKara writers rock 😊

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