Maa Da Ladla Bigaad Gaya(O'Bros OS Ft Pinky)Part 3 pg7

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Shivaay is now 33 years old but still unmarried and everyone is wondering why he is still unmarried. OmRu came to a conclusion that their brother has changed his orientation. What happens when Pinky hears about the conclusion. What will be her reaction?


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Posted: 8 years ago
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1-Why was Shivaay smiling?

Please, I'm not writing this to hurt anyone's feelings but it's written for fun.Sorry if anyone gets hurt.Please, forgive me.

Shivaay Singh Oberoi, a young man who is in his early 30s. He was reading a newspaper called Economics Times. Checking the charts which tell about the growth of the products, sells, stocks etc. He was sipping his kali coffee called Espresso.

He was one of the successful personalities in the Indian business world.His name was taken in the lips of many women in the upper elite class. Many women will kill each other or probably create 3rd World War for this uncanny chromatic blue eyed angry young man. His marriage is recently the talk of the town for many days. He never gave a f**k about the gossips of the magazines and probably unnecessary flamboyant gossips and talks of the society.

Shivaay has always been all-rounder since childhood.Be it in study or sports, he excelled in everything. But in the matter of girls, he seems to throw a misogyny attitude but it was all his facade to stay away from the venomous nagins like Ragini Malhotra, another upper psycho class elite.Keyword psycho. Shivaay has maintained his distance from girls forever. He literally had kept girls an arm away from him in his office.

He was reading about something in the newspaper and smiling. His brothers Omru aka Omkara and Rudra saw this and find it weird. For a perfectionist like Shivaay, it's a blue moon occurrence to find him smiling while reading a newspaper.

OmRu went to him.
Ru smilingly like a tease, spoke to Shivaay,"Bhaiya why are you smiling in the morning while reading the newspaper?"

Shivaay gave them a confused look.

"Shivaay, he means to say that it's rare for you to smile while reading a newspaper." Om adjusted Ru's words while cutting him off from speaking further.

"WHAT!" He almost shouted but composed himself.

"Gu--Guys! I..I'm a.aa norm..mal human being. It's okay if I laugh while reading at a newspaper. Do you think I am some alien?"Shivaay replied them with a stuttering tone with a sharp glare.

Saying this he left without the newspaper.

OmRu are now interested what intersting did Shivaay saw that he started smiling like a love sick puppy.

They went to the newspaper and saw something which scared the hell out of them.

"OOO! Hum loot gaye!!!!!!!Barbad hogaye!!!!!!Bhagwan Ne Humari Kismat mein EK Bhabi nahin likhe hain."

Rudra started his fake crying but what he said, Om couldn't get it.

He took the magazine from Rudra's hand and saw the pic.

A man in his early 30s like Shivaay was wearing a black suit and posing a pose in the photo and the photo was covered with tiny heart shaped paper glued to it where many love letters, shayari and I Love You's were written.

Om was shocked. He couldn't believe what he saw. Shivaay keeping love notes in a magazine and he couldn't believe it.

A loud choruses of "OM MY MATA" echoed from the hall. The both brothers ran in the direction of the loud gasp.

I made a three shots.
I'll update next part tomorrow night.
Fun fact:-I wrote it in uni's computer again while listening tosome item numbers of Dabbang etc.Yup need to keep my ear on librarian's footsteps and need to keep an sharp eye on other people to
How's it?
Goodnight
Feeling Sleepy
Edited by CrzyPulviophile - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Interesting
Reading the title
I thought it to be a Rikara story
As Rudra was always after om with chulbul
Maa Da ladla bigad Gaya

But seeing this concept on Shivaay
And pinky reaction too
Cuz jhnvi never gave any reaction
To Omkara's closeness to chulbul
Here pinky will do OMM
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow superb a grt twist continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Haha 😆 waiting for the concept
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Posted: 8 years ago
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👏 👏 pinky ki to Sach main OMM ho gayer... hilarious 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Ha8..this was fun.
Looking forward to part 2
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome update.
Loved it.
That was really so funny...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hahaha very funnny
I love Rudy, he always misses up, and then om follows him even though he calls him dumbell.
Very nice first chapter
Very eager to know pinkys reaction, it would be halirius
Excited
Update soon
Much love!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hahahaha this is very interesting
i wanna read more
plzz countinue soon
thanks for the pm

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