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Lasya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: Javeria3991
Interesting start
Looking forward to read more

Originally posted by: Priya_Iyer
Interesting preface. Would love to read more.

Originally posted by: maivelli
Waiting

Thanks a lot for the encouragement 😃

Edited by ...Dexterity... - 8 years ago

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Lasya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: arshifansiri
Awesome concept.
Loved it.
Would love to read more.
Eagerly waiting for the update.

Thank you dear ! Glad you loved it 😉

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Srivalli

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Posted: 8 years ago

#23

Awesome update.

Loved it.

Very well written.

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Lasya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: Shraddhadikshit
Wow... would love to read more & it's very catchy too. If possible please do pm the updates...

Thanks dear 😊

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Lasya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: vrindagupta
I just loved shekar
Even Bhavya knows him
Everyone is impressed with him
Except for Omkara

I can understand Gauri being angry on Shekar
But why is he here in Mumbai to meet Gauri
That too on her father's barsi

Well glad he is here
Hope Omkara finds in him
To talk to Gauri

Waiting eagerly to read more
Update soon

Shekhar is here for a reason. You would be knowing that in the next update which should be out soon.😉

Thanks for reading dear 😃

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Lasya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: perfictionist
wow!!! great start! Captain Shekhar sounds very interesting! And Gauri's childhood friend who also seems to care for her.. Omkara and his curt reactions are hilarious! he is so utterly lost and confused😆 atleast he is putting in the effort, trying to seek her out and clear the air!
Great start! please update soon👏

Thanks buddy . Will update soon 😃