Omkara drabble - Broken - Page 2

Originally posted by: Patharsitara

So beautiful and amazing. You are the one of the best writer on forum. No doubt about it.

Okay..so let's start...I finished reading it within 10-12 minutes of posting..but I couldn't gather the right words to say something...you know, I can't explain my feelings in words..yeh meri sabse badi kamzoori hain..but after reading this for the second time, I thought you really deserve a warm jhappi for writing this...yeah, indeed it was dark..but I can see a ray of hope...I can see a bright roshni jo bohot jald iss andhere ko mita dega...it's actually something that described Omkara's journey with his one and only companion -"Darkness"...and it's the same thing which gave the vibes ki uski zindegi ke woh kaali raatein bohot jald apni subha se milne wali hain... that's all I could say..I told you ki main nehi samjha pati apni feelings...but I think you understood what I'm trying to say...haha..sorry for bothering you with my bekaar ki bakbak...but I'll suggest you to continue this if time permits...

Hey sakura this is pure sumthing two broken soul healing each other .. this is not dark but light of hope !! 😊

awesome shot Yar...

Saku🤗
Res

Unress

Yo.Long time no see.
Woah.This is something else.I wouldn't say it was dark but it definitely promised a future that would be far away from the word 'darkness'.There was the hope glimmering behind the uncertainty that enveloved Ri nd O.
Despite my dislike for the duo,I could easily connect to the Ri nd O you presented as always.
I don't know if its just me but it felt a bit different than your normal style.Definitely a good different, though.Those Metaphors ,words twisted around to your way were just .Wow.And the crackling tension and chemistry between them,I could feel it bro.
Fabulous piece !!

Originally posted by: Animagus_Sirius

Saku🤗
Res

This is wonderful. He is opening up and talking to her, which is very rare case in Omkara's life. I agreed to every single word Gauri said.

Beautifully written sakura...you described it really beautifully dear and love gauri' words to omkara...her words are like andhere ko andhera nahi roshni mita sakti hai...and here are two broken souls and hopefully try to heal each other if you are going to cntnue this...plz cntnue this if time permits

Originally posted by: Sakura24

Anshi🤗

How are u ??

Nd edited on pg 2

beautiful and amazing 👏👏