Shivika TS : Slightly Wicked : Part Three : Page One : 20.Oct.2017

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MITHMA99

@MITHMA99

Beginner

Posted: 7 years ago

#81

Waiting for this update😊

Loved the ending

Plz write an epilogue for the story

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Fariba

@Faariibaa

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Posted: 7 years ago

#82

Hands down one of the best stories so far!
idk why it felt so real and interesting, everything in it was amazing!
sad that it had to end here, wish you would write a sequel ti this, the shivika part :(

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bworm

@bworm

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#83

Awesome ending. Loved your characters.

Am a Mary Balogh fan...so the title pulled me in.

But enjoyed this a lot.

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ILoveNature

@ILoveNature

Sparkler

Posted: 7 years ago

#84

Love it and waiting for Rikara part desperately, You know jab yeh story read kar rahi thi tho I wanted to know Rikara story more, I was reading to know them more 😳 Omkara character interest me the most(Maybe beacuse I am his fan😛) Third part me tho uff zalim kar gussa maar hi dala, Omkara want gauri to know he is their tho protect her❤️ but jab end hone wali thi tho upset hi hogyi, yese kese Rikara ka complete story nahi aaya😭 But I can understand yeh Shivika story hai na but I was going to ask you to write Rikara story separately, But end me you made me so happy with your note🤗 Love you lazy you are the best🤗

Edited by Unisha123 - 7 years ago

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Rohini

@ithihaas

Trailblazer

Posted: 7 years ago

#85

The last part was lovely...The depth of Shivika relationship is the high light of the story...

It was really a very well told story...

Thanks for writing a different story and characterizations... though the premise was completely different, the bond shared by each of characters is same...that's what made the story relatable...

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Srivalli

@Srivalli.t

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#86

Awesome update!!

Loved it..

Anika has totally turned Khanna to her side..

N Khanna is soo funny..

Poor shivaay was so shocked to see him like that n was so embarrassed when anika talked about his Micky boxers..that was hilarious..

Poor shivaay, anika slapped him but he was happy as he got to love her..

All r teasing him but he is happy seeing her happiness..

Loved om n Rudra advise to their dear Bhabha..

Anika is pregnant n both shivika r so excited..

Omg, scared to see this new n completely different side of om..

Poor guri is so shaken with his behaviour..

Very excited for rikara sequel..

Plz continue soon..

Very well written.

Enjoyed reading this..

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panjami

@panjami

Explorer

Posted: 7 years ago

#87

Just found this interesting piece of work...and i just read it in a go..I was there with them whole the while.

I seriously dont have words..

How you come up with such a briliant plot ...And u did it really well..So much of love...

At first i was really angry on shivay felt like he is forcing her to love him, taking advantage of her situation..Then i doubt how come annika cant love him...I wanted her to love him more than he loves her...Om was truly om..Loved him tooo...Loved it how annika never been angry on khanna even when they troubled her to the core...

U know what...i loved rudy more...He is my favourate here

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Nohsin10

@Nohsin10

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#88

Fantastic update

Totally loved it

Finally Annika forgive him

Poor gauri she was so scared

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alinaza

@alinaza

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Posted: 7 years ago

#89

I loved loved LOVED this story!! My favourties were absolutely Khannaji and Rudra - they killed it in every scene lol.

I truly enjoyed that the Oberoi brothers are so unapologetic about their family business of crime. No redemption was necessary, because it would have taken away from the essence of the characters that you had sketched. Shivaay and Anika were hilariously cute as individuals and as a couple. You made a gangster so loveable that I could not help but root and support Shivaay all the way:)

Wow, Omkara Singh Oberoi was a revelation. Om is the sweet, understanding, reasonable and logical brother. To see him at the end, ruthless and hot-bloodedly practical was a shock to the system. It made me wonder how many layers and unseen facets does this Oberoi brother have. And just what he would be prepared to do to protect his Gauri.

I cannot wait for Om and Gauri's story. I hope this Gauri has DBO's Gauri's grit, practicality and wide-moral compass that will allow her to fall for this implacable Omkara. Please, please write it as a full length story (if you can) like Slightly Wicked. It would be amazing like this incredible story:)

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Aishwarya2706

@Aishwarya2706

Beginner

Posted: 7 years ago

#90

Originally posted by: book.worm
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Hello

I am silent reader to your page. I almost read all your stories I really loved all your stories. I really loved Shivaay, Omkara and Rudra in "Slightly Wicked". I just don't know what to say i am actually speechless.

The main purpose of writing this message was that i really liked the twist in last part of Om and Gauri. I am impatiently waiting for your "Slightly Dangerous". So i just wanted to ask you when are you going to post that story. Please post it as soon as possible. I really cant wait to read it .

Take care dear. Bye.

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