RiKara SS - PREET - EPISODE TWO UPDATED Pg NINE - Page 6

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Posted: 7 years ago
#51
Yup ... Will send you my index 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: Ms.Lizzie

Awesome

Loved Gauri character

Thank you 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: _era_

Woah just awesome ...

Been waiting for this since ages...
Only yesterday did I mention about this in your birthday thread...
Thanks for updating ...
Now keep the updates coming soon...I can't wait any longer to know what happens next...
Lots of Jappis. ...

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Thank you so much ...
I am updating the second episode today
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: tasnimrodela

Yippie..OS turned into SS..I was so excited reading the teaser..but after reading the first chappy seems like it's going to be hard to wait for the next updates...Omkara is guilty for misjudging her..and he wants her to leave his life for her betterment..the escapist in him is scared to commit to a relation like marriage..but our dabang chiraiyya bhi har manne walo mein se nehi hain...she'll not let them fall apart...look at the girl..how's she demanding a child..all she want is to stay with him...and she wants to carry his baby in her womb...her characterisation to too strong here...waiting for Omkara to fulfill his wife's demand...iss bar irade acche hain behna..all I want is MommyRi and DaddyKara..let's see how she convince her jatadhaari...excited for the upcoming convo..continue soonish behnaaa...

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Yes OS turned into SS because my brain has elaborated on it a lot ... Now that the foggy air of misunderstandings is clear ... Its their real selves resurfacing ... They are made for each other isiliye toh dabang gauri itni aasaani se apni shaadi pe give up nahi karne wali ... Previously confessed that her Shankarji has sent a particular Jatadhari in her life, she is going to make it work WHAT COME MAY ... Yes she is way to strong for him right now ... But she is GKS ... Mommy Ri and Daddy Kara have some time to go and about what's upcoming ... I have Naari shakti zindabad, OmRu and RiKara Of course 😉
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Posted: 7 years ago
#55
This is so exciting...
M.liking this determined Gauri
Well written
Continue soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: coolhi1988

This is so exciting...

M.liking this determined Gauri
Well written
Continue soon
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Yes Gauri is determined here ... A lot of Dabang Giri on its way
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Daaamn you have to continue
That was intense
Him finding out the truth , Gauri demanding a child
can't wait to see what will happen next
who will give in? Who will win?
Gauri wants to show him that he is the only man with a right to father her children, she wants to gift him a family, she wants to show him that for her this marriage is very real and she will always life as his wife


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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: GoWithTheRhythm

Daaamn you have to continue

That was intense
Him finding out the truth , Gauri demanding a child
can't wait to see what will happen next
who will give in? Who will win?
Gauri wants to show him that he is the only man with a right to father her children, she wants to gift him a family, she wants to show him that for her this marriage is very real and she will always life as his wife



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You got my concept absolutely right ... This one is having intense RiKara ...
Updating in a few minutes
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Posted: 7 years ago
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EPISODE TWO


"Dadi aapki laadli chirraiyya paagal ho gayi hai ... sab aapki wajah se ... aap hi ne sarr pe chadhaake rakha hai ... aur banaake khilaaiye halwa, kheer ... gulaab jaamun ... Omkara was ranting.

"Chup khottey biwi hai Teri ... Dadi interrupted.

"Achha bata kaunsi pagalpanti kardi ab usne? Swag se karenge swwagat sunke phir dance Karna shuru kar diya kya? Dadi started laughing.

"Keh rahi hain maa banna chahti hai ... mujhse bachha chahiye usse. Omkara said stressfully.

"Arre waah tab toh uske liye soth ke ladoo aur nimboo ka achaar banana padega. Dadi said thoughtfully.

"This is not funny Dadi ... Main usse keh raha hoon ke mujhse alag ho jaaye aur woh humaare future ke baare mein soch rahi hai. Omkara was getting tired of this now.

"Kyonki woh samajhdaar hai aur tu bandar! Dadi said lightly smacking his head.

"Parr main yeh nahi chahta Dadi ... woh meri wajah se bohot pareshaan Hui hai ... Maine kya kuch nahi kaha usse. Omkara recalled how he had insulted Gauri right after marrying her.

"Om puttar itna galat mat soch ... jab ishq dil ke darwaaze pe dastak de naa toh usse aise dafaa nahi karte ... khush kismat hai tu ... Gauri tujhe dusra mauka de rahi hai, woh tere saath zindagi bitana chahti hai ... ab uska dil mat dukhana.

A little wrecked a little tensed Omkara sat with his head in his hands.

"Are you sure you want to do this Gauri? Pregnancy koi bachho ka khel nahi hai. Jahnvi said to her with a relatable concern.

"Haan maa hum suorre hai ... hum Omkaraji ke bachhe ki maa banna chahte hai. Gauri said in a confident style.
"Sochlo Gauri ... agar tum Om se alag hona chahti ho toh ho sakti ho I will support you. Jahnvi said not wanting Gauri to live in a loveless marriage like her own.

