Shivika TS: In Your Arms | Chapter 3 (last) - pg 16

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Mushfika

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Posted: 8 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: sosweetsumi
loved it
hopefully anika dont have got torture this torture in serial
please do continue
bye sumi

@Red bold: Honestly, I would love to see Anika getting tortured because that would mean we get to see the protective side of SSO amid all these 'raita'😉😆

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Mushfika

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Posted: 8 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: chek
Please continue!! It's so beautiful!:3 Please let Shivaay somehow know about Vikram and Anika's bruise:)

Thank you! 😳

And Sure thing 😉

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bworm

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Posted: 8 years ago

#33

Nice OS.

We definitely need part 2 for this.

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Mushfika

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Posted: 8 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: vriddhi
hey!!
it's fabulous!!
superb yaar... really amazing...
plzz continue soon... really looking forward to read it and know how they both accept the fact that they love each other and so they so they can go to any extent to protect each other... eagerly waiting for another update... u r an amazing writer...
I just loved the way they care for each other and understand each other, console each other and so the way shivaay made annika comfortable... it's beautiful!!

Aww you brought tears to my eyes. Give me a second...*runs to the washroom to fix eyeliner* 😆

Hi!😳

Give me a hug, you so sweet. I'm so happy I was able to pull off those emotions from you through this OS, it really means a lot! Thank you for all the support. Extremely glad you liked it☺️

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Amyra

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Posted: 8 years ago

#35

I loved the way you described Shivaay's emotions.. .
And then the Scene after that - ShiVika cuddled under the stars...So Beautifulll ... It's a far fetched dream to see this scene on The Show. ...
Do Continue, Would love to see How Shivaay kicks out Vikram from Their Life !!!

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moon99

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Posted: 8 years ago

#36

Its just beautiful!

The emotions that come across just leave me in awe! 😳

Really excited to read more of your work! 😃

Loads of love,
- Sims 🤗

P.S Thanks for the PM! 😛

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Mushfika

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Posted: 8 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: RushaSen
Hello Mushfika!!😳
It's so so beautiful!!The way they care for each other!! It was amazing! Please continue it..😃

Update soon!

Love,
Rusha

Hey Rusha! Really glad you found it beautiful and worthy enough to comment on 😳

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Mushfika

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Posted: 8 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: ithihaas
This is really awesome yaar.
It's one of the best OS for the recent situation Shivika have landed themselves in.
I do really appreciate if you could continue this story. What I loved was how Shivaay was only worried about Annika and not pressing her for details of her nightmares. He only wanted her to soothe her down. He can find out the details later on.

@Red bold:

That's a huge compliment for me, I'm flattered😳

@blue bold: Thank you for pointing it out. I had put special attention to portray this fact about Shivay and I'm pleased to know you have relished it.

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Mushfika

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Posted: 8 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: nikki.171
Like hell, will I back down without demanding - fine, requesting - for a continuation of this.

I think you've achieved what you were trying to do here. I felt both Shivaay and Annika's feelings and I could see with clarity what each of them were going. Whether it was Annika's fear, Shivaay's anger, Annika's wonderment at their poolside moment as if everything that happened never happened...if you now what I mean... Wait, of course you do! You've showed that beautifully in your writing. All the motions were perfectly portrayed while staying true to both of ShivIka's nature.

Please do go through with a part 2, I can't wait to read already.

One sec...let me compose myself... *wipes tears*

Okay😳

Thank you for making me feel so accomplished as a writer. You don't know how much those words mean to me. Also, you taking out the time from your busy schedule to write all those is much appreciated. 🤗

PS: @Red bold: I see what you did there 🤣

PPS: Will def think about making it a TS... hopefully my brain and body cooperates because right now i'm dead with fatigue

Edited by Mushfika - 8 years ago