"Omkaraji humaare pati hai ... hum unko chhodke kahj nahi jaaenge maa ... unke pass hi rahenge. Gauri said something that she always says.

"Tumhara pati apni galtiyaan toh samajh chuka hai lekin apni responsibility samajhna nahi chahta ... tumse behtar tareeke se jaanti hoon main usse Gauri. The mother in Jahnvi spoke.

"Hum itna jaante hain ke bhale hi unhone humme galat samjha ... unhone kabhi humme chot nahi pohochne di ... bohot dard diya lekin humaare zakhmo par marham bhi lagaya. Gauri said with tears in her eyes.

"Kya tumhe lagta hai ke Om yeh marriage deserve karta hai? Janhvi asked keep in a hand on her shoulder.

"Kitne logo se ladke unhone humaari jaan bachaai ... ab unko bhi toh pata chale ke unka pala bhi Bareilly ki chirraiyya se pada hai!... Itni aasaani se thodi naa peecha chodenge. Gauri said tightly hugging her Mother In Law

Omkara was silently playing with the water of the pool when Rudra sat beside him.

"Itna pareshaan ho rahe ho O. Rudra said keeping a hand on his shoulder.

"Main nahi chahta ke woh mujhe apna pati kahe aur woh mere bachhe ki maa banna chahti hai. Omkara said with a baffled expression.

"Haan toh theek hi hai naa ... aapke bachhe ki maa nahi banegi toh kiske bachhe ki maa banegi. Rudra asked scratching his head.

"Its not funny Rudra ... Mujhe samajh mein nahi aa raha ke main uska kya karu ... usse kya kahu... Omkara said with a frown.

"Aap unka dhyaan rakho ... unke pass raho ... unse romance Karo lekin please unse deep meaningful baatein mat karna. Rudra pouted.

"I have messed it up Rudra ... Its not that simple. Omkara became sad.

"Simple si baat toh yeh hai ke aapne unse shaadi ki aur woh humaare ghar ka hissa hai kyonki aap unhe yahaa lekar aaye thhe. Rudra suddenly became serious.

"Mera Ru toh bohot bada ho gaya hai ... bohot kuch samajhne laga hai. Omkara said keeping a hand on his head.

"Zyada kuch nahi jaanta main ... mujhe bass itna pata hai ke SACH MEIN DHAL JAAENGE KISSE DIL SE JUDD JAANE KE BAAD ... ISHQ PE HOGA YAQEEN, ISHQ HO JAANE KE BAAD.

Omkara looked at Rudra in disbelief realizing the gravity of his own words.

"Tu sachme bohot bada ho gaya hai Rudra.

"Nahi nahi O ... bada toh main tabb ho jaaunga jab iss ghar mein ek Capital O ka cute sa Small o aaega. Rudy showed him Anika's logic sign and Omkara chuckled.

"Meri tarah tu bhi pregnant ho jaaegi toh kitna mazaa aaega naa Gauri. Anika clapped her hands excitedly.

"Haan bhaujaai ... bahut majaa aaega ... do do chirautey ya chirraiyya ... ghar mein kitni raunak hogi. Gauri smiled making her sit on the bed.

"Humna shopping karne bhi jaaenge unke liye. Anika said excitedly.

"Haan pehle aap doctor ke pass jaaengi. Gauri said covering her with a duvet.

"Tujhe bhi doctor ke pass le jaaungi ... Tu humme woh khidkitod khushkhabri toh suna. Anika spoke while munching chips.

"Haan bhaujaai ... humaare nandi bail maan jaaye bass ... Gauri sighed.

"Woh bhi maan jaaega Gauri ... agar woh akdu hai toh to bhi toh dabang hai na ... bohot sahi faisla liya hai tunne.

Omkara entered the room when she was busy folding clothes. He looked at her and resolved to talk to her ... to have the conversation that he had planned in his head.

"Gauri ... please meri baat suno. Omkara requested.

"Ji kahiye naa. Gauri looked at him.

"Yeh sab kyon kar rahi ho ... yeh shaadi, pregnancy ...

"Hum aapko ek mauka Dena chahte hai ... Shankarji ne bheja hai aapko humaare liye ... Hum dono ko saath rehna chaahiye ... iss shaadi ko mauka dena chahiye. Gauri held his hand in her own.

"Khaamakha zidd kar rahi ho tum. Omkara was growing anxious.

"Aapse kaisi zidd ... koi aur baat hoti toh hum ek jhaap lagaake samjha bhi dete ... aapse toh hum pyaar karne lage hai ... She smiled hopeless.

"Kyon.

"Jaan bachaai hai aapne humaari ... humesha apne paas rakha ... hifazat ki. Hum bhi aapko bachana chahte hai ... thodi khushi dena chahte hai. She confessed.

"Ehsaan nahi maanga hai maine tumse ... mujhe mere haal par chhod kyon nahi deti ... chali kyon nahi jaati ... itna sab kuch kyon kar rahi ho? He jerked off her hand and yelled.

"Aapke liye toh hum kuch bhi kar sakte hai Omkaraji...

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